Aane wale kal ki chinta men, jo aaj ko na khoya Karen...bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on September 01, 2012, 05:46:18 PM
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Beete kal par dukhi hokar , baar baar ham rote hain
Aane wale kal ki chinta karke, jo aaj hai usko bhi kho dete hain

Par kabhi bhi jo aaj hai, us pe dhiyaan na dete hain
Isi liye to jeevan bhar , ham pachhta te hi rahte hain

Aisa karte, aisa na karte, yeh kahte, yeh na kahte
Aisee  baton ko soch soch kar, apne ko uljhate rahte hain

Kadam kadam bharaate bharaate, kitine hamse  aage nikale gaye
Apni bhool ke kaaran ham, bahuton se peechhe rah  gaye hain

Jo beet gaya so beet gayaa. laut ke  phir na aayega
Aur aane wale kal kiya hoga, koi bataa  na payega

Isi liye to lagta hai yaaro, aaj men hi ham jiyaa karen
Beete kal ki kabar se nikl kar aage bharne ki koshish kiya karen

Aaj ko achhe se jee lenge to, anewla kal khud hi sanvar jayega
Na aane wale kal ki chinta hogi, na beete kal pe royenge

Apne karam karte karte, jeevan achhe se bitayenge to  
Jeevan men khushiyaan hongi, aur sukh saagar lahrayega

Beete kal par dukhi ho kar,  baar baar na roya Karen
‘bansi’ Aane wale kal ki chinta men, aaj ko na khoya Karen

-----bansi dhameja(madhur)
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2012, 05:49:25 PM »
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Wah Bansi jee
bahut umda khayaalo ka ijhaar kiya hai aapne..
ye andaaj khoob raha..
likhte rahiye.. khush rahiye..
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2012, 06:11:44 PM »
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Bahut khoob bansi ji.. Beautiful lines... icon_salut
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2012, 08:42:44 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2012, 09:13:51 PM »
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nice poem
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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2012, 12:21:23 AM »
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bahut umda bansi ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2012, 02:33:17 AM »
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khubsurat khyalo aur khubsurat alfazo se swari gayi ek bahut hi khoob surat rachna....

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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2012, 04:44:23 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 01, 2012, 05:49:25 PM
Wah Bansi jee
bahut umda khayaalo ka ijhaar kiya hai aapne..
ye andaaj khoob raha..
likhte rahiye.. khush rahiye..

mukesh ji bahut bahut shukriya.
Khuda ne chaha to likhta rahooga.
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2012, 04:45:05 AM »
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on September 01, 2012, 06:11:44 PM
Bahut khoob bansi ji.. Beautiful lines... icon_salut
nisha ji shukriya bahut bahut.
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2012, 04:45:36 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 02, 2012, 12:21:23 AM
bahut umda bansi ji
nandbandhu ji thanks
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2012, 04:48:02 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on September 02, 2012, 02:33:17 AM
khubsurat khyalo aur khubsurat alfazo se swari gayi ek bahut hi khoob surat rachna....

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saudagar ji is na cheez ka likha aapko pasand aaya bahut achha lagaa. bahut bahut shukriya
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 01, 2012, 08:42:44 PM
bahut khoob.. Usual Smile

touhid ji shukriya hausila afzahi ke liye
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Quote from: Sps on September 01, 2012, 09:13:51 PM
nice poem
sps ji shukriya. apko pasand aaya achha laga
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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2012, 11:05:43 AM »
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«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2012, 04:47:38 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 02, 2012, 11:05:43 AM
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hirday ji shukriya
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