ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80 -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

SURESH SANGWAN

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«Reply #15 on: April 23, 2014, 07:07:25 PM »

thanks Hasan ji

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 23, 2014, 04:54:43 PM

Bahut khoob


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80

«Reply #16 on: April 23, 2014, 07:08:36 PM »

Syed Mohd Mahzar ji bahut 2 shukriya aapka
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on April 23, 2014, 02:10:07 AM

SURESH SAGWA

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 22, 2014, 10:05:34 PM

कारवान -ए- बहार चलें
गर तेरी यादगार चलें

सफ़र में अपने ख़ौफ़ का
करते हुये शिकार चलें

हदें रहें ना आसपास
हौसलों की बहार चलें

अब ज़ुलमतें मिटानी हैं
एक दो नहीं हज़ार चलें

आ इंसाँ बन जायें फिर
जंग-ए- ज़िंदगी हार चलें

मौसम सी बदले दुनियां
गुलों के संग खार चलें

जी भर गया संसार से
कुछ दिन को हरिद्वार चलें

पाप क्या है पुण्य क्या
दिल का बोझ उतार चलें

वक़्त को नहीं समझी 'सरु'
चलो वक़्त के पार चलें

KarwaaN- E-bahaar chaleiN
Gar teri yaadgaar chaleiN

safar meiN apne khauf ka
karte huye shikaar chaleiN

hadeiN na raheiN aaspaas
Hausle ki bahaar chaleiN

ab zulmateiN mitani haiN
Ik do nahiN hazaar chaleiN

Aa insaaN ban jayeN fir
Jang-e-jindgi haar chaleiN

Mausam si badle duniaN
GuloN ke sang khaar chaleiN

Jee bhar gayaa sansaar se
Kuch din ko haridwar chaleiN

Paap kya hai punya kya
Dil ka bojh utaar chaleiN

Waqt ko naiN samjhi ‘saru’
Chalo waqt ke paar chaleiN

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SURESH SAGWAN JI,

bahut khoobsurat kalaam kaha hai


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80

«Reply #17 on: April 23, 2014, 07:09:16 PM »

trhanksa lot jeet ji
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Quote from: jeet jainam on April 23, 2014, 03:47:07 AM

Wah wah wah bohut umda waaaaahhhhhh


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80

«Reply #18 on: April 23, 2014, 07:10:24 PM »

thanksa lot sksaini ji
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 23, 2014, 12:30:57 PM

waah waah bahut sunder rau aaj kisee time


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80

«Reply #19 on: April 23, 2014, 07:11:17 PM »

thanks a lot Sahal ji
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Quote from: sahal on April 23, 2014, 12:40:56 PM

safar meiN apne khauf ka
karte huye shikaar chaleiN

waah waah suresh jjeee

Applause


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80

«Reply #20 on: April 23, 2014, 07:13:06 PM »

thanks a lot mann ji
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Quote from: mann.mann on April 23, 2014, 02:04:39 PM

bahut khub saruji


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80

«Reply #21 on: April 23, 2014, 07:13:50 PM »

Quote from: mayur srivastav on April 23, 2014, 02:49:59 PM

niceeeeeeeeeeee waaaaaaahhhhhhhhh


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parinde

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Re: ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80

«Reply #22 on: April 23, 2014, 07:18:23 PM »

हदें रहें ना आसपास
हौसलों की बहार चलें

अब ज़ुलमतें मिटानी हैं
एक दो नहीं हज़ार चलें

आ इंसाँ बन जायें फिर
जंग-ए- ज़िंदगी हार चलें

मौसम सी बदले दुनियां
गुलों के संग खार चलें

जी भर गया संसार से
कुछ दिन को हरिद्वार चलें

hello2

bahut khoooooob rahi aapki ye ghazal bhi saru ji


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80

«Reply #23 on: April 23, 2014, 07:21:31 PM »

thanksa lot parinde ji
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Quote from: parinde on April 23, 2014, 07:18:23 PM

bahut khoooooob rahi aapki ye ghazal bhi saru ji


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80

«Reply #24 on: April 23, 2014, 07:51:02 PM »

thanks ekta ji


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premdeep

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«Reply #25 on: April 23, 2014, 08:33:13 PM »

just speechless i like to write this way but u r awesome RAU is due


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SURESH SANGWAN

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«Reply #26 on: April 23, 2014, 08:36:17 PM »

thanks a lot premdeep ji
hausla afzahi karte rahen

Quote from: premdeep on April 23, 2014, 08:33:13 PM

just speechless i like to write this way but u r awesome RAU is due


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aqsh

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Re: ab zulmatein mitani hain.........................saru.....................80

«Reply #27 on: April 23, 2014, 09:12:37 PM »

Aaj phir wohi kahoongi saru ji... aapki poetry aur aapka andaaz e bayaan bilkul alag hai... ek dam dil par asar kar jaati hai aapki poetries... dheron dheron daaaaaad quboool kare...


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SURESH SANGWAN

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«Reply #28 on: April 23, 2014, 09:14:51 PM »

thanksss a lot aqsh ji
Yun hi hausal afzahi karte rahen
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Quote from: aqsh on April 23, 2014, 09:12:37 PM

Aaj phir wohi kahoongi saru ji... aapki poetry aur aapka andaaz e bayaan bilkul alag hai... ek dam dil par asar kar jaati hai aapki poetries... dheron dheron daaaaaad quboool kare...


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