Ab kaheeN aur chaleN.................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on May 02, 2012, 04:06:36 PM
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Ab kaheeN aur chaleN chal ke baseraa kar leN
raat jaatee hee nahee khud hee saveraa kar leN

sun leN bhaNwareN ! nahee hai phool kee aamad un tak
baad muddat ke bahaar aayee hai pheraa kar leN

jalte sooraj ne tapish hadd se baRhaa dee mujhme
zulf ke saaye ko kuchh aur ghaneraa kar leN

yuN to bastee rahee bastee yahaaN ghamkhwaaroN kee
aayeN khushiyaaN kabhee is dar pe bhee deraa kar leN

aaj hee soyee hai 'Maa' thak ke bahut jeevan se
baad me phir kabhee hum yuN teraa meraa kar leN

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2012, 04:11:47 PM »
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Waah Mamta Jee, Bahut Khoob. khaastaur pe Zulf ke saaye waala she'r bahut achha laga.
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2012, 04:14:28 PM »
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Aur issi k saath aapke Rau ka bhi udghatan kiye deta hu.n
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2012, 04:21:33 PM »
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Waah ji waah bhoot khoob.
Kya saandar kalam kha h aapne.
Parkar bahut achcha laga.
Aap hamari daad kabool kare
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2012, 05:56:14 PM »
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Ab kaheeN aur chaleN chal ke baseraa kar leN
raat jaatee hee nahee khud hee saveraa kar leN
wah wah wah............! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sun leN bhaNwareN ! nahee hai phool kee aamad un tak
baad muddat ke bahaar aayee hai pheraa kar leN
bahut khoob............! Applause Applause Applause
jalte sooraj ne tapish hadd se baRhaa dee mujhme
zulf ke saaye ko kuchh aur ghaneraa kar leN
wah wah wah...........! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
yuN to bastee rahee bastee yahaaN ghamkhwaaroN kee
aayeN khushiyaaN kabhee is dar pe bhee deraa kar leN
kyaa khoob farmayaa.ALLAH  kare aisa ho.AMIN Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
aaj hee soyee hai 'Maa' thak ke bahut jeevan se
baad me phir kabhee hum yuN teraa meraa kar leN
miiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinddddddddddddd blowing mamata ji wah ji wah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:ye sher meri taarif se parey hai
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thodaa likha hai aapne aur bahut zordaar aur khubsoorat likha hai ..
mujhe aap se shikayat hai aap YOINDIA pe bahut hi kam aate ho
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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2012, 03:34:03 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #6 on: May 03, 2012, 03:50:06 AM »
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boht khub mamta ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 03, 2012, 03:56:56 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2012, 06:49:48 AM »
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Bahot Khoob Mamtaji!!! Dheron daad aur ek rau qubool karein.
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2012, 09:30:57 AM »
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baht khoob ghazal se nawaza hai aapne bazm ko Mamta jee--
daad kubul karen

han meri shikayat bhi yhi ki aap bht kam time de ehi Yoindia Shayariadab ko--plzz thora ar time dene ki kosis karen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
aate rahen
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2012, 09:31:42 AM »
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baht khoob ghazal se nawaza hai aapne bazm ko Mamta jee--
daad kubul karen

han meri shikayat bhi yhi ki aap bht kam time de ehi Yoindia Shayariadab ko--plzz thora ar time dene ki kosis karen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
aate rahen
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2012, 09:39:13 AM »
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Ab kaheeN aur chaleN chal ke baseraa kar leN
raat jaatee hee nahee khud hee saveraa kar leN Applause Applause Applause sunny

sun leN bhaNwareN ! nahee hai phool kee aamad un tak
baad muddat ke bahaar aayee hai pheraa kar leN Applause Applause Applause icon_flower

jalte sooraj ne tapish hadd se baRhaa dee mujhme
zulf ke saaye ko kuchh aur ghaneraa kar leN Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP

yuN to bastee rahee bastee yahaaN ghamkhwaaroN kee
aayeN khushiyaaN kabhee is dar pe bhee deraa kar leN Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

aaj hee soyee hai 'Maa' thak ke bahut jeevan se  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
baad me phir kabhee hum yuN teraa meraa kar leN icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut

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Bahut hi behtrien peskash Mamta ji
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2012, 02:48:39 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  har baar ki tarha behtareen ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mamta ji....!!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2012, 05:21:29 AM »
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bahut hee khubsurat bahut umda...mamtajii
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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