----- /// Aakhir Kyun /// -----

by klaskar on August 02, 2010, 10:32:43 PM
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kyun mohabbat me log badle ki bhaawna rakhte hain,
apne hi chahat ko tabaah karne ki chahat rakhte hain,

kabhi jiski hifaazat is tarha karte the
ki hawaa ka jhaunka bhi na chhoo paye use,
aaj usi ko taafaano me khadaa rakhte hain,

kabhi jisko phoolon se naajuk samajhte the,
jise harpal khooshboo se sajaya karte the,
aaj usi ko pairon tale kuchal ke rakhte hain,

kabhi jise apne pyaar ki chhaon me rakhte the,
jise dhoop se bhi bachaya karte the,
aaj usi ko jalaane ki chahat rakhte hain,

kyun log pyaar me nafrat ko jawaan rakhte hain,
apne hi chahat ko mitaane ki chahat rakhte hain...


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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2010, 10:36:08 PM »
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Nice work..
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2010, 04:41:29 AM »
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bht sahi kaha klaskar ji aapne.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Quote from: klaskar on August 02, 2010, 10:32:43 PM

kyun mohabbat me log badle ki bhaawna rakhte hain,
apne hi chahat ko tabaah karne ki chahat rakhte hain,

kabhi jiski hifaazat is tarha karte the
ki hawaa ka jhaunka bhi na chhoo paye use,
aaj usi ko taafaano me khadaa rakhte hain,

kabhi jisko phoolon se naajuk samajhte the,
jise harpal khooshboo se sajaya karte the,
aaj usi ko pairon tale kuchal ke rakhte hain,

kabhi jise apne pyaar ki chhaon me rakhte the,
jise dhoop se bhi bachaya karte the,
aaj usi ko jalaane ki chahat rakhte hain,

kyun log pyaar me nafrat ko jawaan rakhte hain,
apne hi chahat ko mitaane ki chahat rakhte hain...


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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2010, 05:39:29 AM »
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Achhi poem hai aapki.....ek alag soch.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dharti apne ander suraj ki garmee se bachakar paataal me apna dil rakhti hai.....
Par kabhi na kabhi wahi lava ban suraj-si garmee lekar baahar aata hai..
Aakhir kyun...?

Quote from: klaskar on August 02, 2010, 10:32:43 PM

kyun mohabbat me log badle ki bhaawna rakhte hain,
apne hi chahat ko tabaah karne ki chahat rakhte hain,

kabhi jiski hifaazat is tarha karte the
ki hawaa ka jhaunka bhi na chhoo paye use,
aaj usi ko taafaano me khadaa rakhte hain,

kabhi jisko phoolon se naajuk samajhte the,
jise harpal khooshboo se sajaya karte the,
aaj usi ko pairon tale kuchal ke rakhte hain,

kabhi jise apne pyaar ki chhaon me rakhte the,
jise dhoop se bhi bachaya karte the,
aaj usi ko jalaane ki chahat rakhte hain,

kyun log pyaar me nafrat ko jawaan rakhte hain,
apne hi chahat ko mitaane ki chahat rakhte hain...


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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2010, 01:32:33 PM »
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kuchh ham bhi kehna chahenge....

Is jaha me har koi badle ki bhavna nahi rakhte he,
apni apni soch he ae dost,
yaha apne pyar se chahe kitne bhi sitma kyu na mila,
fir bhi kabhi apne ke liye bad-duaa nahi dete,

pyar me kitne bhi gam kyu na mile,
haste haste seh lete he usse,
fir bhi aah bhi niklti he,
har kisike dil me badla lene ki bhavana nahi hoti....
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2010, 02:27:32 PM »
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nice poem....kalaakaar-ji....... Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: klaskar on August 02, 2010, 10:32:43 PM

kyun mohabbat me log badle ki bhaawna rakhte hain,
apne hi chahat ko tabaah karne ki chahat rakhte hain,

kabhi jiski hifaazat is tarha karte the
ki hawaa ka jhaunka bhi na chhoo paye use,
aaj usi ko taafaano me khadaa rakhte hain,

kabhi jisko phoolon se naajuk samajhte the,
jise harpal khooshboo se sajaya karte the,
aaj usi ko pairon tale kuchal ke rakhte hain,

kabhi jise apne pyaar ki chhaon me rakhte the,
jise dhoop se bhi bachaya karte the,
aaj usi ko jalaane ki chahat rakhte hain,

kyun log pyaar me nafrat ko jawaan rakhte hain,
apne hi chahat ko mitaane ki chahat rakhte hain...


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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2010, 04:22:29 PM »
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Bahaut khubsoorat likha hai Kapil Dost..! Pehli do lines parr kar hi main gum sa gaya apki iss kalam main..Yunhi likte rahiye aur khush rahiye..!
Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2010, 04:46:40 PM »
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very beautifully written klaskar ji

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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2010, 09:29:44 AM »
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Thanks a lot Sajid ji...!!!

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on August 02, 2010, 10:36:08 PM
Nice work..
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2010, 09:30:21 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 03, 2010, 04:41:29 AM
bht sahi kaha klaskar ji aapne.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2010, 11:28:17 AM »
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BADE SUNDER BHAAV HAI SAKHEE....Kuchh bhi ho kisi k prati bure khayaal nahi aate.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: thinkhattk on August 03, 2010, 01:32:33 PM
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kuchh ham bhi kehna chahenge....

Is jaha me har koi badle ki bhavna nahi rakhte he,
apni apni soch he ae dost,
yaha apne pyar se chahe kitne bhi sitma kyu na mila,
fir bhi kabhi apne ke liye bad-duaa nahi dete,

pyar me kitne bhi gam kyu na mile,
haste haste seh lete he usse,
fir bhi aah bhi niklti he,
har kisike dil me badla lene ki bhavana nahi hoti....
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2010, 05:04:16 PM »
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Behad alag aur nirala khayaal hai janaab aapka.... Daad .

Saath zamaane ke zamaane ne chalna sikha diya
Mere mehboob ko bhi mousam ne badalna sikha diya
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«Reply #12 on: August 05, 2010, 09:55:03 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Anaamika ji...!!! Aur aapne bhi bahut sahi sawaal poochaa hai... jawaab to mere paas bhi nahi hai...!!! Usual Smile

Quote from: ANAAMIKA on August 03, 2010, 05:39:29 AM
Achhi poem hai aapki.....ek alag soch.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dharti apne ander suraj ki garmee se bachakar paataal me apna dil rakhti hai.....
Par kabhi na kabhi wahi lava ban suraj-si garmee lekar baahar aata hai..
Aakhir kyun...?
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«Reply #13 on: August 05, 2010, 09:56:44 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Devangi ji... aur aapne bahut khoob kaha hai...!!!

Quote from: thinkhattk on August 03, 2010, 01:32:33 PM
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kuchh ham bhi kehna chahenge....

Is jaha me har koi badle ki bhavna nahi rakhte he,
apni apni soch he ae dost,
yaha apne pyar se chahe kitne bhi sitma kyu na mila,
fir bhi kabhi apne ke liye bad-duaa nahi dete,

pyar me kitne bhi gam kyu na mile,
haste haste seh lete he usse,
fir bhi aah bhi niklti he,
har kisike dil me badla lene ki bhavana nahi hoti....
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«Reply #14 on: August 05, 2010, 09:57:10 PM »
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Thanx a lot Koyal ji...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 03, 2010, 02:27:32 PM
nice poem....kalaakaar-ji....... Applause Applause Applause

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