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                  dhire-dhire dard mera la-ilaj banta gaya.,
                  jaise-jaise sakht unka mizaaj banta gaya.,

                    marte damm tak sataane lage abb toh.,
                   dekho shahar mein aisa rivaaj banta gaya.,

                     lootne ki kala mein ho maahir jo.,
                     mulk mein woh sartaj banta gaya.,

                     thi onsiyat bahut andhere se apni.,
                    woh bhi ujaale ka yaar aaj banta gaya.,

                    hai be-khabar zaat se apni marhoom..!
                    ki kirdaar apna sab ka siraj banta gaya.


                                                           siraj= light source.
                                                            onsiyat= attachment
                    
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2011, 11:49:23 AM »
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M B jee Aadaab!

Bade dino baad aapki kisi kalaam par nazar padi..
Bahut khub kalaam kahi hai janab... ahsaas O khayaal
ki gehraai bahut umdaa rahi... Usual Smile

Mushkil kavish ko bahut achche se anjaam diya hai aapne..
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile         


Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on September 21, 2011, 11:16:08 AM


                  dhire-dhire dard mera la-ilaj banta gaya.,
                  jaise-jaise sakht unka mizaaj banta gaya.,

Kia baat hai MB jee bahut umdaa Matla kaha hai
gazab janab...         

                    marte damm tak sataane lage abb toh.,
                    shahar mein aisa rivaaj banta gaya.,

Waah waah kia kahne janab bahut khoob Usual Smile
Haqeekhat kahi hai janab daad Usual Smile         

                     lootne ki kala mein ho maahir jo.,
                     mulk mein woh sartaj banta gaya.,

Kia kahne janab bahut khoob... daad           

                     thi onsiyat bahut andhere se apni.,
                    woh bhi ujaale ka yaar aaj banta gaya.,

Bahut khoob kafi pech hai is sher meiN daad ...           

                    hai be-khabar zaat se apni marhoom..!
                    ki kirdaar apna sab ka siraj banta gaya.

Kia kahne janab bahut khoob achcha Maqta kaha hai
daad daad daad Usual Smile         



                                                            siraj= light source.
                                                            onsiyat= attachment
                     

Is khub kalaam par phir se daad O mubarakbad..

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda hafez.... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2011, 02:50:24 PM »
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wah marhoom sahab--
behad umda kalaam
hazaron daad o mubarakbaad
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2011, 03:06:36 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on September 21, 2011, 11:16:08 AM


                  dhire-dhire dard mera la-ilaj banta gaya.,
                  jaise-jaise sakht unka mizaaj banta gaya.,

                    marte damm tak sataane lage abb toh.,
                   dekho shahar mein aisa rivaaj banta gaya.,

                     lootne ki kala mein ho maahir jo.,
                     mulk mein woh sartaj banta gaya.,

                     thi onsiyat bahut andhere se apni.,
                    woh bhi ujaale ka yaar aaj banta gaya.,

                    hai be-khabar zaat se apni marhoom..!
                    ki kirdaar apna sab ka siraj banta gaya.


                                                            siraj= light source.
                                                            onsiyat= attachment
                     

Baaaaaaaaaaaahut Khooooooooooob MB Ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2011, 08:29:57 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 21, 2011, 11:49:23 AM
M B jee Aadaab!

Bade dino baad aapki kisi kalaam par nazar padi..
Bahut khub kalaam kahi hai janab... ahsaas O khayaal
ki gehraai bahut umdaa rahi... Usual Smile

Mushkil kavish ko bahut achche se anjaam diya hai aapne..
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile         


Is khub kalaam par phir se daad O mubarakbad..

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda hafez.... Usual Smile         



thank you parwaaz ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2011, 01:01:26 PM »
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bahut acha Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 25, 2011, 09:22:59 AM »
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Quote from: awais_007 on September 24, 2011, 01:01:26 PM
bahut acha Applause Applause Applause

shukriya awis ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 28, 2011, 09:32:16 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on September 21, 2011, 11:16:08 AM


                  dhire-dhire dard mera la-ilaj banta gaya.,
                  jaise-jaise sakht unka mizaaj banta gaya.,

                    marte damm tak sataane lage abb toh.,
                   dekho shahar mein aisa rivaaj banta gaya.,

                     lootne ki kala mein ho maahir jo.,
                     mulk mein woh sartaj banta gaya.,

                     thi onsiyat bahut andhere se apni.,
                    woh bhi ujaale ka yaar aaj banta gaya.,

                    hai be-khabar zaat se apni marhoom..!
                    ki kirdaar apna sab ka siraj banta gaya.


                                                            siraj= light source.
                                                            onsiyat= attachment
                     


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2011, 05:00:13 AM »
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wah wah marhoom bahayat ji bahiut khoob.
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«Reply #9 on: September 29, 2011, 07:55:02 AM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on September 21, 2011, 03:06:36 PM
Baaaaaaaaaaaahut Khooooooooooob MB Ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

thank you
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«Reply #10 on: September 29, 2011, 08:41:03 AM »
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Quote from: parinde on September 29, 2011, 05:00:13 AM
wah wah marhoom bahayat ji bahiut khoob.
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thanks
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«Reply #11 on: October 01, 2011, 08:11:10 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on September 21, 2011, 11:16:08 AM


                  dhire-dhire dard mera la-ilaj banta gaya.,
                  jaise-jaise sakht unka mizaaj banta gaya.,

                    marte damm tak sataane lage abb toh.,
                   dekho shahar mein aisa rivaaj banta gaya.,

                     lootne ki kala mein ho maahir jo.,
                     mulk mein woh sartaj banta gaya.,

                     thi onsiyat bahut andhere se apni.,
                    woh bhi ujaale ka yaar aaj banta gaya.,

                    hai be-khabar zaat se apni marhoom..!
                    ki kirdaar apna sab ka siraj banta gaya.


                                                            siraj= light source.
                                                            onsiyat= attachment
                     

good one.....!
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«Reply #12 on: October 03, 2011, 10:21:40 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on October 01, 2011, 08:11:10 AM

good one.....!

thank you
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«Reply #13 on: October 03, 2011, 10:40:12 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob M.b Ji..

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«Reply #14 on: October 09, 2011, 12:52:15 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 03, 2011, 10:40:12 AM
Bahut Bahut Khooob M.b Ji..

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thanx
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