Achhe nahi lagte...

by Mr.Lonely khan on July 07, 2013, 04:23:06 PM
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Tumhare Chaand se Chehre par Gam Achhe nahi lagte
hume saaf keh do 'Chale jao' ke hum Aapko Achhe nahi lagte

hume Woh Zakhm do Jaana jo Zindagi bhar na bhar paye
Kyunki jo jaldi bhar jaye Woh Zakhm Achhe nahi lagte

Tumhe Apni har Ghazal mein likhna dastoor hai Mera
lekin Sar-e-Mehfil tere Charche hume Achhe nahi lagte

Main Chahat ki us Manzil pe aa pohcha hu ab..

Ke tere Chahne wale bhi Mujhe ab Achhe nahi lagte..!

¤Mr.Lonely khan¤
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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2013, 04:55:10 PM »
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waah acha likha hai  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2013, 05:23:27 PM »
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Tumhare Chaand se Chehre par Gam
Achhe nahi lagte
hume saaf keh do 'Chale jao' ke hum
Aapko Achhe nahi lagte
hume Woh Zakhm do Jaana jo Zindagi
bhar na bhar paye
Kyunki jo jaldi bhar jaye Woh Zakhm
Achhe nahi lagte
Tumhe Apni har Ghazal mein likhna
dastoor hai Mera
lekin Sar-e-Mehfil tere Charche hume
Achhe nahi lagte
Main Chahat ki us Manzil pe aa pohcha hu
ab..
Ke tere Chahne wale bhi Mujhe ab Achhe
nahi lagte..!
¤Mr.Lonely khan¤
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2013, 06:03:58 PM »
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Nice Dear.Keep it On,Good Going.
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2013, 09:02:57 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2013, 01:18:58 PM »
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bahut khoob. but yeh aap ne likhi hai toh ise share section mein na post kijiyega...
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