AaNkheN............................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on September 18, 2010, 04:57:51 PM
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SapanoN ke shahar me ye naadaan see aaNkheN haiN
kuch ilm naheeN inko anjaan see aaNkheN haiN

kyaa rasm hai ulfat kee kya iskaa saleeqaa hai?
har fiqra se ghaafil, khushgumaan see aaNkheN haiN

din chaar chaaNdanee ke ronaa hai umar bhar kaa
haNs haNs ke bahut royeeN idjaan see aaNkheN hain

dil apnee jagah khush thaa , aaNkhoN ne dubaayaa hai
is ek khataa se hee nadmaan see aaNkheN haiN

kyaa dhooNdhatee rahatee haiN aaNkhoN me teri aaNkheN
kuch or naheeN teree nigahbaan see aaNkheN haiN

mat hosh ud.a mere kuch hosh to rahane de
hai teer adaaoN ke kamaan see aaNkheN haiN

lo deed hui unkee dil shaad huaa phir se
khushiyoN kaa chaman apnaa guldaan see aaNkheN haiN

kyaa koi likhe tum par aye husn e jahaaNaaraa
cheharaa hai gazal jaisaa deewaan see aaNkheN haiN

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2010, 05:14:15 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on September 18, 2010, 04:57:51 PM
SapanoN ke shahar me ye naadaan see aaNkheN haiN
kuch ilm naheeN inko anjaan see aaNkheN haiN

kyaa rasm hai ulfat kee kya iskaa saleeqaa hai?
har fiqra se ghaafil haiN ,maasoom see aaNkheN haiN

din chaar chaaNdanee ke ronaa hai umar bhar kaa
haNs haNs ke bahut royeeN idjaan see aaNkheN hain

dil apnee jagah khush thaa , aaNkhoN ne dubaayaa hai
is ek khataa se hee badnaam see aaNkheN haiN

kyaa dhooNdhatee rahatee haiN aaNkhoN me teri aaNkheN
kuch or naheeN teree nigahbaan see aaNkheN haiN

mat hosh ud.a mere kuch hosh to rahane de
mastee hai adaaoN me or jaam see aaNkheN haiN

lo deed hui unkee dil shaad huaa phir se
khushiyoN kaa chaman apnaa guldaan see aaNkheN haiN

Mamta Bajpai

Mamta Ji ... aapki peshkash ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe... Very nice creation... dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi likhti rahen aage bhi... bazm ki raunak badhaate rahen.. khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2010, 05:17:17 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on September 18, 2010, 04:57:51 PM
SapanoN ke shahar me ye naadaan see aaNkheN haiN
kuch ilm naheeN inko anjaan see aaNkheN haiN

kyaa rasm hai ulfat kee kya iskaa saleeqaa hai?
har fiqra se ghaafil haiN ,maasoom see aaNkheN haiN

din chaar chaaNdanee ke ronaa hai umar bhar kaa
haNs haNs ke bahut royeeN idjaan see aaNkheN hain

dil apnee jagah khush thaa , aaNkhoN ne dubaayaa hai
is ek khataa se hee badnaam see aaNkheN haiN

kyaa dhooNdhatee rahatee haiN aaNkhoN me teri aaNkheN
kuch or naheeN teree nigahbaan see aaNkheN haiN

mat hosh ud.a mere kuch hosh to rahane de
mastee hai adaaoN me or jaam see aaNkheN haiN

lo deed hui unkee dil shaad huaa phir se
khushiyoN kaa chaman apnaa guldaan see aaNkheN haiN

Mamta Bajpai
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Mamta Ji ... aapki peshkash ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe... Very nice creation... dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi likhti rahen aage bhi... bazm ki raunak badhaate rahen.. khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2010, 06:46:49 PM »
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Mamtaa jee Aadaab!

Kia khoob nazm se nawaaza hai.... behad khoob likha hai aapne daad.... Usual Smile Behad umdaa sabhi ashaar achche raheN...

Likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #4 on: September 18, 2010, 09:48:53 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Mamta Ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2010, 10:41:45 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mamta ji...!!!

