Ab kuch baaqi nahin ......... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Talat on July 24, 2005, 10:55:54 AM
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«Reply #165 on: October 31, 2005, 05:23:57 PM »
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Thanks!! sabhi ne bahoot acha likha hai!!
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«Reply #166 on: November 01, 2005, 12:00:44 PM »
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Thanxxxxx  Talat..........  nice  reply  Talat.....  bahot khoob.......

thi  aarzoo  mujhe  bhi  aise  dost  banane ki
aisa lagta  hai  wahi shaks tum  ho
main zameen per ghana andhera hoon
aasmano ki chandi tum ho, ab aur koi aarzoo baaki nahi.....


bhoo khub wahid ji.

baharen is kadar pahale na kabhi yun ayyi yhi,
aap aaye bahar ayi hai aur kuch baaqi nahi.
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«Reply #167 on: November 06, 2005, 12:51:08 PM »
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Very nice Waheed...Bharat (Its really good !!!) and Bekarar !!!

Na jaane kis mod pe aa kar thahar gayi hai zindagi
Andheron me ghira hai wujood, dikhti nahin lau koi
Tapta hai suraj aur jalti hai paanv ke neeche zameen
Iss andheri zindagi main roshni ab koi baaqi nahin !!!
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«Reply #168 on: November 09, 2005, 11:19:28 AM »
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Thanxxxxxx  Pooja...Bekarar........Talat......very  nice  Bharat........Bekarar.........Talat........

usi  mod   per  maine  tujhe  paaya  hai
har  sajde  mein  khuda se  tujhe maanga hai
tum  bhi na  usi  mod  per  mujhe mat chordna
lut chuka hai mera saara jahan, ab kuch bhi baaqi nahi..........
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«Reply #169 on: November 09, 2005, 04:19:58 PM »
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na mano meri to ghar ki mere talashi lelo,
buniyadon ko khod lo deeware gira ke dekh lo
sab nishniyan lauta chuka hun teri yadon ko chodakar,
iske siva hisab me tere aur kuch baaqi nahi
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«Reply #170 on: November 10, 2005, 03:03:21 AM »
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Talat, Waheed, Bekarar.................
very nice writing all............

wo ho gaye bewafaa aur jal gaye dil ke sare armaan  
ab in aankhon main koi sunahara khwaab baaqi nahin

sawal kare to kaise kare, purani baaton ko dohara ke
khayal hai hume ki unke paas koi jawaab baaqi nahin!
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«Reply #171 on: November 10, 2005, 04:45:38 AM »
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Everybody has written very well.............Thanks.

bhatak rahe hai yahan se wahan, bina kisi manzeel ke
ek chhota sa ashiyana banaye aisa shahar baaqi nahin

khushnaseeb hai banjare, jo ghumte hai kaarwahn main
tanha rasto main jo saath de wo humsafar baaqi nahin

bechaini ka aalam hai aur gujarta hai din besabari main  
do pal ke liye neend aaye, raat ka wo pahar baaqi nahin

hum pe jo sitam kiye logo ne, wo kuch kum to na the
aur uspe kismat ka dhaya huaa koi kahar baaqi nahin

kabhi na kabhi to samandar ki mauje milti hai kinaro se
hum wo saheel hai jiske liye ek lahar tak baaqi nahin

duaa ke liye uthe huye yeh hath, sirf maut hi mangte hai
hamari jindagi ko khatm kar de, wo zahar baaqi nahin!!!


Wow Bharat Bahut achha likha hai....... Aur Talat tumhari to baat hi kuchh aur hai..... Usual Smile
Bekarar , Bharat aur Waheed sabhi ne bahut khoob likha hai.......... Usual Smile  Keep writing :wink:
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«Reply #172 on: November 11, 2005, 03:26:52 AM »
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Quote from: "Bharat_Desai"
Everybody has written very well.............Thanks.

bhatak rahe hai yahan se wahan, bina kisi manzeel ke
ek chhota sa ashiyana banaye aisa shahar baaqi nahin

khushnaseeb hai banjare, jo ghumte hai kaarwahn main
tanha rasto main jo saath de wo humsafar baaqi nahin

bechaini ka aalam hai aur gujarta hai din besabari main  
do pal ke liye neend aaye, raat ka wo pahar baaqi nahin

hum pe jo sitam kiye logo ne, wo kuch kum to na the
aur uspe kismat ka dhaya huaa koi kahar baaqi nahin

kabhi na kabhi to samandar ki mauje milti hai kinaro se
hum wo saheel hai jiske liye ek lahar tak baaqi nahin

duaa ke liye uthe huye yeh hath, sirf maut hi mangte hai
hamari jindagi ko khatm kar de, wo zahar baaqi nahin!!!


