aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............

by laaiba on October 30, 2013, 06:11:49 PM
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 dil pe iik nashter chaLaa kar dekhe gain
hAm use rasman bhuLaa kar dekhe gain

dooriyon kee aa.g mein ab to pal pal,.....
ham zaRaa khud ko jaLaa kar dekhe gaiN

woh bhalaa anjaa.n kab thaa magar ab
raazE dil uss ko baTaa ker dekhe gaiN,.

daastaan e  dil  ulajh see gayee hai,...
ab ye uljhan bhee miTaa ker dekhe gaiN,
 
hai talab un koh hamaaRee hi jab toh,
un ke dil koh aaZmaa ker dekhe gain,.

dil ki dharkan per likhaa naam jab ik,..
jaa.n  hAm uss per lutaa ker dekhe gaiN
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2013, 06:14:21 PM »
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superb laajawaab bahut shaandaar peshkash dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2013, 06:19:32 PM »
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bohat bohat shuqria sir aapkaa,..........
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2013, 06:23:51 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 30, 2013, 06:11:49 PM

 dil pe iik nashter chaLaa kar dekhe gain
hAm use rasman bhuLaa kar dekhe gain

dooriyon kee aa.g mein ab to pal pal,.....
ham zaRaa khud ko jaLaa kar dekhe gaiN

woh bhalaa anjaa.n kab thaa magar ab
raazE dil uss ko baTaa ker dekhe gaiN,.

daastaan e  dil  ulajh see gayee hai,...
ab ye uljhan bhee miTaa ker dekhe gaiN,
 
hai talab un koh hamaaRee hi jab toh,
un ke dil koh aaZmaa ker dekhe gain,.

dil ki dharkan per likhaa naam jab ik,..
jaa.n  hAm uss per lutaa ker dekhe gaiN



Justttttttttt Beautiful Laaiba ji....

Beautiful Emotions Poured Into Words......Loveddddddddd It


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Mere Liye Bahut Mushkil Hai Kisi Ek Yaa Do Ashaar Ko Chuuna..Muqammal Ghazal Hi Lajawaab Hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2013, 06:26:54 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 30, 2013, 06:11:49 PM

 dil pe iik nashter chaLaa kar dekhe gain
hAm use rasman bhuLaa kar dekhe gain

dooriyon kee aa.g mein ab to pal pal,.....
ham zaRaa khud ko jaLaa kar dekhe gaiN

woh bhalaa anjaa.n kab thaa magar ab
raazE dil uss ko baTaa ker dekhe gaiN,.

daastaan e  dil  ulajh see gayee hai,...
ab ye uljhan bhee miTaa ker dekhe gaiN,
 
hai talab un koh hamaaRee hi jab toh,
un ke dil koh aaZmaa ker dekhe gain,.

dil ki dharkan per likhaa naam jab ik,..
jaa.n  hAm uss per lutaa ker dekhe gaiN


with rau ,ma'am
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2013, 06:30:16 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on October 30, 2013, 06:23:51 PM

Justttttttttt Beautiful Laaiba ji....

Beautiful Emotions Poured Into Words......Loveddddddddd It


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Mere Liye Bahut Mushkil Hai Kisi Ek Yaa Do Ashaar Ko Chuuna..Muqammal Ghazal Hi Lajawaab Hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
bohat bohat shuqria khwahish ji aapkaa,...
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2013, 06:31:21 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on October 30, 2013, 06:26:54 PM
with rau ,ma'am
thanku soo much mb aapkaa, & thnx for rau Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2013, 06:41:17 PM »
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waaahhhhh ...bahut bahut khoob....Bahut hi achi Ghazal kahi aapne laaiba ji,
Ye ahsaar kafi pasand aaye ...
Applause Applause
dooriyon kee aa.g mein ab to pal pal,.....
ham zaRaa khud ko jaLaa kar dekhe gaiN

woh bhalaa anjaa.n kab thaa magar ab
raazE dil uss ko baTaa ker dekhe gaiN,.

dil ki dharkan per likhaa naam jab ik,..
jaa.n  hAm uss per lutaa ker dekhe gaiN..

Dheron Daad.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 30, 2013, 06:44:24 PM »
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VERY NICE LAIBA JI BOHUT UMDA PESHKASH  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 30, 2013, 07:00:29 PM »
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Laibaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob jee badi asardar kalaam kahi hai aapne, ahsaas O khayaal ki gehraai behad khoob rahi jee...

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #10 on: October 30, 2013, 07:14:16 PM »
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Waaahhhh........ bahot si daad dear. bahot accha likha hai tumne, likhti rehna.. khush raho..

woh bhalaa anjaa.n kab thaa magar ab
raazE dil uss ko baTaa ker dekhe gaiN

Sidra
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2013, 08:07:36 PM »
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Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaah... bahut bahut khoooooooooob laaiba ji... dheron dheron daaaaad...
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«Reply #13 on: October 30, 2013, 09:00:29 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 30, 2013, 06:11:49 PM

 dil pe iik nashter chaLaa kar dekhe gain
hAm use rasman bhuLaa kar dekhe gain

dooriyon kee aa.g mein ab to pal pal,.....
ham zaRaa khud ko jaLaa kar dekhe gaiN

woh bhalaa anjaa.n kab thaa magar ab
raazE dil uss ko baTaa ker dekhe gaiN,.

daastaan e  dil  ulajh see gayee hai,...
ab ye uljhan bhee miTaa ker dekhe gaiN,
 
hai talab un koh hamaaRee hi jab toh,
un ke dil koh aaZmaa ker dekhe gain,.

dil ki dharkan per likhaa naam jab ik,..
jaa.n  hAm uss per lutaa ker dekhe gaiN


veriiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #14 on: October 30, 2013, 09:31:56 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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