Ab to aa jaaiye.................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on October 19, 2011, 04:03:17 AM
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hook dil me uthee ab to aa jaaiye
har tamnnaa jagee ab to aa jaaiye

roothee bulbul bhee naghme sunaane lagee
dil me halchal machee ab to aa jaaiye

saaz chheDe binaa ab to bajne lage
raagini hai chhiDee ab to aa jaaiye

zindagee kat gayee hijra ke gaaoN me
dhadkane hain rukee ab to aa jaaiye

dekhiye is tarah hum bulaate nahee
baat jaaN pe banee ab to aa jaaiye

kah ke hum se gaye chaar din ke liye
ek muddat hui ab to aa jaaiye

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2011, 04:36:57 AM »
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dekhie iss tarah hum bulaate nahi--

wah wah --
behad haseen nagma

very gud work Mam Usual Smile

muskurate rahie
khus rahie
Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2011, 05:38:27 AM »
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mamtaa ji behad khoobsoorat gazal jitni taareef kee jaaye kam hai.
zyaadaa kuchh n kah kar apne chaar misre aap kee peshkash kee shaan men rakh rahaa hooN
Khwaab  men aate  rahe  ho raat bhar.
KyooN sitam dhaate rahe ho raat bhar.
Ishq  kaa  aaghaaz shaayad ho chukaa.
Tum  jo  yaad aate rahe ho raat bhar.

duaaoN ke saath Dr. Surendra Saini
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2011, 07:55:54 AM »
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Mamta Ji,

Bahut hi khoobsoorat kalaam hai
waah waah..

Dili daad qubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2011, 08:00:53 AM »
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daaad hajir mamta sahiba ,,,,,behad nayab khayal hain ,,,,,

zarur pahunchegi uss mashiha tak aapki dard bhari awwwaaz ,,,,keeep writing 4ever
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2011, 08:10:52 AM »
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BAhut Hi Pyaara likha Hai aapne Bahut Khoob Mamta Ji

Daad Hazir Hai Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2011, 03:57:58 PM »
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Hamaare kalaam ko waqt dene or is qadar izzat bakhshane kaa behad shukriyaa Saini saheb!
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2011, 04:16:38 PM »
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boht khoob mamta ji.
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2011, 05:06:01 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on October 19, 2011, 04:03:17 AM
hook dil me uthee ab to aa jaaiye
har tamnnaa jagee ab to aa jaaiye

roothee bulbul bhee naghme sunaane lagee
dil me halchal machee ab to aa jaaiye

saaz chheDe binaa ab to bajne lage
raagini hai chhiDee ab to aa jaaiye

zindagee kat gayee hijra ke gaaoN me
dhadkane hain rukee ab to aa jaaiye

dekhiye is tarah hum bulaate nahee
baat jaaN pe banee ab to aa jaaiye

kah ke hum se gaye chaar din ke liye
ek muddat hui ab to aa jaaiye

Mamta Bajpai

Wah! Wah! mamta ji. Bahut khoob! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2011, 10:46:37 AM »
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Bahut khoob Mamta ji
naayaab peshkash. daad haajir hai apke liye.
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«Reply #10 on: October 20, 2011, 03:54:11 PM »
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aap kee sirf daad hee nahee gazal ke mutaaliq mashwarah bhee chaahiye Satish jee! ummeed hai adabee galiyaaroN me meri rahnumai karte rahenge.......
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«Reply #11 on: October 20, 2011, 03:54:51 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa mkv !
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«Reply #12 on: October 20, 2011, 03:56:41 PM »
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behad shukriyaa Usha jee!
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«Reply #13 on: October 20, 2011, 03:59:04 PM »
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duaaoN kee is sougaat ke liye aap kee dil se aabhaaree hoon Sunil jee!saath hee housla afzai kaa bhee behad shukriya..
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«Reply #14 on: October 20, 2011, 03:59:38 PM »
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Mamta ji bahut khoob.
daad kubool kijiye.
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