Ab kuch baaqi nahin ......... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Talat on July 24, 2005, 10:55:54 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 25, 2005, 05:46:44 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
nice Talat and thanx.

"Nibhana chaha pyar par tumne mauka na diya,
      meri khamoshiyan ka kyon jawaab na diyaa,

      kya kami reh gayi thhi meri chahat me bataya to hota,
      yun na mera dil har waqt tanhaaiyon me phir rota,
     
     har farz ko pyaar ke maine anjaam diyaa hai,
     tumhi batao,kya na maine pyar me kiya hai,

     phir kyun mujhe itni badi saza de rahe ho dil lagane ki,
     kya hai wajah mujhe har pal door jaane ki...........Huh???."


wow  wow  Nidhi...............kitna  touching  words likha  tumne.........thanxxxx  Talat........

Raakh  ho  jaayegi  teri  chahaton mein meri yeh  jindagi
hijar  ki  aag mein  tum  pighal jaogi mujhse  juda  hokar
youn  to  kat  jaayegi  jindagi dhoop  ke  safar mein  bhi
ab ruswaayee  ke  aansoo  mein  na  duba  mujhe  ai  jindagi......
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«Reply #16 on: July 26, 2005, 05:37:31 PM »
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thank u waheed,tumne bhi bohat acha likha hai Usual Smile !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Bharat
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«Reply #17 on: July 27, 2005, 04:55:09 PM »
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Thanks Meena and Friend ............. !!!!!

Suraj ki kirne aati hai andhere ko door karne ko
Jo mujh tak pahunch sake, wo kiran baaqi nahin

Wo muskaan jo har ghum ko door kar deti hai
Jab maine maanga, to wo muskan baaqi nahin

Sahraaon main hai paani ke kuch nishaan magar
Jo mujhko mil sake aisi koi boond baaqi nahin

Wo Meharbaan sabke liye jaan apni luta de hai
Ho sake kabhi mujh par aisi inaayat baaqi nahin !!!



Hello Talat,
Bohot acchaa likha hai aapne,
Meri likhi hui do panktiya koshish hai aap jaisa likh ne ki,


Faasle bahut badh gaye hai hamare aur unke darmiyan
Unko hum tak wapis la sake woh pukar baaqi nahi
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«Reply #18 on: July 27, 2005, 05:15:10 PM »
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Thanks a lot Bharat....... !! Usual Smile

Bohot achcha likha hai aapne....do lines main itni gehra matlab hai..... !! Very Nice... !!!

Dil se dil ki baatain ho jaati hai kuch aise
Kehne ko unse ab baat kuch baaqi nahin !!!
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«Reply #19 on: July 29, 2005, 05:05:30 PM »
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Thanks a lot Bharat....... !! Usual Smile

Bohot achcha likha hai aapne....do lines main itni gehra matlab hai..... !! Very Nice... !!!

Dil se dil ki baatain ho jaati hai kuch aise
Kehne ko unse ab baat kuch baaqi nahin !!!


Talat,

Bade behaal ho gaye hai hum unko dhundhte dhundhte
Jisko unka pata na pucha ho aisa koi shaks baaqi nani

Mai is Baaqi nahi ke baare me jyada likhne ki koshish karunga agar jyada nahi likh saka to sirf aapke liye yeh shayari pesh karta hun..........

kash "baaqi nahi" ke silsile chalte rahate barso tak "Talat"  
par "kuch baaqi nahi" ke baare me likhne ko ab kuch baaqi nahi......
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«Reply #20 on: July 29, 2005, 05:19:35 PM »
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Talat,

Bade behaal ho gaye hai hum unko dhundhte dhundhte
Jisko unka pata na pucha ho aisa koi shaks baaqi nani

Mai is Baaqi nahi ke baare me jyada likhne ki koshish karunga agar jyada nahi likh saka to sirf aapke liye yeh shayari pesh karta hun..........

kash "baaqi nahi" ke silsile chalte rahate barso tak "Talat"  
par "kuch baaqi nahi" ke baare me likhne ko ab kuch baaqi nahi......


