<>*Aap kya badle*<>

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<>*Aap kya badle*<>


Aap kya badle mausam badal gaya
Ek pal me jeene se dil hi uth gaya
Aaj ki raat badi bhaari gujri hai
Aankhon hi aankhon me chaand chhup gaya

Raat badli aur ek naya din aaya
Chaand chhupa ek naya suraj laya
Mere jazbaat badle ye maine paya
Khud ko kho diya jab tujhe badla hua paya

Teri panahon mein chhupke sab kuch bhulaya
Khud ko tere sath bahot hi mehfuz paya
Subah khud ko jab aaine me dekha to
Apna hi chehra mujhe ajnabi nazar aaya…!!!!

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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2010, 04:24:32 PM »
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Kasak jee Aadaad.......!

Aapki shayari per koi comment nahi kareNge ...
KyuN ke humari samjh meiN hi kuch nahi aaya...  Is it SO!


Humne aik kavita likhi thi.... uski kuch panktiyaaN
Share karte hai.......


Mann Bawara hota hai
zara sambhal kar chalna
rasta dekhte hi chal na padna


waqt sukhi ret ki tarha hai
haat mein nahi thaharta
Kewal lakhsya ki sochna
lakshya hia murgtushna

pyaasa rah ker bhi tuu
gili mitti sa hii rahna
sapne hia mata pita ke
tu har sapne mein dhalna



         

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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2010, 06:38:37 PM »
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Hmmm... kuch kuch samajne ki koshish ki humne aapki is kavita ko aur khoob samjha hai humne.. baahar aaiye aap dard ke samundar se.. bahut gehra hota hai ye samundar... [ar mast likha hai.. ek dum dard-e-dil...


jeene ke liye parivartan jaruri hai,
tanhaayi me kisi ka saath jaruri hai,
mushkil hota hai dard ko akele sehna,
haathon me kisi ka haath jaruri hai,

poori nahi hoti maangi har duwa apni,
jeene ke liye bas ek aas jaruri hai,
aaj kaale baadal hain to kal suraj hoga,
khushnuma sa bas ek ehsaas jaruri hai,

aansuon se zindagi nahi ji jaati,
jeene k liye muskuraana jaruri hai,
ek khoobsurat geet hai zindagi,
use har pal gungunana jaruri hai...


aur Parwaaz ji aapne bhi bahut achcha likha hai...
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2010, 07:09:31 PM »
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tu rukh pe jo zulfen gira de... to phir ek aur shaam ho jaye,
to doob kar teri aagosh me Intezar phir ek baar badnaam ho jaye.!

aakhri 4 lines mein aap ne kya baat kahi hai Kasak ji... Kya baat hai...!
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2010, 10:36:10 AM »
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 bohat umda likha hai aapne Anaamika ji Applause Applause Applause
maine bhi ek choti si koshish ki hai shayad aapko pasand aaye.......

Aap kya badle meri zindagi ka maksad badal gaya
jaane us ek pal mein humein kya ho gaya
Har pal takte rahe aapki surat ko hum
ajnabi nighahon se aapki manzar badal gaya...




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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2010, 10:38:31 AM »
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Kasak jee Aadaad.......!

Aapki shayari per koi comment nahi kareNge ...
KyuN ke humari samjh meiN hi kuch nahi aaya...  Is it SO!


Humne aik kavita likhi thi.... uski kuch panktiyaaN
Share karte hai.......


Mann Bawara hota hai
zara sambhal kar chalna
rasta dekhte hi chal na padna


waqt sukhi ret ki tarha hai
haat mein nahi thaharta
Kewal lakhsya ki sochna
lakshya hia murgtushna

pyaasa rah ker bhi tuu
gili mitti sa hii rahna
sapne hia mata pita ke
tu har sapne mein dhalna



         



bohat khoob parwaaz Sahab.... Applause Applause Applause



Hmmm... kuch kuch samajne ki koshish ki humne aapki is kavita ko aur khoob samjha hai humne.. baahar aaiye aap dard ke samundar se.. bahut gehra hota hai ye samundar... [ar mast likha hai.. ek dum dard-e-dil...


jeene ke liye parivartan jaruri hai,
tanhaayi me kisi ka saath jaruri hai,
mushkil hota hai dard ko akele sehna,
haathon me kisi ka haath jaruri hai,

poori nahi hoti maangi har duwa apni,
jeene ke liye bas ek aas jaruri hai,
aaj kaale baadal hain to kal suraj hoga,
khushnuma sa bas ek ehsaas jaruri hai,

aansuon se zindagi nahi ji jaati,
jeene k liye muskuraana jaruri hai,
ek khoobsurat geet hai zindagi,
use har pal gungunana jaruri hai...


aur Parwaaz ji aapne bhi bahut achcha likha hai...



bohat umda likha hai aapne Janaab... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2010, 10:56:08 AM »
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bahut khoob ji anu jiii behetreen [peshkash he


or parwaaz sahab or kapil ji ne to mehfil ka rukh hi mod diya jaise~bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2010, 11:29:45 AM »
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bADLE BADLE MERE SARKAAR NAZAR AATE HAIN.......... icon_king icon_queen

<>*Aap kya badle*<>


Aap kya badle mausam badal gaya
Ek pal me jeene se dil hi uth gaya
Aaj ki raat badi bhaari gujri hai
Aankhon hi aankhon me chaand chhup gaya

Raat badli aur ek naya din aaya
Chaand chhupa ek naya suraj laya
Mere jazbaat badle ye maine paya
Khud ko kho diya jab tujhe badla hua paya

Teri panahon mein chhupke sab kuch bhulaya
Khud ko tere sath bahot hi mehfuz paya
Subah khud ko jab aaine me dekha to
Apna hi chehra mujhe ajnabi nazar aaya…!!!!

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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2010, 02:38:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kashish ji...!!!



bohat umda likha hai aapne Janaab... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2010, 02:38:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji...!!!

bahut khoob ji anu jiii behetreen [peshkash he


or parwaaz sahab or kapil ji ne to mehfil ka rukh hi mod diya jaise~bahut bahut khoob
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