AAJKAL AAP KE DEEDAAR KAHAAN MILTE HAIN .........HASAN

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Faiz  o  Iqbal  ke   ash'aar  kahaaN  milte  haiN ,
Woh  khayalaat , wo  afkaar   kahaaN  milte  haiN

Hum  ghareeboN  se to mat kariye  na  milne  ka  gila,
Aajkal   aapke   deedaar   kahaaN   milte   haiN
  
Apne  matlab  ke  liye   tode  banaaye  rishtay ,
Aap  se 'saheb - e - kirdaar'  kahaan  milte  haiN

Dosti  ho  ki  adaawat ,  thha  saleeqa  sab  meiN,
Abb  wo  aamaal  ke   me'yaar  kahaan  milte  haiN
 
Tangdasti  meiN  bhi  phaila  na  kanbhi  dast - e - talab,
Paikar - e - sabr,  wo  khuddaar  kahaaN   milte  haiN

Lucknow , mere  watan , itna  bata  de   mujhko ,
Teri  tahzeeb  ke  aasaar   kahaan  milte  haiN

Qatl-o-ghaarat hai, ghutalay , kahiiN  dahshat - gardi ,
Abb  'Hasan'  achchhe  samachaar  kahaan  milte  haiN




Simple translation of uncommon Urdu words used in the Ghazal:       Afkaar =Thoughts/vichaar ; sahib-e-kirdaar= charitrawaan/man of character ;    Aamaal = behaviour ; Me'yaar = standards ; Tangdasti = tight hand / gharibi ;   Dast-e-talab = maangne ko haath phailaana ; Paikar-e-sabr=embodiment of patience ; khuddaar = self-respecting ; Aasaar = remains / awashesh/signs
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2011, 05:33:46 AM »
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Bahut khoob Hasan ji
Mujhe yaad hai. apne apna vaada poora kar diya. bahut khoob.
teri tahjeeb ke aasaar kahaan milte hai. vah vah..
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«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2011, 05:35:42 AM »
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Simple translation of uncommon Urdu words used in the Ghazal:       Afkaar =Thoughts/vichaar ; sahib-e-kirdaar= charitrawaan/man of character ;    Aamaal = behaviour ; Me'yaar = standards ; Tangdasti = tight hand / gharibi ;   Dast-e-talab = maangne ko haath phailaana ; Paikar-e-sabr=embodiment of patience ; khuddaar = self-respecting ; Aasaar = remains / awashesh/signs
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«Reply #3 on: October 15, 2011, 05:37:48 AM »
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Thanx,mkv ji.Itne quick response ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2011, 05:50:36 AM »
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bahut achi ghazal Hasan sahab--

Last ke aashaar hume behad pasand aaye

daad daad bahot saari daad kubool karen--

muskurate rahen
khus rahen
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«Reply #5 on: October 15, 2011, 06:41:46 AM »
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siddqui sahab bahut maqbool najrana pesh kiya hai ,,,,tah-e-dil daad haizir hai ,,,,sabhi aasaar umda hain ...likhte rahiyeeeeeeee,,,,,,
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«Reply #6 on: October 15, 2011, 07:08:44 AM »
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shaandaar gazal dili mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #7 on: October 15, 2011, 08:00:30 AM »
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siddiqui ji bAHUT KHOOB.
BAHUT SUNDER RACHNA.
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«Reply #8 on: October 15, 2011, 09:31:36 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah waah bahut khoob kya khoob
kaha hai..Waakai Lucknow kee tahzeeb
ke aasaar bahut kam milte hain..

Sabhi she'r bahut achchhe hain.

Dili daad aur dher saaree shubkaamnaayen
hamaaree or se qubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
  
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«Reply #9 on: October 15, 2011, 10:53:02 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab kia gazab ki gazal se nawaaza hai .. Masha Allaah
behad umdaa aur dilfareb ahsaas O khayaaloN ko umdaa
lafzi jamaa diya hai janab... bahut khoob... Usual Smile 

Aik aik ashaar hazaaroN daad ke kabil hai ... Usual Smile
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
        


Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 15, 2011, 05:22:18 AM
Faiz  o  Iqbal  ke   ash'aar  kahaaN  milte  haiN ,
Woh  khayalaat , wo  afkaar   kahaaN  milte  haiN

Bahut khoob janab... behad achcha matla kahaa hai.. Usual Smile         

Hum  ghareeboN  se to mat kariye  na  milne  ka  gila,
Aajkal   aapke   deedaar   kahaaN   milte   haiN
   
Waah waah waah janab, kia kahne behad gazab ka sher
kaha hai daad daad daad.. Bahut umdaa.         

