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Abhi tak hume ek bhi rau nahi mila
Humne abhi tak kuchh dhang ka nahi likha
Hum rau to tumhe de nahi sakte
Hum achchha likh paye
Ruh se humko de do ye duaa.
Its my hobby if wrote anything wrong yet plz tell me how to write better?
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2013, 08:52:54 AM » |
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lo bhaai aaj tumhe main rau deta hoon aur duaa kartaa hoon ki achhaa likho
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2013, 10:24:53 AM » |
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jahaaN chaah vahaaN raah
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2013, 10:29:24 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2013, 10:40:40 AM » |
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Shayri likhne baitha sabdo ke jaal main fas gaye shayri likhkar baitha sabd jaal main fas gaye.  |
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2013, 10:47:50 AM » |
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Thanks to all. Agar apni bezzati karani hai to shayar ban jao samaj nahi aaye to jara mahfil main aao. |
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2013, 10:52:08 AM » |
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Samjdaar bankar to dekh liya murakh bankar dekha to |
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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2013, 10:56:18 AM » |
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I am just kidding......sorry to all
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2013, 01:49:08 PM » |
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keep writing jald hi seekh jaoge...
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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2013, 04:17:14 PM » |
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You r just like me.. although i m a small kid bt i also try my best and i will always try to give my best.. INSHA ALLAH..  |
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«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2013, 04:28:53 PM » |
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You r just like me.. although i m a small kid bt i also try my best and i will always try to give my best.. INSHA ALLAH.. mai to rau na milne par hans raha hoo aur aap ro rahe ho not same |
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«Reply #11 on: September 23, 2013, 05:56:10 PM » |
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2013, 09:04:45 PM » |
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mai to rau na milne par hans raha hoo aur aap ro rahe ho not same
Kyuki mujhe bura lag raha hai...  |
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2013, 01:13:40 AM » |
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Kyuki mujhe bura lag raha hai... par mujhe to achchha lag raha hai aap ko mai rau deta hoo keep smile |
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«Reply #14 on: September 24, 2013, 05:40:34 PM » |
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par mujhe to achchha lag raha hai aap ko mai rau deta hoo keep smile
Thnku Ji..  |
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