Ab dil darta hai...

by brokenbyluv on December 16, 2009, 06:50:25 PM
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Vo ek hi hai jo lakho mein apna lagne laga hai,
per sach kahu tou kisise dil lagne se dil darta hai..

chahta hai vo mujhe mhbt ki hadh tak,
per sach kahu tou phir se muskurane se dil darta hai..

merre khuabo ki mhbt merre saamne hai,
per sach kahu tou kisi k paas jaane se dil darta hai..

gar chahu main hath badha k ek pal mein use apna bana lu,
per sach kahu tou kisiko apna banane se dil darta hai..

merri mhbt se use bhi mhbt hai bepanah,
per sach kahu tou pyar mein doob jaane se dil darta hai.......
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2009, 07:34:20 PM »
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Wah Geet ji.kamaal ke likhti ho aap.marvelous creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:pliz mujhe bhi batao.kaun hai woh kushnaseeb. icon_scratch hello2 hello2
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2009, 07:44:33 PM »
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thnx alot madhuji..madhuji vo jo bhi hai kuch hi palo k liye hai merri zindgi mein isliye uske ehsaas ko lafzo mein qaid kar liya hai bus itna hi keh sakti hu uske baare mein..maaf kijiyega aur kuch hoga tou apko zarur bataungi..hope u understand...
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2009, 07:48:43 PM »
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BADA HE KHUBSOORAT Nagma likha hai Geet-di aapne... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye kaisa aur kaun sa haadsaa huaa hai sang tere
Jo ab kuchh bhee karne se Dil tera darrta hai.....


Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 16, 2009, 06:50:25 PM
Vo ek hi hai jo lakho mein apna lagne laga hai,
per sach kahu tou kisise dil lagne se dil darta hai..

chahta hai vo mujhe mhbt ki hadh tak,
per sach kahu tou phir se muskurane se dil darta hai..

merre khuabo ki mhbt merre saamne hai,
per sach kahu tou kisi k paas jaane se dil darta hai..

gar chahu main hath badha k ek pal mein use apna bana lu,
per sach kahu tou kisiko apna banane se dil darta hai..

merri mhbt se use bhi mhbt hai bepanah,
per sach kahu tou pyar mein doob jaane se dil darta hai.......
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2009, 07:51:06 PM »
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thnx alot koyal...hadse tou hote rehte hai isi ka naam zindgi hai...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2009, 04:13:42 AM »
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Very nice one indeed Geet Ji
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Shayaries_King
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2009, 09:14:58 AM »
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Nice Lines Great Job Geet Ji Applause Applause Applause
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2009, 10:47:32 AM »
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Haadse he jab zindagi ho gayee hai
Phir sakhi kyu tera Dil darta hai

Kar le sakhi jo bhee karne ko dil tera kehta hai
Sach kahu darr se tere DIL ka ab na koi rishta hai

Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 16, 2009, 07:51:06 PM
thnx alot koyal...hadse tou hote rehte hai isi ka naam zindgi hai...
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guhar
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«Reply #8 on: December 17, 2009, 12:37:08 PM »
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geet,
jo bhi kuch hai ,
ye mat socho ki wo yaadon me kya chod jaayega
 ...sirf dil ko jo khushi de us ke saath jaao
..kyoki jisse aaj dil hansa hai.
..wo kal lab ko bhi hasaaiga...

sirf nazariyaa badlo
khoobsurat badsurat ,
usi ki paidaaish hein.
kaun hadso se bach paaya hai,
har thokar ka dar
theek se chalna sikha deta hai.
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #9 on: December 17, 2009, 03:42:22 PM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Geet Ji Aapne And Nice Response Koyal JI


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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2009, 05:55:10 PM »
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Wah wah Guhar good response..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kabhi kabhi lagta hai hamaara soch ek sa hai......
Hum same wave length mai sochte aur likhte hai....

Geet-di Nazariyaa badlo ye Guhar ki guhaar hai....


Quote from: guhar on December 17, 2009, 12:37:08 PM
geet,
jo bhi kuch hai ,
ye mat socho ki wo yaadon me kya chod jaayega
 ...sirf dil ko jo khushi de us ke saath jaao
..kyoki jisse aaj dil hansa hai.
..wo kal lab ko bhi hasaaiga...

sirf nazariyaa badlo
khoobsurat badsurat ,
usi ki paidaaish hein.
kaun hadso se bach paaya hai,
har thokar ka dar
theek se chalna sikha deta hai.
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2009, 06:17:41 PM »
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Aapke likhe alfaaz aapke dil ka haal byaan kar rahe hai...bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Koyal ji & Guhar ji aap dono ne bahut accha jwaab diya.... Applause Applause Applause
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2009, 06:49:26 PM »
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Geet-di n jaane kin geeton k creation mai lagi huyee hain....aaj aayee nahi lagti...Dil se likhti hai Geet....

Thanks once again Pooja-di for appriciating our work...


Quote from: Nikhaar on December 17, 2009, 06:17:41 PM
Aapke likhe alfaaz aapke dil ka haal byaan kar rahe hai...bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Koyal ji & Guhar ji aap dono ne bahut accha jwaab diya.... Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #13 on: December 17, 2009, 07:30:09 PM »
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Nice response Guhar Ji n Koyal Ji
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #14 on: December 18, 2009, 08:58:09 AM »
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Thanks Rajeshji......

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 17, 2009, 07:30:09 PM
Nice response Guhar Ji n Koyal Ji
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