Ab kuch baaqi nahin ......... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #285 on: June 30, 2006, 06:25:18 AM »
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Shukriya Didi,..
Appne Kuch Likha Nahi,..'
Apke Likhe Hue Kalamo Se Hi To Hum Seekhte Aayein Hain...
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«Reply #286 on: September 26, 2008, 01:22:15 PM »
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mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki aap logo ki tarif me kya kahun :?:  par haan sab ek se bad kar ek hai, karni to nahi chahiye par
mai bhi jurrat kar raha hun
kahin pe jam hai saki nahi, kahi pe saki he aur jam nahi,
dard sabke hisse me aaya hai, doston isase koi baki nahi


har baar ki tarah is bar bhi dhal jayegi,
gam ki ye rat bhi ab jyada der baqi nahi

jis chand ko pakarke, dekho chandani ithalayi thi,
chandani ab bhi wahi hai,chand par baaqi nahi,

tum the tumhari mohbbat thi, ek hasti hamri bhi hua karati thi,
na mohabbat rahi,na tum rahe, aur mera bhi vazud baaqi nahi,

kai jaruri kaam the, jo kal karenge sochaa tha,
aaj to hum kho hi chuke the, aur kal baaqi nahi

"patthar ke sanam" bas nam suna tha, ab dekha to batlate hain,
patthar hi patthar yahan hai, momdil baaqi nahi

na mango dua mere liye, mujhe haal pe MERE chod do,
jisaki dua mujhako lage, ab hath wo "BAAQI NAHI"

sab jante hai matlabi jahan me, pyar ishq fizul hai,
har shakhs galati kar raha hai, koi bhi "BAAQI NAHI"

TERA KARAM HAI TU JANE, PAR ITANA TO SAMJHA DE TU,
KYUN SIRF YAHAN INSAAN BACHE HAIN, INSANIYAT "BAAQI NAHI"

thanx talat, friend 4u & nidhi yaden,

Sanjeev, us time pe maine shayad 4 din baad reply kiya tha aur jaane kis mood main thi ki combined reply kiya aur khaastaur se aap ko nahin likha....

Aaj 3 saal baad zaroor likh rahi hoon, ma'afi ke saath ke aapne tab naya Yoindia join kiya tha aur mere thread main aapne likha, aapka bohot bohot shukriya Sanjeev....aur bohot achcha likha tha aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Agar maine shayari likhna chorh na diya hota, to aaj aapko ek ek sher ka reply zaroor karti. Once again, thanks so much Sanjeev  notworthy

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«Reply #287 on: September 26, 2008, 01:42:19 PM »
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Bahut khoob Celmira.. Bahut hi pyaara thread laga apka.. Maine is thread ka har ek panna padha.. aur sabhi ne itna kamaal ka likha hai ki tareef ke shabd kam lag rahe hai..

Itna achha likhne waale, sab log kahan kho gaye hai..?? Aaj sach mein inn sabki kami mehsoos ho rahi hai..

Hats off to All The Contributors Of This Thread..   Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley You People are Too Good Writers...   Thumbs UP
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«Reply #288 on: September 26, 2008, 01:46:38 PM »
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Sanjeev, us time pe maine shayad 4 din baad reply kiya tha aur jaane kis mood main thi ki combined reply kiya aur khaastaur se aap ko nahin likha....

Aaj 3 saal baad zaroor likh rahi hoon, ma'afi ke saath ke aapne tab naya Yoindia join kiya tha aur mere thread main aapne likha, aapka bohot bohot shukriya Sanjeev....aur bohot achcha likha tha aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Agar maine shayari likhna chorh na diya hota, to aaj aapko ek ek sher ka reply zaroor karti. Once again, thanks so much Sanjeev  notworthy


talat,
tumne shayri likhna chod diya hai (mujhe nahi maaloom tha) aur maine rona chod diya tha.....ek saal se kasam khaai thi ki ab kabhi aankhen nam nahi karoonga ....lekin aaj sach me meri aankhen nam ho gai............... tearyeyed
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«Reply #289 on: September 26, 2008, 01:49:32 PM »
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Bahut khoob Celmira.. Bahut hi pyaara thread laga apka.. Maine is thread ka har ek panna padha.. aur sabhi ne itna kamaal ka likha hai ki tareef ke shabd kam lag rahe hai..