Wow Bharat Bahut achha likha hai....... Aur Talat tumhari to baat hi kuchh aur hai..... Usual Smile
Bekarar , Bharat aur Waheed sabhi ne bahut khoob likha hai.......... Usual Smile  Keep writing :wink:


Hi Natural,
Thank you for appreciating.
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«Reply #173 on: November 11, 2005, 03:28:33 PM »
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Thanks Waheed Bharat and Jags !!! Nice everyone !!

Sahra me chalte chalte ye gulshan jo mil gaye hain
Meri aankhon ke aansu moityon me dhal gaye hain
Tere kaandhe pe sar rakh ke jo band kar li ankhen
Sadiyon se thi wujood me ab thakan wo baaqi nahin!!!!
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«Reply #174 on: November 11, 2005, 04:10:14 PM »
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Thanks Waheed Bharat and Jags !!! Nice everyone !!

Sahra me chalte chalte ye gulshan jo mil gaye hain
Meri aankhon ke aansu moityon me dhal gaye hain
Tere kaandhe pe sar rakh ke jo band kar li ankhen
Sadiyon se thi wujood me ab thakan wo baaqi nahin!!!!


Thanxxxxx  Alot  Bharat........  Natural........Nice  Bharat...... Talat......bahot hi  Accha   tumne  likha  Talat..........

ab to hum  khud  apni  haathon ki  lakeeron  ko dekhte hain
apne  ashkon mein  uski  tasveer  talash karte  hain
thak  gayee  aankhen  bhi meri  rote rote  ab
bikhar  gaya sab kuch mera ab kuch bikharna baaqi nahi !!!!
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«Reply #175 on: November 13, 2005, 02:42:31 AM »
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Talat,
Very nice....beautiful.............

Waheed,
Very nice writing.............


tuut chuki hai wo dor, jo hum dono ko bandhe huye thi
unke sath baaton aur mulakato ka silsila baaqi nahin

unke bagair jina sikh liya hai humne, in tanhaiyon main
unse to kya, ab hume kismat se bhi koi gila baaqi nahin!
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«Reply #176 on: November 14, 2005, 01:28:28 PM »
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tujh pe nahi ilzam sitam aur bewafai ka,
tujh par nahi ilzam tagaful aur judai ka,
jamane walon ko samajha dunga mai,
khud ki tassali ke liye koi bahana baaqi nahi
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«Reply #177 on: November 14, 2005, 06:29:58 PM »
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Thanx  alot  Bharat....Too good reply  Bharat... Bekarar..........
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«Reply #178 on: November 15, 2005, 05:44:11 PM »
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Thanx  alot  Bharat....Too good reply  Bharat... Bekarar..........



Shayari pasand karne ke liye shukriya..........thanks..........
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«Reply #179 on: November 16, 2005, 05:40:50 AM »
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hum ab aap sab ki shaayari ka kya kahein.....

wah wah kehna ab lagtha hai dard dena shaayaron ko
jo likthe hain apne dil ke daastanon ko

phir bhi hum kehna chaaheinge kuch
is raaste hai saare na kush

arz hai......

Jo degayaa saare ilzaam humein is pyaar mein
woh kargaya sab kuch, par gunhegaar tehraa gaya hume
ab karein bhi tho kya karein, ussne tho chod diya hume
gila na shikhwaa baakhi ab zindagi mein
na bachi aas koi jeene ka is zindagi mein
rahe woh abaad, lekhe ye aarzoo dil mein
ab chahte hain, choote naata is jahaan se
na jeepaayenge uske binaa, sirf yaadon ke sahaare
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