aansu............sheba

by Sheba on April 20, 2012, 07:53:09 PM
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               main rothi nahin to duniya samjhti hai khush hoon...!
               kaash kabhi koi mere aansuo.N ko bhi pahchaantaa...! tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2012, 08:00:08 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

khoob likha hai aapne... par aap hi bataiye ki kaise pehchaane aapke aansuon ko... tongue3
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2012, 08:02:25 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab !


Achcha sher hai ... Khayaal khoob raha daad...
waise aik aadh sher par daad dena humne chhod diya
hai par aapka sher padhkar aik famous gazal ka sher
yaad aa gaya... so yahaaN bhi chipkaate chaleN... Usual Smile

har aik muskurahat muskaan nahi hoti
Nafrat ho yaa mohobbat aasaan nahi hoti
AaNsu Khushi ke gham ke hote haiN aik jaise
In aaNsuoN ki koyiN pehchaaN nahi hoti.... Usual Smile    


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
    
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2012, 08:05:22 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 20, 2012, 07:53:09 PM

  




              main rothi nahin to duniya samjhti hai khush hoon...!
               kaash kabhi koi mere aansuo.N ko bhi pahchaantaa...! tearyeyed

aapki lines ne to soch me daal diya...
 I wish koi  aisa ho jo na sirf aapke aansuon ko pachaane balki unhe hamesha ke liye pochh bhi de..
 Khush Rahiye hamaari yahi dua hai...
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2012, 10:22:18 PM »
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bahut khoob sheba ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2012, 02:48:12 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 20, 2012, 07:53:09 PM
Sheba jee, aap roti nahi to duniya samajhti hai k aap khush ho, magar aapne dusri line mein kaha hai k kaash koi aapke aansuo.n ko pehchanta. Jab aap roti hi nahi to aapke aansu.n kaun pehchanega.
Zara apne she'r k matlab pe ghaur kijiyega.
  




              main rothi nahin to duniya samjhti hai khush hoon...!
               kaash kabhi koi mere aansuo.N ko bhi pahchaantaa...! tearyeyed

  




        
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2012, 04:08:13 AM »
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Tere  andar  ke  gham ko  jaanta  hoon,
Tere Khushk Aansoo main pehchaanta hoon,
Zamaane  bhar  ko  samjhaana kathin hai,
Qusoor  apna  magar  main   maanta hoon

... Bahut khoob , Sheba ji.
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«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2012, 05:11:41 AM »
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bahut khoob....sheba....
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«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2012, 05:37:58 AM »
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bhaut badiya, koi na koi to pehchanega Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2012, 05:49:26 AM »
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              main rothi nahin to duniya samjhti hai khush hoon...!
               kaash kabhi koi mere aansuo.N ko bhi pahchaantaa...! tearyeyed

Kya khoob likha hai aapne Shebaji!!!

ye aansu diljalo ki shinaakht hain, na nami na namak, bas shuaaon ki tarah, fizaaon ko ghamgeen kiya karte hain.    
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2012, 07:58:37 AM »
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              main rothi nahin to duniya samjhti hai khush hoon...!
               kaash kabhi koi mere aansuo.N ko bhi pahchaantaa...! tearyeyed
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2012, 04:35:35 PM »
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ye aansoo hame dedo sheba
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2012, 05:35:34 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 20, 2012, 08:00:08 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

khoob likha hai aapne... par aap hi bataiye ki kaise pehchaane aapke aansuon ko... tongue3


bring eye scrubber Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2012, 05:44:18 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 23, 2012, 05:35:34 PM

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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2012, 10:14:16 PM »
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Sheba jee achi soch bayan ki hai apne..
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Khush rahiye..!
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