AAZAD BHARAT SONE KI CHIDIYA...

by soudagar on June 05, 2012, 04:16:13 PM
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Phir gulam hone chala, har taraf charcha vishesh hai
apne hi kaputo ke hatho, bik raha mera desh hai

jin hathon mein di thi taqat humne desh ko aage badhane ki
unhi napak taqatwar hatho se , peet raha mera desh hai

rishwatkhori, bhrastachar,durachar fail raha hai charo aor
hansi udata sara sansar, sharmindgi se jhuk gaya mera desh hai

nari ko yahan mile gyan nahi, nari ko mile yahan samman nahi
aaj nari ki ijjat ke roop mein loot raha mera desh hai

yuva hua nashe ka aadi, bache mang rahe hai bheekh
bujurgo se chhena ghar bhar, vartman mein aisa hua mera desh hai

hum karte hai bhavishya ki batein,desh ko nai unchaiyon par le jayenge
par aaj khun kharaba, balatkar, lootpat jaise apradho se zameen mein gda mera desh hai

VEER SAHIDO NE SUNDER SAPNA DEKHA THA,AAZAD BHARAT KO SONE KI CHIDIYA BANTE DEKHA THA
"SOUDAGAR" RO RAHI HAI VEER SAHIDO KI AATMA,KYA HUMNE AISA CHAHA THA JAISA AAJ HAMARA DESH HAI
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2012, 11:04:45 PM »
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bahut badiya.. Applause Applause
Yeh shayari Watan section mein suit karta hai. Bahut umda peshkash... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2012, 01:24:53 AM »
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saudagar ji,
bahut achhi rachna hai desh ki halat par  tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
rachna ke liye Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause.badhai aur ek rau
rachna ko miscellaneous mein hi rahne do kyoki shairi e vatan mein desh ki stuti aati hai.
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2012, 01:43:54 AM »
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awesome bro.aaj desh ke yahi halat hai.
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2012, 02:57:37 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya malli ji..........par yahan main ahujawad ji ki baat se sehmat hoon shayri-e-watan  mein watan ki satuti ki jati hai ...yahan watan ke halat jahir kiye hai ... waise yeh watan se jude hai isliye ise shayari e watan mein bhi post kiya ja sakta hai... par is rachna ki sahi jgah yahin hai.....baki to yahan ke senior jyada achhi tarah se bta sakte hai aur aap yahan ki ek seniour hai  isliye hum aapki baat ko bhi ignore nahi kar sakte....sarahna ke liye bahut bahut dhanywad.....
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2012, 03:00:22 AM »
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tah-e-dil se dhanywad ahuja ji.......aapki rachna padh to mantra mugdh hua....aap lajawab likhte hai ....
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2012, 03:34:50 AM »
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bahut khoob soudagar ji aapne ek talkh sachhaai bayaan ki hai aapko saadhuwaad detaa hoon aur ek rau nazr kartaa hoon
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2012, 05:43:48 AM »
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bahot  khoob Saudagar ji--
lagta hai aapne desh ko jada kareeb se dekha hai ya shayd news dekhne ke saukeen hain--
yahi halat hai desh ki
lekin iske ulat bhi ek tasveer hai humare desh ki--jo baht khubsurat hai--

mai iss type ke post ko shayri e vatan ka darza kabhi nahi dunga

khus rahen
likhte rahen

sukriya
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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2012, 06:50:35 AM »
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bohot khub saudagar ji.
is samay ki bilkul sahi tasveer bayaan ki hai apne.
par hum yahi umeed rakhte he ki yeh tasveer jald hi badal jaegi...
aue ek rau aap k lie..
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2012, 08:02:19 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 06, 2012, 02:57:37 AM
bahut bahut shukriya malli ji..........par yahan main ahujawad ji ki baat se sehmat hoon shayri-e-watan  mein watan ki satuti ki jati hai ...yahan watan ke halat jahir kiye hai ... waise yeh watan se jude hai isliye ise shayari e watan mein bhi post kiya ja sakta hai... par is rachna ki sahi jgah yahin hai.....baki to yahan ke senior jyada achhi tarah se bta sakte hai aur aap yahan ki ek seniour hai  isliye hum aapki baat ko bhi ignore nahi kar sakte....sarahna ke liye bahut bahut dhanywad.....


Quote from: soudagar on June 06, 2012, 03:00:22 AM
tah-e-dil se dhanywad ahuja ji.......aapki rachna padh to mantra mugdh hua....aap lajawab likhte hai ....
saudagar ji,
mera naam ahujawad nahi ahuja ghansham das hai ya gd ahuja kah sakte hain.aapne mera sujhav maante hue rachna miscellaaneous mein hi rakhi dhanyvaad infact yeh hamaare sr.saini sir ji hi jaana hai maine, halanki mein bhi kuchh is tarah ki rachnayen shairee -e- vatan mein post kar chuka hoon anjane mein magar ab nahi karoonga.aapne meri rachnayen padi uske liye dhanyvaad ummeed hai anya lekhak aur pathakgan bhi apni rai denge.
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2012, 09:17:51 AM »
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Bahut achha Saudagar Jee. Ek Rau meri taraf se aapki is rachna per.
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2012, 12:11:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya. Saini sir...aapne saraha achha lga
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«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2012, 01:46:09 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya  sarfira ji..... par maine mere desh ko aisa kewal news mein nahi dekha..  jo samne ho raha hai wahin bayan kar raha hoon.....
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«Reply #13 on: June 07, 2012, 05:02:14 PM »
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rachna ke padhne ke liye bahut bahut aabhar prakat karta hoon malli ji..
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«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2012, 02:19:24 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya akash ji.
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