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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2010, 07:08:41 AM »
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Ghazal likhne ki bahot achhi koshish aapne ki hai Mamta ji. Nadaan, anjaan, ke saath aapne masoom, badnaam ko bataur qafiya istimaal kiya jo ajeeb sa laga. Waise aap ghazal goi ke fann se itni bhi anjaan to nahi hai. Baharhaal takhayyul ki parwaz achhi lagi. Keep writing to get improvements. 
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2010, 07:17:55 AM »
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Riyaz jee! behad shukriyaa! aap ne theek hee kahaa ...mai apnee is galatee ko theek karne kee koshish krooNgee...
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2010, 08:54:23 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat peshkesh hai Mamta ji..
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2010, 12:00:09 PM »
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mamta ji kya kehne aapka andaaze bayaan hai kuch aur.
bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2010, 01:07:33 PM »
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Riyaaz jee ,
            Aap ke kahe mutaabik gazal me jo takneekee khaamee thee maine use theek karne kee koshish kee hai ek nayaa shair bhee add kiyaa hai...Aap bataayeN mai kahaaN tak theek hooN...
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2010, 01:17:53 PM »
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Shukriyaa Parvez jee!lekin aap ka puraanaa andaaz kahaaN kho gayaa...humeN to aadat uskee hee pad gayee hai...
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«Reply #12 on: September 20, 2010, 07:50:07 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        MAMTA BAJPAI JI....

BADI NAADAN BADI ANJAAN BADI MASOOM SI HOTI HAI YE AANKHEN
BINA ANJAAM JAANE KISI KO BHI APNA BANA LETI HAI YE "AANKHEN"
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«Reply #13 on: September 21, 2010, 09:25:59 PM »
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Bahot khoob Mamta Ji ... very very very .. nice  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Ji .. hume bahot pasand aayi puri ki puri rachna aap ki .. Ji sabhi sher pasand aaye .. par do sher kuchh khaas rahe..


Quote from: mamta bajpai on September 18, 2010, 04:57:51 PM
SapanoN ke shahar me ye naadaan see aaNkheN haiN
kuch ilm naheeN inko anjaan see aaNkheN haiN
Bahot khoob ... Ji hume bahot pasand aaya ye waala sher ..very nice  Thumbs UP

kyaa rasm hai ulfat kee kya iskaa saleeqaa hai?
har fiqra se ghaafil, khushgumaan see aaNkheN haiN

din chaar chaaNdanee ke ronaa hai umar bhar kaa
haNs haNs ke bahut royeeN idjaan see aaNkheN hain

dil apnee jagah khush thaa , aaNkhoN ne dubaayaa hai
is ek khataa se hee nadmaan see aaNkheN haiN
Mamta Ji .. baaki saare sher bhi khoob rahe .. par ye sab se jyaada pasand aaya ... good one ..    Usual Smile

kyaa dhooNdhatee rahatee haiN aaNkhoN me teri aaNkheN
kuch or naheeN teree nigahbaan see aaNkheN haiN

mat hosh ud.a mere kuch hosh to rahane de
hai teer adaaoN ke kamaan see aaNkheN haiN

lo deed hui unkee dil shaad huaa phir se
khushiyoN kaa chaman apnaa guldaan see aaNkheN haiN

kyaa koi likhe tum par aye husn e jahaaNaaraa
cheharaa hai gazal jaisaa deewaan see aaNkheN haiN

Mamta Bajpai

Aap ko paheli baar padha .. aur aap ke ehsaason ne dil mai jagaah banaali .. hammesha yunhi likhate rahiye .. and keep smiling

aap ka likha padh ke .. apne likhe kuchh ehsaas yaad aa gaye ...

Zindaa laasho ke bich rahi bezubaan meri aankhein
Jhooth ke aaino se ho rahi pareshaan meri aankhein,

Banaane waale ne banaadi dekh jannat si hasi duniyaa,
Dekh Iska haal fir kyon ho rahi hairaan meri aankhein,

Kos apni kismat kar raha har insaan teri razaa ki baatein,
Jab dekhi khud apni hi sirat hui pashemaan meri aankhein.


Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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«Reply #14 on: September 22, 2010, 12:58:45 AM »
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Naresh jee ! behad shukriya!aap ne gazal ko pasand kiya or us par apni qeemati rai dee...behad shukriya..
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