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mamta bajpai
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Ab kaheeN aur chaleN chal ke baseraa kar leN
raat jaatee hee nahee khud hee saveraa kar leN
sun leN bhaNwareN ! nahee hai phool kee aamad un tak
baad muddat ke bahaar aayee hai pheraa kar leN
jalte sooraj ne tapish hadd se baRhaa dee mujhme
zulf ke saaye ko kuchh aur ghaneraa kar leN
yuN to bastee rahee bastee yahaaN ghamkhwaaroN kee
aayeN khushiyaaN kabhee is dar pe bhee deraa kar leN
aaj hee soyee hai 'Maa' thak ke bahut jeevan se
baad me phir kabhee hum yuN teraa meraa kar leN
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Iftakhar Ahmad
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2012, 04:11:47 PM » |
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Waah Mamta Jee, Bahut Khoob. khaastaur pe Zulf ke saaye waala she'r bahut achha laga.
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2012, 04:14:28 PM » |
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Aur issi k saath aapke Rau ka bhi udghatan kiye deta hu.n
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2012, 04:21:33 PM » |
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Waah ji waah bhoot khoob.
Kya saandar kalam kha h aapne.
Parkar bahut achcha laga.
Aap hamari daad kabool kare
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2012, 05:56:14 PM » |
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thodaa likha hai aapne aur bahut zordaar aur khubsoorat likha hai ..
mujhe aap se shikayat hai aap YOINDIA pe bahut hi kam aate ho |
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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2012, 03:34:03 AM » |
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saahill
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«Reply #6 on: May 03, 2012, 03:50:06 AM » |
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boht khub mamta ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2012, 06:49:48 AM » |
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Bahot Khoob Mamtaji!!! Dheron daad aur ek rau qubool karein.
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sarfira
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2012, 09:30:57 AM » |
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baht khoob ghazal se nawaza hai aapne bazm ko Mamta jee--
daad kubul karen
han meri shikayat bhi yhi ki aap bht kam time de ehi Yoindia Shayariadab ko--plzz thora ar time dene ki kosis karen
khus rahen
muskurate rahen
aate rahen
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2012, 09:31:42 AM » |
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baht khoob ghazal se nawaza hai aapne bazm ko Mamta jee--
daad kubul karen
han meri shikayat bhi yhi ki aap bht kam time de ehi Yoindia Shayariadab ko--plzz thora ar time dene ki kosis karen
khus rahen
muskurate rahen
aate rahen
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2012, 05:21:29 AM » |
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