|
Intezar
Guest
|
|
«Reply #15 on: January 26, 2011, 09:44:27 PM » |
|
aapki har baat ka shukriya... aap ki duaaon ka bahut bahut shukriya... Ameen aur aapka Intezar rahega... Intezar ! Insh'Allah main participate karne iss thread main zaroor aunga.. Filhaal main tariff karne aya hoon mere Intezar dost ki soch ka.. Kya baat hai yaar.. khoob... Aise toh shandaar ashaar banenge..  Ab tak sab mast hai aur agey insh'Allah aur mast hojaega.. Khush rahiye..! |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
|
dead heart
Guest
|
 |
«Reply #16 on: January 26, 2011, 11:12:53 PM » |
|
Main aya toh koi last line nahin hai isiliye main hi pehli line de deta hoon..
Main apna ek ashk baha deta hoon samander main..
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Intezar
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #17 on: January 26, 2011, 11:44:34 PM » |
|
Main apna ek ashk baha deta hoon samandar mein dekhna ek katra hi samandar me aag lagaa dega... !Main aya toh koi last line nahin hai isiliye main hi pehli line de deta hoon..
Main apna ek ashk baha deta hoon samander main..
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
dead heart
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #18 on: January 26, 2011, 11:56:50 PM » |
|
Bahaut khoob dost..
Apne line nahin di..
Khair main apni hi line par kuch naya likh doun..
Main apna ek ashk baha deta hoon samander main,
Tum dhundlo, toh tumhe bhoolne ko tayar hoon..
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Intezar
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #19 on: January 27, 2011, 12:00:13 AM » |
|
bahut khoob rahim bhai... aaj jab utha hai jikra bewafaayi ka to main keh du... Bahaut khoob dost..
Apne line nahin di..
Khair main apni hi line par kuch naya likh doun..
Main apna ek ashk baha deta hoon samander main,
Tum dhundlo, toh tumhe bhoolne ko tayar hoon..
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
dead heart
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #20 on: January 27, 2011, 12:11:52 AM » |
|
Shukriya..
Aj jab utha hai zikr bewaffai ka toh main keh du,
Yaaron woh bhari mehfilon main badnaam nahin hona chahiye..
Meri nazmon main naam jo uska aya..
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
ANAAM
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #21 on: January 27, 2011, 03:43:16 AM » |
|
Meri nazmon main naam jo uska aya.....
Dil mai sukoon aur ek nashila jaam sa aaya.....
Meri nazmon mai uska naam kya aya.....
Bhari mehfil mai jaano Bhuchaal sa aaya
Shukriya..
Aj jab utha hai zikr bewaffai ka toh main keh du,
Yaaron woh bhari mehfilon main badnaam nahin hona chahiye..
Meri nazmon main naam jo uska aya..
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #22 on: January 27, 2011, 04:08:33 AM » |
|
Nice Thread Intezar Bhai
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
Rau: 19
 Offline
Gender: 
Waqt Bitaya:67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle
Posts: 5603 Member Since: Jun 2010
|
|
|
«Reply #23 on: January 27, 2011, 04:11:14 AM » |
|
Meri nazmon main naam jo uska aya.....
Dil na jane kitne deewano ka tadpaya...!!!
aakhir aaj khafa ho hi gaya wo humse...........
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manjum
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #24 on: January 27, 2011, 04:16:34 AM » |
|
wah kya baat hai.... is baat ki...
to ham bhi shamil ho jate hain is main..
"aakhir aaj khafa ho hi gaya wo hamse.
jo karta tha jaan lutane ki baaten."
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
ANAAM
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #25 on: January 27, 2011, 04:54:54 AM » |
|
Aakhir aaj khafa ho hi gaye wo humse..........
Toda waada naa ruthenge wo umra bhar humse..... Meri nazmon main naam jo uska aya.....
Dil na jane kitne deewano ka tadpaya...!!!
aakhir aaj khafa ho hi gaya wo humse...........
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
Rau: 19
Offline
Gender:
Waqt Bitaya:67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle
Posts: 5603 Member Since: Jun 2010
|
|
|
«Reply #26 on: January 27, 2011, 05:02:29 AM » |
|
Toda waada naa ruthenge wo umra bhar humse.....
aaj katrakar nazrein fer gaye dekho wo humse...!!!
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
nirala
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #27 on: January 27, 2011, 05:52:28 AM » |
|
mere liye koi aasaan sa line do yaar  |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
AbhiTamrakar
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #28 on: January 27, 2011, 06:08:10 AM » |
|
wah intezar ji kya khoob game hai...
ko last line anhi mili mujhe anu ji ki last line ko hi aage badha deta hun~
Aaj katrakar nazren fer gaye wo hamse
ek bar fir meri muhabbat ko ruswa kar diya~
jo bacha ke rakha tha kamsin nigahon se dil ko...
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
Rau: 19
Offline
Gender:
Waqt Bitaya:67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle
Posts: 5603 Member Since: Jun 2010
|
|
|
«Reply #29 on: January 27, 2011, 06:10:08 AM » |
|
mere liye koi aasaan sa line do yaar
sher likh do nirale mastwale tum do charbolo ab kya kehte ho yaar.....mere liye koi aasaan sa line do yaar
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
on eTI community..
