Ab kuch baaqi nahin ......... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Talat on July 24, 2005, 10:55:54 AM
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«Reply #75 on: August 18, 2005, 06:52:20 AM »
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Guzar gaye wo lamhe,unhe bhoolna mere bas me nahi,
Kuchh lamho ka aur gujarna abhi baaki hai,
Zindagi jo simat chuki hai, Kuchh lamho mein ab,
Un Lamho se baahar nikalna abhi baaki hai.........................

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Guzre hue din kai daastaan sunaate hain hume
Woh pal woh lamhe bohot tadpaate hain hume
Jis daaman main phoolon ko sameta tha humne
Wahan ab kaanton ke siwa aur kuch baaqi nahin !!

Excellent Talat Sis............Jab sapney tootatey to kuchh aisi hi feeling hoti hai......Wakai aapki ye lines kaafi achhi lagi......
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«Reply #76 on: August 18, 2005, 09:21:33 AM »
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Thank you waheed..............bohat khoob reply diya,excellent.and thanx pyarikudi.....cheers..... Winking ....!!!!!!!Lets have a peg today glasses2 .

"Guzar gaye wo lamhe,unhe bhoolna mere bas me nahi,
      aaj aise makaam pe hun,ki is chahat se nikalna mere bas me nahi."


hmmmmmm Thanxxxxxx  Nidhi.. tongue3 .......superbsssssssss  Nidhi......  Natural......   areeeeee  Pyarikudi   bahna  mujhe   pack  nahi  mango frooti chahiye........   tongue3  tongue3

hmmmmm  kuch  arzzzzzzz   hum  bhi karte  hain...........

meri   mohabbat ko  bhulaane tum ab aur   kahan  jaogi
mita  diya har  naqs mera apne dil se ab  mitaane ko kuch baaqi nahi
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«Reply #77 on: August 18, 2005, 04:18:26 PM »
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Once again......Sabne bohot achha likha hai.....!!!


tujse mohabbat karke kusoorwar ho gaye hai jahan main
logo ne humpe lagaya na ho aisa koi tohmat baaqi nahin!!
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«Reply #78 on: August 19, 2005, 08:09:13 AM »
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Thanks Waheed... Nidhi......Sweetie......Natural....Bharat....!!! Sabne bohot achcha likha hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #79 on: August 19, 2005, 08:09:32 AM »
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Thanks Waheed... Nidhi......Sweetie......Natural....Bharat....!!! Sabne bohot achcha likha hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #80 on: August 19, 2005, 08:09:58 AM »
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Khabar hai mujhe humaare raaste hain juda juda
Aur ab labon me mere dua bhi koi baaqi nahin !!!
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«Reply #81 on: August 19, 2005, 09:01:01 AM »
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apne  ghamon ko  geet  banakar  ga  lenge
abapni dil dastan sunane  ko kuch baaqi  nahi !!!!!!
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Bharat
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«Reply #82 on: August 20, 2005, 09:09:17 PM »
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Talat and Waheed,

Very nice writing...............
and thanks for the reply......!!!


aapni ankhonse sirf tera hi deedar karte thai
tujse bichhade to kuch dekhna baaqui nahin

hamare in hothon pe sirf tere hi geet sajate thai
tujse bichhade to lab pe koi tarana baaqui nahin

aapne in hath se sirf tere hi fasaane likhte thai
tujse bichhade to kuch likhana baaqui nahin

hamare kadam tera hi rasta dhundhate thai
tujse bichhade to koi manzeel baaqui nahin

hamara gulistan teri khushboo se hi mahakata tha
tujse bichhade to gulshan main bahar baaqui nahin

seene ka yeh dil tere naam se hi dhadkata tha
tujse bichhade to is dilme dhadkan baaqui nahin

teri saanson ke sabab hamara sharir jinda tha
tujse bichhade to jism main jaan baaqui nahin!!!
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«Reply #83 on: August 21, 2005, 07:02:23 PM »
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thanxxxxxx  Bharat......................very  nice  .......bahot  khoob.........tongue3
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«Reply #84 on: August 24, 2005, 01:16:10 PM »
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Talat and Waheed,

Very nice writing...............
and thanks for the reply......!!!


aapni ankhonse sirf tera hi deedar karte thai
tujse bichhade to kuch dekhna baaqui nahin

hamare in hothon pe sirf tere hi geet sajate thai
tujse bichhade to lab pe koi tarana baaqui nahin

aapne in hath se sirf tere hi fasaane likhte thai
tujse bichhade to kuch likhana baaqui nahin

hamare kadam tera hi rasta dhundhate thai
tujse bichhade to koi manzeel baaqui nahin

hamara gulistan teri khushboo se hi mahakata tha
tujse bichhade to gulshan main bahar baaqui nahin

seene ka yeh dil tere naam se hi dhadkata tha
tujse bichhade to is dilme dhadkan baaqui nahin

teri saanson ke sabab hamara sharir jinda tha
tujse bichhade to jism main jaan baaqui nahin!!!


Bohot bhohot Khoob Bharat.... very nice work....... !!!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #85 on: August 24, 2005, 01:21:27 PM »
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Is tarah se mile aur juda hue hain wo humse
Jaise jhonka koi hawa ka chu kar nikal jaaye
Zindagi ek bojh hai aur saansen rasm si hain
Aur is toote dil main tamanna koi baaqi nahin !!!
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«Reply #86 on: August 24, 2005, 02:45:08 PM »
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welcome  back  Talat........  aate  hi  dhamakedaar... tongue3 superbssssssss  

ek diya aaj bhi judai ka  mere dil mein har shaam jalta hai
ai jindagi ise bhi bujha de,dhal chuki shaam ab kuch baaqi nahi...............
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Talat
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«Reply #87 on: August 27, 2005, 01:40:20 PM »
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Thanks Waheed !!!

Jaane kyun har shakhs dil dukha jata hai
Har lamha meri aankhain bhigo jata hai
Toota hai jab bhi kiya hi kisi pe humne
Aur aetebaar hume ab kisi pe baaqi nahin !!
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«Reply #88 on: August 27, 2005, 05:45:57 PM »
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Hello Talat and Waheed,

Very very nice writing.............beautiful...!!!

na jaane kab khatm hoga yeh tanha jindagi ka safar
jahan pe hum ruk no gaye ho, aisa koi mod baaqui nahin!!!
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«Reply #89 on: August 27, 2005, 07:01:30 PM »
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ur  welcome  Talat.............  thanxxxxxx  alot Bharat.........nice  written   Talat   &  Bharat......

khuda kare mero doston  ki aankhen sada hansti rahe
ho jaaye yeh meri dua kabool aur kuch maangne ko baaqi nahi.........
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