Achha Lagtaa Hai.......

by SURESH SANGWAN on March 21, 2010, 09:53:26 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 22, 2010, 01:31:56 PM »
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Waah .... bahut khub.... aap sab ne bahut achcha likha hai...

kabhi kabhi tanhaayi me yun kavitaayein padhna achcha lagta hai,
aap jaise kadardaan ho to kabhi kabhi likhna achcha lagta hai....
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«Reply #16 on: March 22, 2010, 01:35:24 PM »
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SHUKRIYA KLASKAR JI.

TANHAI HO NA HO HUMEN ZAMAANE SE CHHIP JANAA ACHHA LAGTA HAI.
AAP JAISE HON KADRADAAN TO LIKHNA ACHHA LAGTAA HAI.
Quote from: klaskar on March 22, 2010, 01:31:56 PM
Waah .... bahut khub.... aap sab ne bahut achcha likha hai...

kabhi kabhi tanhaayi me yun kavitaayein padhna achcha lagta hai,
aap jaise kadardaan ho to kabhi kabhi likhna achcha lagta hai....
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«Reply #17 on: March 22, 2010, 04:50:32 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on March 22, 2010, 01:31:56 PM
kabhi kabhi tanhaayi me yun kavitaayein padhna achcha lagta hai,
aap jaise kadardaan ho to kabhi kabhi likhna achcha lagta hai....
Behtareen klaskar ji, bahut achchhe...

Tanhai to khud kavita hai jara soch kar dekho to,
Tanha-tanha kuchh-kuchh likhna achchha lagta hai.....
 Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
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«Reply #18 on: March 22, 2010, 04:55:41 PM »
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thanks a lot dr pandeyji.aapne bhi achha likha hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


LIKH LIKH KE MITAANA ,MITAA MITAA KE LIKHNA ACHHA LAGTAA HAI.
KHAYAALON KO GHUMA GHUMA KE LIKHNA ACHHA LAGTAA HAI.


Quote from: drpandey on March 22, 2010, 04:50:32 PM
Behtareen klaskar ji, bahut achchhe...

Tanhai to khud kavita hai jara soch kar dekho to,
Tanha-tanha kuchh-kuchh likhna achchha lagta hai.....
 Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
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«Reply #19 on: March 22, 2010, 05:09:04 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 22, 2010, 04:55:41 PM
thanks a lot dr pandeyji.aapne bhi achha likha hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


LIKH LIKH KE MITAANA ,MITAA MITAA KE LIKHNA ACHHA LAGTAA HAI.
KHAYAALON KO GHUMA GHUMA KE LIKHNA ACHHA LAGTAA HAI.
Most welcome SURESH bhai bas qalam chalti rahey...kahin rukney na paaye...

Likha varaq hazar mitaya kabhi-kabhi,
Ghooma tamam umr sunaya kabhi-kabhi.
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«Reply #20 on: March 23, 2010, 12:00:16 PM »
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AAP KA BAHUT SHUKRIYA .
DRPANDEYJI.
AISE QALAM CHALTI HAI SURAJ KE CHHARON AUR.
 JAISE DHARTI CHALTI HAI.JAISE CHAND CHALTA HAI DHARTI KE CHHARON AUR.
 happy3 happy3 happy3



BAADAL AAYEN JHOOM KE AUR TU HO MERE SAATH.
BAARISHON MEIN CHHAY PEENA ACHHAA LAGTA HAI.

ZULF UDKE GHATAON SI GHIR KE AATI HAIN MUJHPE.
HAWAON KA LEHRAA KE CHALNAA ACHHA LAGTA HAI.


Quote from: drpandey on March 22, 2010, 05:09:04 PM
Most welcome SURESH bhai bas qalam chalti rahey...kahin rukney na paaye...

