aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............ -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #15 on: October 30, 2013, 10:48:14 PM »

Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on October 30, 2013, 06:41:17 PM

waaahhhhh ...bahut bahut khoob....Bahut hi achi Ghazal kahi aapne laaiba ji,
Ye ahsaar kafi pasand aaye ...
Applause

dooriyon kee aa.g mein ab to pal pal,.....
ham zaRaa khud ko jaLaa kar dekhe gaiN

woh bhalaa anjaa.n kab thaa magar ab
raazE dil uss ko baTaa ker dekhe gaiN,.

dil ki dharkan per likhaa naam jab ik,..
jaa.n hAm uss per lutaa ker dekhe gaiN..

Dheron Daad.. Applause

bohat shuqria,..........


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Re: aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............

«Reply #16 on: October 30, 2013, 10:49:58 PM »

Quote from: saahill on October 30, 2013, 06:44:24 PM

VERY NICE LAIBA JI BOHUT UMDA PESHKASH Applause

shuqria saahil jee,...............


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Re: aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............

«Reply #17 on: October 30, 2013, 10:51:20 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 30, 2013, 07:00:29 PM

Laibaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob jee badi asardar kalaam kahi hai aapne, ahsaas O khayaal ki gehraai behad khoob rahi jee...

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

bohat shuqria aapkaa parwaaz jee,............


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Re: aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............

«Reply #18 on: October 30, 2013, 11:11:41 PM »

Quote from: laaiba on October 30, 2013, 06:11:49 PM

dil pe iik nashter chaLaa kar dekhe gain
hAm use rasman bhuLaa kar dekhe gain

dooriyon kee aa.g mein ab to pal pal,.....
ham zaRaa khud ko jaLaa kar dekhe gaiN

woh bhalaa anjaa.n kab thaa magar ab
raazE dil uss ko baTaa ker dekhe gaiN,.

daastaan e dil ulajh see gayee hai,...
ab ye uljhan bhee miTaa ker dekhe gaiN,

hai talab un koh hamaaRee hi jab toh,
un ke dil koh aaZmaa ker dekhe gain,.

dil ki dharkan per likhaa naam jab ik,..
jaa.n hAm uss per lutaa ker dekhe gaiN

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause


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Re: aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............

«Reply #19 on: October 30, 2013, 11:14:03 PM »

bahot khooob Applause


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«Reply #20 on: October 31, 2013, 01:11:03 AM »

bahut bahut umda likha hai laaiba jee..

laajawabi ki misaal raha ye kalaam..

Dhero dhero daad..


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Re: aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............

«Reply #21 on: October 31, 2013, 02:20:56 AM »

Laaiba ji jaise kuch cheeje anmol hoti hai thik waise hi aapke post ka koi jawab hi nahi

jus Awesome n a masterpiece. ......

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Re: aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............

«Reply #22 on: October 31, 2013, 02:46:51 AM »

Good One.


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Re: aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............

«Reply #23 on: October 31, 2013, 03:16:45 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on October 30, 2013, 06:11:49 PM

dil pe iik nashter chaLaa kar dekhe gain
hAm use rasman bhuLaa kar dekhe gain
bahut badi qurbaani hai laaiba icon_flower

dooriyon kee aa.g mein ab to pal pal,.....
ham zaRaa khud ko jaLaa kar dekhe gaiN
dangerous experiment icon_silent

woh bhalaa anjaa.n kab thaa magar ab
raazE dil uss ko baTaa ker dekhe gaiN,.
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daastaan e dil ulajh see gayee hai,...
ab ye uljhan bhee miTaa ker dekhe gaiN,
Clapping Smiley

hai talab un koh hamaaRee hi jab toh,
un ke dil koh aaZmaa ker dekhe gain,.
Clapping Smiley

dil ki dharkan per likhaa naam jab ik,..
jaa.n hAm uss per lutaa ker dekhe gaiN

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wah wah wah !

main tumhein bahut C daad nahin A 2 Z daad deti hoo.n !


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Re: aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............

«Reply #24 on: October 31, 2013, 03:19:35 AM »

dooriyon kee aa.g mein ab to pal pal,.....
ham zaRaa khud ko jaLaa kar dekhe gaiN

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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #26 on: October 31, 2013, 09:01:26 PM »

aa.p sab hee kaa bohat bohat shuqria,..................


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Re: aaZmaa ker dekhe gaiN,............

«Reply #27 on: October 31, 2013, 09:10:16 PM »

dooriyon kee aa.g mein ab to pal pal,.....

woh bhalaa anjaa.n kab thaa magar ab
raazE dil uss ko baTaa ker dekhe gaiN,.

daastaan e dil ulajh see gayee hai,...
ab ye uljhan bhee miTaa ker dekhe gaiN,

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