aasmaan ke shahzade

by Tuhina on February 18, 2013, 12:43:17 PM
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hanthon  me  satrangi  patang ....                    
Aur  charakhi   me  lapete , ........      
Ganth  lage  dhage                                  
Ankhon  me  unchi  udaan ...      
Honthon  sang   bandhe  .........        
Befikari  ki   muskaan ....                                              
Nanhi  hatheliyon  se  dhool  ko  gira............    
karate  hue  hava  ki  pehchaan  ...
Patang  ke  saath  bandhate  hue.....              
Apni  nanhi  kaaya  ke  vishaal  armaan
patang  ke  saath  vicharati  ankhon  me    
aisa  tej    chamakata  hai .....                            
Ki  surya  bh  inki  taraf ....                
Dekhane  me   darta  hai ....                                            
Aakash  ko  saamrajya  maan ,      
patango  ko  talvaron  sa  ladate
kitane  haseen  lagate  hain ,          
aasmaan  ke  shahzade.....

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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2013, 01:35:59 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2013, 05:00:09 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut khoob Tuhina ji.. aapke post ke lines thode bikhre huye the, maine set kar diyaa hai,.... ummeed kartaa hoon aapko buraa  nahi lagaa hogaa...!!1
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bahut  bahut  dhanyavaad  hriday  jee.....,      bahut  shukriya.
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2013, 06:41:51 PM »
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you are welcome Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2013, 06:58:51 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2013, 01:02:19 AM »
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bahut khoob
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 Applause Applause
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Good one..
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«Reply #11 on: February 19, 2013, 09:57:05 AM »
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shukriya  sarfira  jee,  nand jee ,  aqsh  jee,   hasan  sahab ,  rajan jee, saini  jee,  sabhi  ka  bahut   bahut  shukriya....
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2013, 11:07:16 AM »
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wah wah wah kya baat hai ,
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shukriya ,  aarish  jee....
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