Adhoorapan dasta hai !!!!!!

by Talat on May 05, 2005, 05:20:18 AM
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Yeh zindagi adhoori si adhoora sa hai sab kuch
Na koi tamanna rahi na jeene ki aarzoo hai ab
Phool khile hain phir bhi khizaan ka muasam hai
Kaanton se bhar liya hai maine apna daaman
Haathon ki sab lakeeron ko kya main mita doon
Jab in main tera naam nahin phir kya inka matlab
Muskurahat wo kho gayi ankhain udaas udaas
Kya hua hai tumhe ? poochte hain mujhse sab
Kya baatoon kya haal hai hum ko nahin khabar
Bas tera hi ek naam hai dil ki har dharkan par !!
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2005, 08:11:52 AM »
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Yeh zindagi adhoori si adhoora sa hai sab kuch
Na koi tamanna rahi na jeene ki aarzoo hai ab
Phool khile hain phir bhi khizaan ka muasam hai
Kaanton se bhar liya hai maine apna daaman
Haathon ki sab lakeeron ko kya main mita doon
Jab in main tera naam nahin phir kya inka matlab
Muskurahat wo kho gayi ankhain udaas udaas
Kya hua hai tumhe ? poochte hain mujhse sab
Kya baatoon kya haal hai hum ko nahin khabar
Bas tera hi ek naam hai dil ki har dharkan par !!
wow Talat,very nice,poem ki rhyming bohat hi khoobsurat dhang se ki hai,beautiful.
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2005, 09:49:00 AM »
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Thanks a lot Nidhi !!!!   .........................................
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2005, 09:51:39 AM »
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Yeh zindagi adhoori si adhoora sa hai sab kuch
Na koi tamanna rahi na jeene ki aarzoo hai ab
Phool khile hain phir bhi khizaan ka muasam hai
Kaanton se bhar liya hai maine apna daaman
Haathon ki sab lakeeron ko kya main mita doon
Jab in main tera naam nahin phir kya inka matlab
Muskurahat wo kho gayi ankhain udaas udaas
Kya hua hai tumhe ? poochte hain mujhse sab
Kya baatoon kya haal hai hum ko nahin khabar
Bas tera hi ek naam hai dil ki har dharkan par !!


wow... nice Talat ...    :D
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2005, 09:53:03 AM »
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Thanks buddy !!!!!! .............................................
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2005, 10:08:46 AM »
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Talat.....................................very realistic..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2005, 10:10:07 AM »
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Talat.....................................very realistic..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


Ya i know its realistic !!! thanks a lot Friend !!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2005, 10:14:20 AM »
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Thanks buddy !!!!!! .............................................


aree pleasure buddy  :wink:
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«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2005, 06:04:19 AM »
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aa bhi jaao ki ab aur intezaar nahin hota
zindagi kaise bitaaoon bina tere humdam
har dharkhan par naam aata hai tera hi
kat ta nahin hai bina tere ek lamha ek pal
bas ek tere saath ki tamanna hai mujhe
nahin chahiye mujhe sitaaron ka aancal
kaanton ki dagar par bhi chal sakte hain
kabhi to yaqeen kar meri chahat pe sanam !!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2005, 06:18:39 AM »
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Yeh zindagi adhoori si adhoora sa hai sab kuch
Na koi tamanna rahi na jeene ki aarzoo hai ab
Phool khile hain phir bhi khizaan ka muasam hai
Kaanton se bhar liya hai maine apna daaman
Haathon ki sab lakeeron ko kya main mita doon
Jab in main tera naam nahin phir kya inka matlab
Muskurahat wo kho gayi ankhain udaas udaas
Kya hua hai tumhe ? poochte hain mujhse sab
Kya baatoon kya haal hai hum ko nahin khabar
Bas tera hi ek naam hai dil ki har dharkan par !!


Wah Talat ji.........beauty from u yet again.....
Kisko tumne aise pukara hai aye mere dost,
Jisne chaha tumhe wo sada hi tumhare pas raha hai,
Usko pehchana bhi tha tumne,ye jante hai hum,
Jamane ke hi darr se toh tumne usko thukraya hai.
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2005, 06:20:06 AM »
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aa bhi jaao ki ab aur intezaar nahin hota
zindagi kaise bitaaoon bina tere humdam
har dharkhan par naam aata hai tera hi
kat ta nahin hai bina tere ek lamha ek pal
bas ek tere saath ki tamanna hai mujhe
nahin chahiye mujhe sitaaron ka aancal
kaanton ki dagar par bhi chal sakte hain
kabhi to yaqeen kar meri chahat pe sanam !!!!


Wah Talat ji,
Hum kya gaye yahan se dur do dino ke liye aye dost,
Tumne toh yahan muhabbat ki ek mehfil bana dali.....;-)
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2005, 06:20:28 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Talat Jee....

really Nice.........................
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2005, 06:22:43 AM »
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Thanks Amit......... Alam !!!

Dil ne jise awaaz di hai chupa hai wo dil main
Kahin aaspaas wo mujhe nazar aata hi nahin
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«Reply #13 on: May 07, 2005, 06:26:23 AM »
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Thanks Amit......... Alam !!!

Dil ne jise awaaz di hai chupa hai wo dil main
Kahin aaspaas wo mujhe nazar aata hi nahin


Ur welcome dear........
Dil ki nigaho se usse tum dekho aye humdum,
Deewane ko dunia ki nazar kaise pehchnoge... :wink:
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«Reply #14 on: May 07, 2005, 06:40:33 AM »
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wo bohoot qareeb hai dil ke magar hai door
dhoondti hoon har shakhs main chehra uska
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