AAJKAL AAP KE DEEDAAR KAHAAN MILTE HAIN .........HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 15, 2011, 05:22:18 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 16, 2011, 08:30:35 AM »
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mkv ji,aapki tahreer ka shukriya.Sahi farmaaya aap ne.kuchh uncommon words ke aasaan meaning dene ka maqsad yahi hai ki sabhi ashaar ka matlab bhi parhne waale bakhoobi samajh lein.Aam taur par main khud bhi aasaan aur roz-marra ki zubaan mein likhna pasand karta hoon .Bahut persianised alfaaz se na to waqif hoon na unhein jaanne ki zyada koshish ki.Phir bhi shairi ki bahut sari istilaahaat ,symbolic alfaaz,phrases waghaira ka istemaal laazmi ho jaata hai.YO per aksar doston ki urdu shairy aur urdu alfaaz ke istemaal mein dilchaspi ko dekhte hue main ne munaasib samjha ki aasaan zubaan mein matlab bhi likh doon.Kisi dost ne kuch dinon pahle mujh se kai alfaaz ke matlab sidhe ya PM ke zariye maaloom bhi kiye thhe .tabhi se meaning dene ki zaroorat aur himmat padi.Aapne saraaha,bahut bahut shukriya.HASAN
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«Reply #16 on: October 16, 2011, 10:47:25 AM »
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poetry achchi  hai... lekin Maaf kijiyega deedar ka milna khatakta hai . DEEDAR Karna ya Hona samajh mein aata hai milna atpata sa lagta hai ...Maslan
Teri  Tasveer  ka  Deedar  Kiya  kartey  hain 
Usse  tanhai ka Izhaar  kiya karte hain
Tu  jo  pahloo  mein  nahin  hoti meri jane gazal
Teri Tasveer hi se  pyar kiya karte hain 
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«Reply #17 on: October 16, 2011, 11:27:14 AM »
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Sadiq saheb,Bahut shukriya.Sahi tanqeed ke liye.Main ne  ghazal  nazar e saani kiye baghair post kar di.Lekin aaj log on karne ke baad se mujhe bhi yeh she'r khatak raha hai.Shukrguzar hoon, aur qadr karta hoon aapki baareekbeeni ki, ki aap ne ye atpataahat mahsoos kar lee -jo mujhe ummeed thhi ki nazar andaaz ho jaayegi- aur uska izhaar kiya...Lekin bhai teer to ab nikal chuka hai,agli baar mohtaat rahuunga.HASAN
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«Reply #18 on: October 16, 2011, 01:17:11 PM »
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Dr.saini saheb,aap ne ghazal pasand ki aur hausla afzai kee.bahut bahut shukriya.HASAN
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«Reply #19 on: October 16, 2011, 02:24:29 PM »
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Quote from: Sadiq Rizvi on October 16, 2011, 10:47:25 AM
poetry achchi  hai... lekin Maaf kijiyega deedar ka milna khatakta hai . DEEDAR Karna ya Hona samajh mein aata hai milna atpata sa lagta hai ...Maslan
Teri  Tasveer  ka  Deedar  Kiya  kartey  hain 
Usse  tanhai ka Izhaar  kiya karte hain
Tu  jo  pahloo  mein  nahin  hoti meri jane gazal
Teri Tasveer hi se  pyar kiya karte hain 
Sadiq Rizvi

SADIQ SAHAB
SUBHAN ALLAH.
KITNE KHUBSURAT SHER SE APNE MASLE KA HAL DENE KI KOSHISH KI HAI. BAHUT KHOOB. AP JAISO KADRADANO KI IS MAHFIL ME KAMI HAI..


KYA KAHTE HAI. .HASAN SAHAB.
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«Reply #20 on: October 16, 2011, 02:43:48 PM »
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mkv saheb.Main to Sadiq saheb ki barikbeeni ka pehle hi aitraaf kar chuka hoon.Albatta,aap ne she'r ki tareef kar ke mera qarz ada kar diya.Shukriya.HASAN
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«Reply #21 on: October 17, 2011, 03:38:26 AM »
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Suresh Sangwan saheb,Bahut bahut shukriya.Khush rahiye.HASAN
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«Reply #22 on: October 17, 2011, 06:19:28 AM »
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Hasan sahab
ab takalluf ki baate chodiye. dosti me ye theek nahi. ek dost ki tarah maine pahle hi apka choda adhoora kam kar diya.
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«Reply #23 on: October 17, 2011, 09:07:07 AM »
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Satish ji,bahut bahut shukriya.Aap ne saraha aur Lko ki tahzeeb ke marsiye mein saath diya.
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«Reply #24 on: October 17, 2011, 09:23:17 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 15, 2011, 05:22:18 AM
Faiz  o  Iqbal  ke   ash'aar  kahaaN  milte  haiN ,
Woh  khayalaat , wo  afkaar   kahaaN  milte  haiN

