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Aadaab To All My dear friends...
YeH just instantly likhi kalaam hai, yahaaN hi baithe baithe bus khayaal rawaN ho rahe the so likh diye.. Ummid hai aapko pasaNd aaye..
Mere sabr ka aur intehaan naa le
Aa bhi jaa aye jaan meri jaan naa le
ChaaNd taaroN ki nahi hai chahat mujhko
Milti hai tere hi aane se raahat mujhko
Chahtaa huN maiN tujh ko hii bus tujh ko
Maar daa le naa meri yeH aadat mujhko
Tha gilaa mujhe tujhi se hi mere hum dum
Naa rahi phir kisi se koi shikayat mujhko
Hai mujhko toH jannatul firdose ki chahat
Dekhe kia milta hai inaam e ebadat mujhko
YouN ruthe haiN milkar bhi na milne waale
Aur kahte hai ParwaaZ nahi adaawat mujhko
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2013, 05:43:47 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2013, 10:44:03 AM » |
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Kya baat hai Parwaaz bhai
bahut umda likha hai aapne..
Hai mujhko toH jannatul firdose ki chahat
Dekhe kia milta hai inaam e ebadat mujhko
YouN ruthe haiN milkar bhi na milne waale
Aur kahte hai ParwaaZ nahi adaawat mujhko
ye ashaar to behad khoob rahe.
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2013, 11:50:19 AM » |
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bohut bohut bohut umda kalaam waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhh parwaaz sahab ek rau apka banta hai
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2013, 12:09:18 PM » |
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KYAA BAAT KYAA BAAT
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2013, 12:46:27 PM » |
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ChaaNd taaroN ki nahi hai chahat mujhko
Milti hai tere hi aane se raahat mujhko
Hai mujhko toH jannatul firdose ki chahat
Dekhe kia milta hai inaam e ebadat mujhko
YouN ruthe haiN milkar bhi na milne waale
Aur kahte hai ParwaaZ nahi adaawat mujhko
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Bahut khubsurat ghazal likhi hai , Parwaaz ssaheb.
Parh kar bahut maza aaya . Khas taur se ye ashaar
bahut ache lage . Bhai jaldi mein likhe kalaam mein
jab mashaallah yeh zor hai to mehnat se likhi ghazal
ki kya baat hogi . Khuda aapke qalam mein zor aur
khayalon mein wusat banaye rakhe . Amin . Bahut bahut
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«Reply #12 on: April 12, 2013, 02:56:47 PM » |
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Bro.... kamaal hai ji instant writing n posting m alg hi mza hai  ese kalaam me ek freshness hoti hai Jo bhai hum chahenge ki aapko ese khyal aate rahen ! Hai mujhko toH jannatul firdose ki chahat Dekhe kia milta hai inaam e ebadat mujhko ! ye ashaar kuch hatkar hai... ye iss ghazal ka umdaa sher h Jo iss ghazal ka lgta hi nhi humari daad aur mubarakbaad kubul Karen khus then mast rahen |
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«Reply #14 on: April 12, 2013, 04:58:13 PM » |
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bahut khoob
Ravi Jee Aadaab!
Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab... aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye..
Aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..
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