Apne  matlab  ke  liye   tode  banaaye  rishtay ,
Aap  se 'saheb - e - kirdaar'  kahaan  milte  haiN

Kia kahne janab... gazab ke tanziyaa khayaal
hai aapke.. bahut khoob.. Usual Smile         

Dosti  ho  ki  adaawat ,  thha  saleeqa  sab  meiN,
Abb  wo  aamaal  ke   me'yaar  kahaan  milte  haiN
 
Masha Allaah bahut khoob .. beshak sahiN farmaya
aapne.. bahut umdaa daad daad daad.. Usual Smile         

Tangdasti  meiN  bhi  phaila  na  kanbhi  dast - e - talab,
Paikar - e - sabr,  wo  khuddaar  kahaaN   milte  haiN

Waah janab bahut khoob...           

Lucknow , mere  watan , itna  bata  de   mujhko ,
Teri  tahzeeb  ke  aasaar   kahaan  milte  haiN

Waah waah janab .. Masha Allaah Lucknawi tehzeeb
ke aasaar shayad hi kahiN ho .. beshak Lucknaw si tehzeeb kahi aur
nahi hai... bahut khoob.. daad         

Qatl-o-ghaarat hai, ghutalay , kahiiN  dahshat - gardi ,
Abb  'Hasan'  achchhe  samachaar  kahaan  milte  haiN

Kia kahne Siddique Sahaab bahut khoob janab..
Behad pur asar aur umdaa khayaal ko Maqte meiN anjam diyaa aapne..

Waise puri kalaam ke sabhi khayaal aur gehrai ki tah kafi umda rahi
Is khub gazal par dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         

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«Reply #10 on: October 15, 2011, 01:51:08 PM »
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Bahut Hi Khoob Siddiqui Saheb BAhut Khoob

Dil Se Daad Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 15, 2011, 05:22:28 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 15, 2011, 05:22:18 AM
Faiz  o  Iqbal  ke   ash'aar  kahaaN  milte  haiN ,
Woh  khayalaat , wo  afkaar   kahaaN  milte  haiN

Hum  ghareeboN  se to mat kariye  na  milne  ka  gila,
Aajkal   aapke   deedaar   kahaaN   milte   haiN
   
Apne  matlab  ke  liye   tode  banaaye  rishtay ,
Aap  se 'saheb - e - kirdaar'  kahaan  milte  haiN

Dosti  ho  ki  adaawat ,  thha  saleeqa  sab  meiN,
Abb  wo  aamaal  ke   me'yaar  kahaan  milte  haiN
 
Tangdasti  meiN  bhi  phaila  na  kanbhi  dast - e - talab,
Paikar - e - sabr,  wo  khuddaar  kahaaN   milte  haiN

Lucknow , mere  watan , itna  bata  de   mujhko ,
Teri  tahzeeb  ke  aasaar   kahaan  milte  haiN

Qatl-o-ghaarat hai, ghutalay , kahiiN  dahshat - gardi ,
Abb  'Hasan'  achchhe  samachaar  kahaan  milte  haiN




Siddiqui ji,

Bahut umda ashaar hai apke. Wah! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 16, 2011, 05:10:18 AM »
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sarfira ji,aapko ashaar pasand aaye,hausla afzai ki. bahut mamnoon hoon aaapka.HASAN
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«Reply #13 on: October 16, 2011, 07:25:12 AM »
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Hasan Sahab
Apne jo urdu ke words/ with meaning likhe hai vo na janne valo ke liye bahut faydemand honge.
Hum lucknow vale apne paas kuch nahi rakhte. Hame apni fikra kaha. kyo janab sahi kaha na.."Pahle aap"
Shan-o-shahkat ka shahar...
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«Reply #14 on: October 16, 2011, 08:05:30 AM »
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sunildehgawani ji,bahut shukrguzaar hoon ki aap meri tooti phooti koshishon ko bahut khuloos ke saath dekhte aur meri hausla afzai karte hain.yaqeen jaaniy bahut haimmat milti hai jab doston se aise tabsire milte hain.Bahut mamnoon hoon aapka.khush rahiye
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