Itna achha likhne waale, sab log kahan kho gaye hai..?? Aaj sach mein inn sabki kami mehsoos ho rahi hai..

Hats off to All The Contributors Of This Thread..   Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley You People are Too Good Writers...   Thumbs UP


Thank You so much Mahiya, Sach kaha aapne...wo log ab baaqi nahin.
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«Reply #290 on: September 26, 2008, 01:50:42 PM »
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talat,
tumne shayri likhna chod diya hai (mujhe nahi maaloom tha) aur maine rona chod diya tha.....ek saal se kasam khaai thi ki ab kabhi aankhen nam nahi karoonga ....lekin aaj sach me meri aankhen nam ho gai............... tearyeyed

Sanjeev,

Mujhpar aankhain nam na karen, main sach main iss qabil nahin ki aap jaise dost ke ashkon ki wajah banoon.  icon_flower
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«Reply #291 on: September 26, 2008, 01:55:09 PM »
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tumne meri kasam tudva dee ab please aap bhi apni zid choden aur hume apni lajawab shayri se mahroom na rakhen...ye jyadati hai....
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«Reply #292 on: September 26, 2008, 02:02:43 PM »
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Lagta hai jaise likhne ko Ab Kuch Baaqi Nahin....Kuch din mujhe apni shayari ka maatam to bana lene dijiye...abhi sach main mere alfaaz mujhse juda ho gaye hain Sanjeev....aankhon main nami hai lekin wo aansoo ab shayari main nahin badal paa rahe hain   tearyeyed
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«Reply #293 on: September 26, 2008, 02:12:34 PM »
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Sabne Wakhaai Bahoot Achcha Likha Hai,.
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«Reply #294 on: September 26, 2008, 04:23:09 PM »
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Talat,
aaj tak maine apne gumon ka pitaara kabhi kisi ke samne nahi khola...na hi kabhi kholunga........nqa maine ishq me koi dhokha nahi khaya...
fir bhi insaan hun aur "aur bhi gum hai jamane me muhabbat ke siva" wali baat pe bharosa karta hun....
teen saal pahle jo maine likha tha......aaj use shiddat se mahsoos kar raha hun.
isliye maine tumhe kaha ki yo pe likho....................
uparwala pata nahi kab humse khud ke liye hi kuch baaten likhwa de tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
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«Reply #295 on: September 27, 2008, 09:34:04 AM »
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Talat,
aaj tak maine apne gumon ka pitaara kabhi kisi ke samne nahi khola...na hi kabhi kholunga........nqa maine ishq me koi dhokha nahi khaya...
fir bhi insaan hun aur "aur bhi gum hai jamane me muhabbat ke siva" wali baat pe bharosa karta hun....
teen saal pahle jo maine likha tha......aaj use shiddat se mahsoos kar raha hun.
isliye maine tumhe kaha ki yo pe likho....................
uparwala pata nahi kab humse khud ke liye hi kuch baaten likhwa de tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

Aapko ghumzada karna humara maqsad nahin tha Sanjeev....bas zara hassaas dil hai...thes lagi aur dukh hua....bas zara sa time aur dijiye...zara khud ko phir se pehli waali "Talat" bana loon.....!

Khuda aapko behad khushian den
Aur koi ghum na rahe baaqi (ameen)
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«Reply #296 on: October 22, 2008, 03:11:07 AM »
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Hi Talat,
I was surprised and happy to see this thread back. I kept writing in this thread not because
you are my very good friend but I liked this thread very much.
 I can not believe, today I have written here after 2 years and 5 months.

I would like to tell everybody who has written in this thread that all have written extremely good.
It seems like everybody has written in this thread from his/her bottom of the heart.

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«Reply #297 on: October 22, 2008, 10:23:51 AM »
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Hi Talat,
I was surprised and happy to see this thread back. I kept writing in this thread not because
you are my very good friend but I liked this thread very much.
 I can not believe, today I have written here after 2 years and 5 months.

I would like to tell everybody who has written in this thread that all have written extremely good.
It seems like everybody has written in this thread from his/her bottom of the heart.


welcome back Bharat......bahoot khoob likha hai aapne
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«Reply #298 on: October 22, 2008, 05:30:07 PM »
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Hello Sanjeev,
Thank you.
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«Reply #299 on: October 22, 2008, 09:53:40 PM »
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Thanks to everyone who wrote in this thread  notworthy
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