I actually started laughing reading your last sher !!!!! Usual Smile

Anyways thanks a lot for writing here Bharat !!! Usual Smile

Aankhon main ashk jo aa thehre to poocha logon ne sabab
Kya kahen unse ki sajaane ko ab khwaab kuch baaqi nahin !!!
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«Reply #21 on: July 31, 2005, 11:08:19 PM »
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Quote from: "Bharat_Desai"

Talat,

Bade behaal ho gaye hai hum unko dhundhte dhundhte
Jisko unka pata na pucha ho aisa koi shaks baaqi nani

Mai is Baaqi nahi ke baare me jyada likhne ki koshish karunga agar jyada nahi likh saka to sirf aapke liye yeh shayari pesh karta hun..........

kash "baaqi nahi" ke silsile chalte rahate barso tak "Talat"  
par "kuch baaqi nahi" ke baare me likhne ko ab kuch baaqi nahi......


I actually started laughing reading your last sher !!!!! Usual Smile

Anyways thanks a lot for writing here Bharat !!! Usual Smile

Aankhon main ashk jo aa thehre to poocha logon ne sabab
Kya kahen unse ki sajaane ko ab khwaab kuch baaqi nahin !!!


Talat,
very very nice shayari.......
And thanks for the reply

Lagta hai ki maut ke saye mandara rahe he hum par
Tera ab jyada intejaar karne ke liye waqt kuch baaqui nahi
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«Reply #22 on: August 01, 2005, 08:04:24 AM »
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Thanks a lot Bharat..........  and Nice one..... !!!! Usual Smile

Wo sun kar bhi pukaar humari bane rahe bekhabar
Jahan na dhoonda ho unko raah aisi koi baaqi nahin!!!
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«Reply #23 on: August 01, 2005, 02:18:42 PM »
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Na kuch kehne ko baaqi hai na kuch sunne ko baaqi hai
Jo dil tha kab ka toot chuka na kuch ab lutne ko baaqi hai

Ek shakhs ko bohot chaha tha khwaabon main basaya tha
toot gaye wo khwaab saare na kuch bikharne ko baaqi hai

Rait par naqsh banaya tha kuch armaano ko sajaya tha
Ek rela paani ka mita gaya sab na kuch mitne ko baaqi hai

Kabhi hansa karte the ye lab aur muskurati thi aankhain
Ab to ashk bhi sookh chale hain aur kuch aahen baaqi hain !!!!


wah wah sis bahut khoob....Friend,Meena sis, Humtum ,Nidhi, Bharat ji n Waheed ...bahut hi acha likha hai sabne.
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Talat
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«Reply #24 on: August 01, 2005, 03:30:53 PM »
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Thanks a lot Nikki for appreciation ............ !!!!!! Usual Smile
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Bharat
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«Reply #25 on: August 01, 2005, 04:14:30 PM »
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Nikkiji,
Bahut Bahut shukriya......................
And thank you very much
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Bharat
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«Reply #26 on: August 01, 2005, 04:20:06 PM »
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Thanks a lot Bharat..........  and Nice one..... !!!! Usual Smile

Wo sun kar bhi pukaar humari bane rahe bekhabar
Jahan na dhoonda ho unko raah aisi koi baaqi nahin!!!


Thank you Talat for the reply,
And nicely written.......


Unke Marne ke baad unki tasveer ko bahut pyar karte hai hum
Unki tasveer pe chadhane ke liye gulshan main ek phool baaqi nahi
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Talat
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«Reply #27 on: August 03, 2005, 01:13:21 PM »
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Thanks Bharat..... aur aap bhi achcha saath de rahe hain... !! Usual Smile

Unhe yaad karte karte guzar rahi hai yeh zindagani
Jisme na puakara ho dil ne, aisa koi pal baaqi nahin !!
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«Reply #28 on: August 03, 2005, 02:32:18 PM »
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Thanks Bharat..... aur aap bhi achcha saath de rahe hain... !! Usual Smile

Unhe yaad karte karte guzar rahi hai yeh zindagani
Jisme na puakara ho dil ne, aisa koi pal baaqi nahin !!




Wonderful Talat and very nicely said,
aur shukriya aapki shayari ka......

Woh is tarah se ozal ho gaye hai hamari jindagi se
hamare aangan me unke kadamo ke nishaan kuch baaqi nahin!!!
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«Reply #29 on: August 03, 2005, 02:57:07 PM »
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nice talat ji..................
bahut khoob............................................ ...
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