----- /// Aajkal Ke Bachche /// -----

by klaskar on August 15, 2010, 08:19:11 PM
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aaj khoon ke rishton ki koi ehmiyat nahi hoti,
budhe maa baap ki santaan kabhi unki apni nahi hoti,

bachpan se jise paal poske bada karte hain,
wahi jarurat ke samay kabhi apni nahi hoti,

khud bhooke rehkar bachcho ko khana khilaate the,
aaj unhi maa baap ke muh me roti tak nahi hoti,

apni khushiyon ko alag rakhkar sab khushiyaan bachchon ko di,
aaj unhi maa baap ke hothon pe muskaan tak nahi hoti,

jis chiraag se apne ghar ko roshan karne ka socha tha,
aaj usi chiraag me unke liye raakh tak nahi hoti,

raaton ko jo jaag jaag kar bachchon ko sulaaya karte the,
aaj unki ki aankhon me chain ki neend tak nahi hoti,

arthi ko kaandha dene ke liye gairon ki madat leni padti hai,
kuch arthiyon ko apne bachchon ke haathon ki aag tak naseeb nahi hoti...

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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 08:21:25 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 08:26:14 PM »
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Galat baat.... ye aadat achchi nahi aapki... khaali taaliyon se kaam nahi chalne waala.... aapko pata hai humein kya chahiye....!!!

Waise taaliyon ke liye shukriya...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2010, 03:57:56 AM »
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ji jarur koshish karungi ji....
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2010, 04:04:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob aur sahi baat likha hai
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2010, 05:43:52 AM »
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mujhe intezaar rahega...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 16, 2010, 03:57:56 AM
ji jarur koshish karungi ji....
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2010, 05:44:18 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 16, 2010, 04:04:04 AM
Bahut khoob aur sahi baat likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2010, 05:55:00 AM »
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lijiye aapka intezar khtm kiya.... icon_flower

kar sako agar tum to itna hi karna
kisi buzurg ka kabhi dil na dukhana

na jane kitni chot khakaer wo aaya hai yahan
use thukra kar tum uska dard aur na badhana

na de sako use sahara tum apne ghar me to na sahi
do bol pyaar k aur dil me sahanubhuti rakhna

kal tumhe bhi isi daur se guzarna hai dost
unke liye na sahi to kum se kum apne liye ye karna...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2010, 06:27:01 AM »
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bahut sahi kahaa aapne.... bahut khoob...

maa baap ke paon chhuke kabhi bachche aashish liya kate the,
aaj wahi bachche maa baap ko tuta saamaan samajhte hain,

ghar ke kisi kone me ek tuti chaarpaai, ek kambal ek takiya,
bas itna sa kuch deke diya bahut saamaan samajhte hain,

ek thaali, ek mug aur ek paaani ka matka,
do waqt ki roti deke bahut khilaaya samajhte hain,

bado ki sewa param dharm hai, bachpan se yahi sikhate hain,
tab bhi jaane aajkal ke bachche kahaan samajh paate hain,

sochta hoon main to bas ki ye bachche bhi buddhe to honge,
unki bhi ye haalat hogi we kahaan ye samajh paate hain....
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2010, 06:32:40 AM »
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bht hi khubsurat likha hai aapne ....

sahi hai klaskar ji..log nahin samjhte ..chahe koi kuch bhi keh le...
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2010, 06:34:22 AM »
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shukriya Kasak ji...

haan sahi kahaa aapne... hum bas apne feelings share kar sakte hain.. kisi ko sudhaar nahi sakte...
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2010, 05:23:40 PM »
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Bahuuuuuutttttt hiiiiiiiiii khoob klaskar ji.....i hav no words.......
seriously....... icon_salut icon_salut

Nice verryyyyyy nice reply kasak ji.......
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2010, 06:20:32 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Pooja ji... thanx a lot...!!!

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Bahuuuuuutttttt hiiiiiiiiii khoob klaskar ji.....i hav no words.......
seriously....... icon_salut icon_salut

Nice verryyyyyy nice reply kasak ji.......
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