Hum  ghareeboN  se to mat kariye  na  milne  ka  gila,
Aajkal   aapke   deedaar   kahaaN   milte   haiN
   
Apne  matlab  ke  liye   tode  banaaye  rishtay ,
Aap  se 'saheb - e - kirdaar'  kahaan  milte  haiN

Dosti  ho  ki  adaawat ,  thha  saleeqa  sab  meiN,
Abb  wo  aamaal  ke   me'yaar  kahaan  milte  haiN
 
Tangdasti  meiN  bhi  phaila  na  kanbhi  dast - e - talab,
Paikar - e - sabr,  wo  khuddaar  kahaaN   milte  haiN

Lucknow , mere  watan , itna  bata  de   mujhko ,
Teri  tahzeeb  ke  aasaar   kahaan  milte  haiN

Qatl-o-ghaarat hai, ghutalay , kahiiN  dahshat - gardi ,
Abb  'Hasan'  achchhe  samachaar  kahaan  milte  haiN




Simple translation of uncommon Urdu words used in the Ghazal:       Afkaar =Thoughts/vichaar ; sahib-e-kirdaar= charitrawaan/man of character ;    Aamaal = behaviour ; Me'yaar = standards ; Tangdasti = tight hand / gharibi ;   Dast-e-talab = maangne ko haath phailaana ; Paikar-e-sabr=embodiment of patience ; khuddaar = self-respecting ; Aasaar = remains / awashesh/signs
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 15, 2011, 05:22:18 AM
Faiz  o  Iqbal  ke   ash'aar  kahaaN  milte  haiN ,
Woh  khayalaat , wo  afkaar   kahaaN  milte  haiN

Hum  ghareeboN  se to mat kariye  na  milne  ka  gila,
Aajkal   aapke   deedaar   kahaaN   milte   haiN
   
Apne  matlab  ke  liye   tode  banaaye  rishtay ,
Aap  se 'saheb - e - kirdaar'  kahaan  milte  haiN

Dosti  ho  ki  adaawat ,  thha  saleeqa  sab  meiN,
Abb  wo  aamaal  ke   me'yaar  kahaan  milte  haiN
 
Tangdasti  meiN  bhi  phaila  na  kanbhi  dast - e - talab,
Paikar - e - sabr,  wo  khuddaar  kahaaN   milte  haiN

Lucknow , mere  watan , itna  bata  de   mujhko ,
Teri  tahzeeb  ke  aasaar   kahaan  milte  haiN

Qatl-o-ghaarat hai, ghutalay , kahiiN  dahshat - gardi ,
Abb  'Hasan'  achchhe  samachaar  kahaan  milte  haiN




Simple translation of uncommon Urdu words used in the Ghazal:       Afkaar =Thoughts/vichaar ; sahib-e-kirdaar= charitrawaan/man of character ;    Aamaal = behaviour ; Me'yaar = standards ; Tangdasti = tight hand / gharibi ;   Dast-e-talab = maangne ko haath phailaana ; Paikar-e-sabr=embodiment of patience ; khuddaar = self-respecting ; Aasaar = remains / awashesh/signs


Waah Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya kehne Siddiqui Ji..Umda...Lajawaab...

Har Ek A'shaar par Sirf Waah Waah karte Reh gaye Hum..

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«Reply #25 on: October 17, 2011, 09:34:15 AM »
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Nahin,mkv saheb.Takalluf ki koi baat nahin.Lko waale Lko walon se hi takalluf karenge to baaher waalon ke liye kya bachega.Chaliye dosti ki baat hai to bataiye iss saal Jamghat mein kankaiya ke pench kahaan ladana hain.Gomti ground per ya Golaganj mein ?
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«Reply #26 on: October 17, 2011, 10:02:29 AM »
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Jamana gujar gaya sahab. mai daliganj me rahta tha. pench, dheel, tikalla, kankaua, etc..etc.
daat padti thi lekin din bhar dhoop me patango par najar. manjha lootna, kati patango ko taar se phasana. apne to yaade taaja kar di..
kaha ab vo khushkismati...jindgi ke daav pench me aisa ulajh gaye hai ki ab to khwabo me hi uda sakte hai. is sal gami ki vajah se kisi cheej me hissa nahi lenge.
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«Reply #27 on: October 17, 2011, 10:44:20 AM »
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Parwaaz saheb Bahut mashkoor hoon aapke mukhlisaana tabsire ke liye.
Aap ka yeh waahid 'post-mortem' hai jo murda kalaam ko bhi zindagi bakhsh deta hai.Bahut shukriya.Inayat.HASAN
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«Reply #28 on: October 17, 2011, 11:29:43 AM »
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 Thankyou !


sanjeevkash ji.Hausla afzai ke liye tah e dil se shukriya.karam banaye rakhiye.Hasan
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«Reply #29 on: October 17, 2011, 12:43:49 PM »
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mkv ji,ghami ke  bare mein jaan kar dukh hua.khuda aap ko sabr de.
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