Aao shayari milkar likhi jaaye... Intezar !

by Intezar on January 26, 2011, 07:28:44 PM
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Dosto ek cheez shuru karna chahta hun shayad aap logo ko pasand aaye
agar na bhi pasand aaye to koi baat nahin... ek aisi cheez karna chahte hain...

pehli line koi bhi likhe aur us se milaakar dusri line koi aur likhe...
ek hi shakhs dono lines nahin likhega... sirf pehli ya agar pehli likhi gayi hai to phir dusri aur complete karne ke baad bhi koi aur bhi likhna chahta hai to likh sakta hai us line ko use karke aur phir aage ke liye bhi ek nayi line deni hogi ke koi aur bhi likh sake  ... agar aap logo chahte hain to Shuru kiya jaaye... pehle main koshish karta hun...


jise aansu samajh kar main taa umra bahaata raha...
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2011, 07:32:04 PM »
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jise aansu samajh kar main taa umra bahaata raha...
wo ashk nahin the mere dil k armanon ka lahu tha...!!!


sisakte rahe mere armaan jiski umeed me....
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2011, 07:44:49 PM »
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sisakte rahe mere armaan jiski umeed mein
wo laut kar kabhi mere pehlu me na aayaa...!



bujhti nahin aag ab aansuo ki baarish se
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2011, 07:46:51 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 26, 2011, 07:32:04 PM
jise aansu samajh kar main taa umra bahaata raha...
wo ashk nahin the mere dil k armanon ka lahu tha...!!!


sisakte rahe mere armaan jiski umeed me....
Wo mere sanam naa aaye hamaari pehli-pehli ieedd me
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2011, 07:47:49 PM »
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bujhti nahin aag ab aansuo ki baarish se
meri aankhon se ab tezaab ko hai baras jana...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2011, 07:49:28 PM »
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Quote from: Intezar on January 26, 2011, 07:44:49 PM
sisakte rahe mere armaan jiski umeed mein
wo laut kar kabhi mere pehlu me na aayaa...!



bujhti nahin aag ab aansuo ki baarish se...
kaise kahein koi hume nehlaao saagar k paani se
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2011, 07:51:26 PM »
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Ye teri muskan bhi, kya gazab ada dhaati hai,
Bina kisi makshad ke, dil ko dastak de jati hai,



Sang rahenge tu aur mai jaise seeta aur raam
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2011, 07:52:54 PM »
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kamaal hai !!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2011, 07:55:17 PM »
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Ye teri muskan bhi, kya gazab ada dhaati hai,
bejaan dil ki dhadkan ko bhi badha jaati hai... !

Quote from: ANAAM on January 26, 2011, 07:51:26 PM
Ye teri muskan bhi, kya gazab ada dhaati hai,
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2011, 07:56:44 PM »
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Shukriya

Kasak ji
Anaam ji
for joining... Nirala ji aap ka tahe dil se shukriya !

Intezar !
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«Reply #10 on: January 26, 2011, 08:02:12 PM »
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ye teri muskaan bhi kya gazab dhati hai
       
betaab dil ki tamannao ko saatwe aasmaan par pahuchati hai--:)

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«Reply #11 on: January 26, 2011, 08:06:45 PM »
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kya baat hai niraala ji shukriya aapka...

Intezar !

Quote from: nirala on January 26, 2011, 08:02:12 PM
ye teri muskaan bhi kya gazab dhati hai
       
betaab dil ki tamannao ko saatwe aasmaan par pahuchati hai--:)

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«Reply #12 on: January 26, 2011, 08:07:45 PM »
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jhuk kar teri ye nigaahein mujhse kehti hain...
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«Reply #13 on: January 26, 2011, 08:16:08 PM »
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jhuk kar teri ye nigahen mujh se kahti hain---
       kitna bada bewkoof hai Mohabbat ka Izhaar hi nahi karta

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khamosh lafz---
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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2011, 09:30:33 PM »
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Insh'Allah main participate karne iss thread main zaroor aunga..
Filhaal main tariff karne aya hoon mere Intezar dost ki soch ka..
Kya baat hai yaar..
khoob...
Aise toh shandaar ashaar banenge..
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Ab tak sab mast hai aur agey insh'Allah aur mast
hojaega..
Khush rahiye..!
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