"" :( aakhri kalaam :) ""

by nirala on January 31, 2011, 03:32:07 PM
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chalo ke ab apna
aakhri kalaam likhte hain

sabko ab apna
aakhri salaam kehte hain

khus raho sab
alfaazon me dua ka yahi paigaam likhte hain

bahrupiya hai hum
ke ab apna fir ik roop badalte hain

masti se bhara
ek aur jahan dhoondte hain

mile the hum yahan sabse
uparwale ka sukra ada karte hain

bhul jaayen sab
yahi ab razaa karte hain

ban na paaye dost kisi ke
bas iska hi gila karte hain

khus rahen sab
bas yahi dua karte hain

chalo ke ab apna
aakhri kalaam likhte hain
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2011, 03:56:39 PM »
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I hope ye sirrf kalaam hi ho nirala ji...sachai ki gunjaish na hi ho..nicely written...
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2011, 04:27:40 PM »
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boht ache nirala ji bas kalaam poetry tak hi rakhiyega         
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2011, 05:28:42 PM »
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hmmmmm......nirala ji ...no comments.....and u can understand y.......
sad5
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2011, 07:16:27 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 31, 2011, 03:32:07 PM
chalo ke ab apna
aakhri kalaam likhte hain

sabko ab apna
aakhri salaam kehte hain

khus raho sab
alfaazon me dua ka yahi paigaam likhte hain

bahrupiya hai hum
ke ab apna fir ik roop badalte hain

masti se bhara
ek aur jahan dhoondte hain

mile the hum yahan sabse
uparwale ka sukra ada karte hain

bhul jaayen sab
yahi ab razaa karte hain

ban na paaye dost kisi ke
bas iska hi gila karte hain

khus rahen sab
bas yahi dua karte hain

chalo ke ab apna
aakhri kalaam likhte hain


Bahut khoooooooooooob .......... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2011, 12:35:27 PM »
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wah re mere bhai bahut achha likhte ho tum to Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2011, 08:02:02 AM »
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mere akhri kalaam padhnewalon ko mera salaam hai.
aur Kmam aap kuch comnt de dete to achha hota na.
ye sad sa mukhda chipka dia sirf sad5
mujhe nahi samjh aata bina bataye kuch bhi--
so i cant understand unspoken words sad5
ab usko words me btao bas
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thanx
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 08:02:30 AM »
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mere akhri kalaam padhnewalon ko mera salaam hai.
aur Kmam aap kuch comnt de dete to achha hota na.
ye sad sa mukhda chipka dia sirf sad5
mujhe nahi samjh aata bina bataye kuch bhi--
so i cant understand unspoken words sad5
ab usko words me btao bas
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thanx
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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2011, 04:34:24 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala Ji Per Aise Marne
Marane Ki Baat Mat Likha Karo Bhai
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2011, 05:13:43 PM »
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hmm Rishi ji---
marne marne ki baat kahan kari mene.
wo to bas aise hi ek din bahot bore hokar likh gaya tha aisa.
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thanx
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2011, 07:51:15 AM »
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Quote from: kishan8888 on February 01, 2011, 12:35:27 PM
wah re mere bhai bahut achha likhte ho tum to Usual Smile
kishan…mere dost…
tere jesa hi ab se mai bhi leaving… sad5
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2011, 08:54:56 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 31, 2011, 03:32:07 PM
chalo ke ab apna
aakhri kalaam likhte hain

sabko ab apna
aakhri salaam kehte hain

khus raho sab
alfaazon me dua ka yahi paigaam likhte hain

bahrupiya hai hum
ke ab apna fir ik roop badalte hain

masti se bhara
ek aur jahan dhoondte hain

mile the hum yahan sabse
uparwale ka sukra ada karte hain

bhul jaayen sab
yahi ab razaa karte hain

ban na paaye dost kisi ke
bas iska hi gila karte hain

khus rahen sab
bas yahi dua karte hain

chalo ke ab apna
aakhri kalaam likhte hain




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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2011, 09:13:23 AM »
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Nirala Ji Bht Hi Khuub .. Really Very Mice.. Thumbs UP Thumbs UP  Applause Clapping Smiley hello2 icon_flower Aur Sab Ki Tarah Yahi Guzarish hai k yeh sirf ek Poetry Tak Hi Rakhiyega ..   Usual Smile

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