-----/// Achcha lagaa ///-----

by ~Hriday~ on October 23, 2010, 08:31:31 PM
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aaj fir ek arse ke baad raat ko jaagna achcha laga,
neend thi aankhon me par fir bhi jaagna achcha laga,

koi to hai jisne kaha ki kuch der aur ruk jaao tum,
uski baat sunke uske saath ruk jaana achcha laga,

kuch kehna tha use mujhse, kuch khaas hi tha shayad,
kehti rahi wo bahut kuch aur mujhe sunna achcha laga,

uski wo baatein, uski wo boli, uski wo pyaari awaaz,
kuch der theher ke mujhe usko samajhna achcha laga,

haan shaayad arse ke baad aisa hua ki kisi ne roka,
mujhe us pal us ehsaas ke saath ruk jaana achcha laga,

mujhe aaj ek baar fir raat ko der tak jaagna achcha laga,
kisi se baatein karna aur kisi ko sunte rehna achcha laga...


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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2010, 08:45:27 PM »
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bahut achha kapil bhai... bahut hi badhiya likha hai aapne...

ek galti mujhse hone jaa rahi hai main aapke naam ke aage bhai nahin laga paaya please dont mind...

Intezar !


na aadat tumhe bhi lag jaaye Kapil raaton ko jaagne ki
is raat ke andhere ne kayi logo ko barbaad kiya hai... !

in andheron mein hum jeete aaye hain ek umra se dost
humne to ise bhi apni roshni de kar aabaad kiya hai... !
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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2010, 08:55:39 PM »
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Shukriya bhai.... bahut bahut shukriya.. koi baat nahi jaruri nahi har line me bhai likhna .. aapne jo likha hai jaisa likha hai dil se likha hai aur mujhe bahut pasand aaya .. bahut achcha likha hai...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2010, 01:43:49 AM »
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khubsurat palo se zindagi cahak jati hai
umango se man ki bagiya mahak jati hai
 didar  uska aur palke band ho jati hai
 band palko se chahat khoob nazar ati hai
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«Reply #4 on: October 24, 2010, 07:02:03 AM »
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kisi bhi rachhna ki khashiyat uski saadgi me hoti hai.aapki shayari bhi bdi masoomiyat se jajbato ko byaan karti hai.buhat aacha likhte hai aap.
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«Reply #5 on: October 24, 2010, 11:11:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Veena ji aur Poonam ji...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2010, 11:49:56 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 23, 2010, 08:31:31 PM

aaj fir ek arse ke baad raat ko jaagna achcha laga,
neend thi aankhon me par fir bhi jaagna achcha laga,

koi to hai jisne kaha ki kuch der aur ruk jaao tum,
uski baat sunke uske saath ruk jaana achcha laga,

kuch kehna tha use mujhse, kuch khaas hi tha shayad,
kehti rahi wo bahut kuch aur mujhe sunna achcha laga,

uski wo baatein, uski wo boli, uski wo pyaari awaaz,
kuch der theher ke mujhe usko samajhna achcha laga,

haan shaayad arse ke baad aisa hua ki kisi ne roka,
mujhe us pal us ehsaas ke saath ruk jaana achcha laga,

mujhe aaj ek baar fir raat ko der tak jaagna achcha laga,
kisi se baatein karna aur kisi ko sunte rehna achcha laga...


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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 23, 2010, 08:31:31 PM

aaj fir ek arse ke baad raat ko jaagna achcha laga,
neend thi aankhon me par fir bhi jaagna achcha laga,

koi to hai jisne kaha ki kuch der aur ruk jaao tum,
uski baat sunke uske saath ruk jaana achcha laga,

kuch kehna tha use mujhse, kuch khaas hi tha shayad,
kehti rahi wo bahut kuch aur mujhe sunna achcha laga,

uski wo baatein, uski wo boli, uski wo pyaari awaaz,
kuch der theher ke mujhe usko samajhna achcha laga,

haan shaayad arse ke baad aisa hua ki kisi ne roka,
mujhe us pal us ehsaas ke saath ruk jaana achcha laga,

mujhe aaj ek baar fir raat ko der tak jaagna achcha laga,
kisi se baatein karna aur kisi ko sunte rehna achcha laga...


*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2010, 09:02:06 AM »
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Thanks...!!!

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«Reply #8 on: October 27, 2010, 09:08:47 AM »
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bahut achha laga hame ye padhan ...

badi muhabbat se likha he ...

achha ek baat batao kapil ji ye har bar apki panktiyan mujhe mohabbat ki mari kyu lagti hain..

 
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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2010, 09:15:31 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji... 'mohabbat ki mari' se main aapka matlab nahi samjha...!!!

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 27, 2010, 09:08:47 AM
bahut achha laga hame ye padhan ...

badi muhabbat se likha he ...

achha ek baat batao kapil ji ye har bar apki panktiyan mujhe mohabbat ki mari kyu lagti hain..

 
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2010, 09:18:30 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 27, 2010, 09:15:31 AM
bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji... 'mohabbat ki mari' se main aapka matlab nahi samjha...!!!

shhh mujhe bate karne ke liye mana kiya hai...
so..

dil khushnuma hua man me fool khile duniya pyaari si lagne lagi
muhabbat ki maar ne "Abhi" tujhpar ye kaisa rang dala hai~
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«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2010, 09:20:18 AM »
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kisne mana kiya apko batein karne se?
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2011, 08:57:32 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 23, 2010, 08:31:31 PM

aaj fir ek arse ke baad raat ko jaagna achcha laga,
neend thi aankhon me par fir bhi jaagna achcha laga,

koi to hai jisne kaha ki kuch der aur ruk jaao tum,
uski baat sunke uske saath ruk jaana achcha laga,

kuch kehna tha use mujhse, kuch khaas hi tha shayad,
kehti rahi wo bahut kuch aur mujhe sunna achcha laga,

uski wo baatein, uski wo boli, uski wo pyaari awaaz,
kuch der theher ke mujhe usko samajhna achcha laga,

haan shaayad arse ke baad aisa hua ki kisi ne roka,
mujhe us pal us ehsaas ke saath ruk jaana achcha laga,

mujhe aaj ek baar fir raat ko der tak jaagna achcha laga,
kisi se baatein karna aur kisi ko sunte rehna achcha laga...


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bahut ache ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2011, 01:06:02 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya MB ji...!!!

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on January 19, 2011, 08:57:32 PM
bahut ache ji
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