Ab kuch baaqi nahin ......... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Talat on July 24, 2005, 10:55:54 AM
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Na kuch kehne ko baaqi hai na kuch sunne ko baaqi hai
Jo dil tha kab ka toot chuka na kuch ab lutne ko baaqi hai

Ek shakhs ko bohot chaha tha khwaabon main basaya tha
toot gaye wo khwaab saare na kuch bikharne ko baaqi hai

Rait par naqsh banaya tha kuch armaano ko sajaya tha
Ek rela paani ka mita gaya sab na kuch mitne ko baaqi hai

Kabhi hansa karte the ye lab aur muskurati thi aankhain
Ab to ashk bhi sookh chale hain aur kuch aahen baaqi hain !!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2005, 11:26:41 AM »
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wah talat!!!!!!!!!!! such a wonderful poem!!!!!!!!

aaj dekhte hai hum apne sunsan ashiyane ki taraf,
kabhi yaha bhi kushiyon ka chaman khila tha,
roshni karne ke liye pyar ka diya jalaya tha jo,
ussi se aag laga gaya, aisa hume bewafa shaks mila tha!
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2005, 11:35:15 AM »
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Thanks a lot Meena.... and very nice .... !!!!

Banaya tha ek ashiaana jo tinka tinka jod kar
Bijli kab ki gir chuki na kuch jalne ko baaqi hai... !!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2005, 11:56:36 AM »
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Baaqi kuch ho na ho..........saansein to baaki hai....!!

Reth ke gahre sahraaaon mein kuch paani kaa nishaan to baaki hai.!!

Zindagi mein maayoosi zaroor hai......lekin choti si ek muskaan to baaki hai.....!!!

Saari duniyaan beshak andhere mein hai....lekin suraj ka ek chota sa paighaam to baaki hai..!!!

Ashkon ke sailaab mein doob jaate hain sabhi..........kinaare par khadaa ek meherbaan to baaki hai..!!!

Mit jaayegi har cheez ek din.............lekin mit kar bhi yaad aane kaa gumaan to baki hai..........!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2005, 02:44:18 PM »
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wah wah talat and friend!! i didnt know that u r a gud  shayar as well friend ji!!!!!!! wud like to c more !!!!

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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2005, 03:27:20 PM »
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Thanks Meena and Friend ............. !!!!!

Suraj ki kirne aati hai andhere ko door karne ko
Jo mujh tak pahunch sake, wo kiran baaqi nahin

Wo muskaan jo har ghum ko door kar deti hai
Jab maine maanga, to wo muskan baaqi nahin

Sahraaon main hai paani ke kuch nishaan magar
Jo mujhko mil sake aisi koi boond baaqi nahin

Wo Meharbaan sabke liye jaan apni luta de hai
Ho sake kabhi mujh par aisi inaayat baaqi nahin !!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2005, 08:16:56 AM »
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Nice Talat................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kuch baki na honaa bhi ek khaasiyat hai................Dard aur Aaansoo.. sabhi ko thodi milte hain....!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2005, 08:33:09 AM »
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waah Talat ji , Meena ji n frd ji  ... bhoot khoob likha teeno ne !!!

dard-e-dil khud hi parwaan kiya hai
burf ne dhoop ko mehmaan kiya hai

apni fitrat ne maara hai hum ko
aur unki husrat ne pareshaan kiya hai

tajurbey zindagi ke aasan nahi thay
hur saans ne jaise ehsaan kiya hai

mayusiyon ne daaman pakdaa hai aise
hur khushi se ye mann sunsaan kiya hai !!!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2005, 08:35:52 AM »
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Thanks.... Friend.... !!!! Phir to hum khushnaseeb hain....... !!!!!!! As per name... !!!!!!

Thanks Humtum and nice one.. !!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 25, 2005, 05:10:00 PM »
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wah talat,bohat accha likha hai aapne,very touching and nice work by everyone.
 
"Hai zamane ko aaj mujhse aakhir gilaa kyon,
      shikwe karna lagta hai bhool raha hai koi,
   
      aaya thha jo sahil pe meri kashti ko dubaane,
      doob gayi aaj uski hi kashti mere sirhaane,

      laut ke na aayenge wo din,ye mujhe pata hai,
      na bhool payenge use,kaisi hui ye khata hai."
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2005, 05:13:42 PM »
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Thanks Nidhi.. aur bohot achcha likha hai tumne... !!!!!

Kuch baaqi nahin phir bhi yaadain hain teri
Base ho tum jinmain wo saansen hain meri

Palkon pe jo thahar gaye wo kuch khwaab hain
Un khwaabon main basi kuch baatain hain teri !!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2005, 05:27:28 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
wah talat,bohat accha likha hai aapne,very touching and nice work by everyone.
 
"Hai zamane ko aaj mujhse aakhir gilaa kyon,
      shikwe karna lagta hai bhool raha hai koi,
   
      aaya thha jo sahil pe meri kashti ko dubaane,
      doob gayi aaj uski hi kashti mere sirhaane,

      laut ke na aayenge wo din,ye mujhe pata hai,
      na bhool payenge use,kaisi hui ye khata hai."


hmmmmmmmmmm   very  nice  Nidhi............Talat.................

wah  jin  labon  per   yakeen  wafa mahak  na sake
phir  unke  mohabbat  ki  khwahis ho  ek  baar  bhi kyon?Huh??/
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2005, 05:31:50 PM »
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nice Talat and thanx.

"Nibhana chaha pyar par tumne mauka na diya,
      meri khamoshiyan ka kyon jawaab na diyaa,

      kya kami reh gayi thhi meri chahat me bataya to hota,
      yun na mera dil har waqt tanhaaiyon me phir rota,
     
     har farz ko pyaar ke maine anjaam diyaa hai,
     tumhi batao,kya na maine pyar me kiya hai,

     phir kyun mujhe itni badi saza de rahe ho dil lagane ki,
     kya hai wajah mujhe har pal door jaane ki...........Huh???."
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2005, 05:37:01 PM »
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Bohot achcha likha hai Nidhi..... Shayad mere paas alfaaz khatm ho gaye hain !!!!!

Thanks Waheed n nice.. !!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 25, 2005, 05:44:28 PM »
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thanx waheed and very nice tongue3

Thanx a lot TaLaT Usual Smile .
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