Likha varaq hazar mitaya kabhi-kabhi,
Ghooma tamam umr sunaya kabhi-kabhi.
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«Reply #21 on: March 23, 2010, 12:38:33 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 23, 2010, 12:00:16 PM
AAP KA BAHUT SHUKRIYA .
DRPANDEYJI.
AISE QALAM CHALTI HAI SURAJ KE CHHARON AUR.
 JAISE DHARTI CHALTI HAI.JAISE CHAND CHALTA HAI DHARTI KE CHHARON AUR.
 happy3 happy3 happy3



BAADAL AAYEN JHOOM KE AUR TU HO MERE SAATH.
BAARISHON MEIN CHHAY PEENA ACHHAA LAGTA HAI.

ZULF UDKE GHATAON SI GHIR KE AATI HAIN MUJHPE.
HAWAON KA LEHRAA KE CHALNAA ACHHA LAGTA HAI.


Wah Suresh bhai, bahut khub...pahley to chay ho jaye...

Pay, paani, patti, shakar garam karo chit laay,
Chhano kaanch gilas mein, vaako kahiye chay...!

coffee2 coffee2

Zulf ka shaaney per se ud kar mujhpe bikharna,
Kitna pyara-pyara, kitna achha-achha lagta hai.
Husn ka ye andaz kahan hai bachha-bachha kahta hai,
Sadak pe chaltey zism dikhana kitna ganda lagta hai?
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«Reply #22 on: March 23, 2010, 12:58:18 PM »
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WAH WAH DRPANDEYJI. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI HAAN AUR CHHAY KE LIYE SHUKRIYA.

SARE RAAH CHALO APNA AANCHAL ODHE DAAMAN SAMETE HUE.
KHULE AAM NUMAISH KARNA GANDAA LAGTA HAI.

JAAM KA SHAUK RAKHTE HO TO MAIKHAANE MEIN TASKEEN SE LO.
SARE RAAH GAALIYAAN DENA GANDA LAGTAA HAI.



Quote from: drpandey on March 23, 2010, 12:38:33 PM
Wah Suresh bhai, bahut khub...pahley to chay ho jaye...

Pay, paani, patti, shakar garam karo chit laay,
Chhano kaanch gilas mein, vaako kahiye chay...!

coffee2 coffee2

Zulf ka shaaney per se ud kar mujhpe bikharna,
Kitna pyara-pyara, kitna achha-achha lagta hai.
Husn ka ye andaz kahan hai bachha-bachha kahta hai,
Sadak pe chaltey zism dikhana kitna ganda lagta hai?
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«Reply #23 on: March 28, 2010, 12:01:13 PM »
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chhat pe baith taaron se baaten karna.
 mehki hawaa ka chhuke jana achha lagtaa hai.

kho jaun mein inmen kahin tujhe leke apne saath.
doonia se ab nazar churanaa achha lagtaa hai,
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«Reply #24 on: March 28, 2010, 12:31:10 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 28, 2010, 12:01:13 PM
chhat pe baith taaron se baaten karna.
 mehki hawaa ka chhuke jana achha lagtaa hai.

kho jaun mein inmen kahin tujhe leke apne saath.
doonia se ab nazar churanaa achha lagtaa hai,

Bahut achchhey...Wah!!! Wah!!!...........

Sooni chhat per raat andheri gum-sum ghoom raha hun,
Chaand sitaron se baatein kar khud hi jhoom raha hun,
Dard ki maari is duniya mein kisko ye batlaun main,
Apni dhun mein kavita likhna achchha lagtaa hai...!!
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«Reply #25 on: March 28, 2010, 12:37:03 PM »
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Bahut khoob drpandeyji.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
very nice lines.

Bahut kuchh hai kehne ko magar kisase kahen.
Koi samjhe dil ke zazbaaton ko to achha lagtaa hai.
Agar nahin to kya haasil kehne se bhi kisi ko.
khud hi likhkar,khud hi padhana achha lagtaa hai.

Quote from: drpandey on March 28, 2010, 12:31:10 PM
Bahut achchhey...Wah!!! Wah!!!...........

Sooni chhat per raat andheri gum-sum ghoom raha hun,
Chaand sitaron se baatein kar khud hi jhoom raha hun,
Dard ki maari is duniya mein kisko ye batlaun main,
Apni dhun mein kavita likhna achchha lagtaa hai...!!
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