~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim:Miscellaneous Shayri

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Ek soch par yeh nazm dil ne likhi hai..Aur woh soch akhri stanza [3 lines main] qaid hai..Yeh note uss akhri 3 lines kay liye hai..

Insaanon kay beech rehte rehte kahin hum bhi unke jaise nahin hote jaa rahe hai..Fashion ka daur hai, ager usne scarf pehna hai toh mujhe bhi pehn'na chahiye..Hum apni originality khote jaa rahe hai..Khair issi par soch yeh hai kay kisi ne dokha kiya humare saath toh hume bhi badla lena chahiye usse balke auron se bhi dokha karna chahiye..Shayad isiliye aj wafa bahaut kam payi jati hai..Toh sawal yehi hai: Kya hum wafa khote jaa rahe hai??

Sochiyega zaroor..

Insaanon ki iss bheed main insaan kahan hai?
Khuda ki iss duniya ab mohobat kahan hai?

Mehboob badalte hai sab ankhein jhapakne ki raftar se,
Ek shaks par mar mitenge; aisi ab wafa kahan hai?

Ab tum vaada na kiya karo bas sabut-e-mohobat do, kehti hai woh,
‘mohobat kay dave toh karliye mujse, ab batao mera taj mahal kahaan hai?’

Kehte hai mohobat sachi ho toh dard tumhe ho aur mehsoos hum karenge,
Apne majnu kay liye pathar khanne wali ab aisi koi laila kahan hai?

Aj sirf lakeerein hai, kal tak pani pahad aur zameen hua karti thi,
Ae insaanon Khuda ki banayi woh duniya kahan hai?

Aj khud ko rooh kay aine main dekhna zara,
Aur bas ek sawal karlo khudse ‘Khamosh’,
Tum main rehti thi jo ek waqt ab woh wafa kahan hai?

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2010, 11:00:02 PM »

Wah! Rahim Ji Bahut Khoob


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mamta bajpai

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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2010, 12:35:14 AM »

ek aalaa soch kee numaindagee kartee aap keee ye nazm bahut khoob rahee.........humaaree or se dheroN daad .....


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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2010, 04:58:57 AM »

bahut khoob Rahim ji..
ye sawalon bhari soch aur sachhai ka aina hai.
behad umda--
khus rahiye


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2010, 06:25:58 AM »

bahut bahut khoob mere bhai..

kya baat hai..

waise aaj bata dete hai, ki ham hain jo aaj tak kayam hai wafa par..

kisi se pyaar na karne ki wafa khud se ...haha

dher saari daad aapk liye..

kuchh hamari taraf se~

ik bar jo ho gaya ye dil tumhara
koi or na ise ab chhoo payega
ye janta hun kai bar bahare awaaz dengi mujhe
par ye bhanwra ab kisi ke liye nahi gayega~


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Muzammil,

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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2010, 06:48:57 AM »

Nice lining Rahim jii


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2010, 09:08:11 AM »

Bahut Khub Rahim JI Padhkar Bahut Accha Laga Hume


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2010, 12:41:57 PM »

Teh dil se shukriya Mamta jee, Rajesh jee, KillBill jee, Rishi jee, Muzammil jee aur Abhi dost..

Abhi bhai bahaut achi lines..
Applause

Aur Abhi bhai, yeh ishq fizaon main behta hai,
kabhi sanson main bas jaega, pata hi nahin chalega..!

Khush rahiye..


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nirala

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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2010, 01:10:13 PM »

aapka kalaam Behad umda
""
aaj bhi wafa hai zamaane me
shayad kuch kami thi mere aajmaane me
wo wafa bhi kya wafa
jise aazmaye ek bewafa
kuch to baat hai iss wafa me
yun fir iski baate na hoti
""
thanx
""


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2010, 03:18:51 PM »

Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat lines aur bahaut khoob lines.. Applause


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: December 24, 2010, 07:01:19 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on December 23, 2010, 12:41:57 PM

Teh dil se shukriya Mamta jee, Rajesh jee, KillBill jee, Rishi jee, Muzammil jee aur Abhi dost..

Abhi bhai bahaut achi lines..
Applause

Aur Abhi bhai, yeh ishq fizaon main behta hai,
kabhi sanson main bas jaega, pata hi nahin chalega..!

Khush rahiye..

Rahim bhai~

samjhana jara mushkil hai~

kai bar saaanse thaam leta hai koi meri
dushman to nahi koi fir sochta hun shayad ehsaas-e-Ishq hoga~


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Ab woh wafa kahan hai? ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: December 24, 2010, 09:31:48 AM »

Hmm sahi kaha..
Bahaut khoob keh gaye ap..
Applause


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