adhoori kahani-----bansi:Miscellaneous Shayri

BANSI DHAMEJA

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Khuwahish dil men thee ki,
Apni khuwahish ka izahaar kar den

Unke liye jo mohabat dil men thee,
Us mohabat ka izhaar kar den

Jab bhi socha izahaar karne ka magar
kahin inkaar na ho jaye
Yeh soch ke mere lab sil gaye

Jab tak himaat juta te izahar-e- mohabt ki
Sunaa Uske haath peele ho gaya

Jab phir us se mulakat huyee to
Isharon isharon men ham kuchh kah gaye

Unke ashk jo bahne lage to bahte chale gaye
Barhee kushkil se usne hamse kahaa

Hamara intzaar karte karte wo thak gayee
Kiyon ki wo aurat hai is liye
Hijab ke karan pahle kuchh kah na sakee
---------------bansi(madhur)


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mkv

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Re: adhoori kahani-----bansi

«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2012, 05:14:07 PM »

Bahut khoob
maja aa gaya padh ke.
nischal bhaav se likhte rahiye.
wah wah


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BANSI DHAMEJA

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Re: adhoori kahani-----bansi

«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2012, 05:18:53 PM »

Quote from: mkv on September 10, 2012, 05:14:07 PM

Bahut khoob
maja aa gaya padh ke.
nischal bhaav se likhte rahiye.
wah wah

mukesh ji thanks


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Re: adhoori kahani-----bansi

«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2012, 05:49:51 PM »

bahut khoob bansi ji.. bahut achhi kavita hai.. Usual Smile


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Re: adhoori kahani-----bansi

«Reply #4 on: September 10, 2012, 06:35:37 PM »

Bansi Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob jee sahiN farmaya aapne achchi kalaam kahi
hai... Ahsaas kafi khoob rahe janab...

Humari dheroN daad shayad real mohobbat meiN zubaaN par
lock lag jata hai... isi khayaal meiN humne bhi aik sher
kaha tha...

Kisi ne chaaha toH us se pyaar kar na sake
Jisko chaahaa hum us se izhaar kar na sake

Aapka taqallus dekha Madhur toH hume apne purane mitra
ki yaad aa gayi... Achcha taqallus hai ...

Likhate rahiye.. aur mehfil roshan karte rahiye...
Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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Sps

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Re: adhoori kahani-----bansi

«Reply #5 on: September 10, 2012, 08:12:29 PM »

nice and beautiful thoughts


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Re: adhoori kahani-----bansi

«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2012, 07:01:56 AM »

waah madhur ji daad daadddddddd


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BANSI DHAMEJA

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Re: adhoori kahani-----bansi

«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2012, 10:47:42 AM »

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 10, 2012, 05:49:51 PM

bahut khoob bansi ji.. bahut achhi kavita hai.. Usual Smile

touhid ji bahut bahut shukriya


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BANSI DHAMEJA

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Re: adhoori kahani-----bansi

«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2012, 03:44:21 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 10, 2012, 06:35:37 PM

Main to bansi hi thaa magar
Kuchh doston ne mil kar
Mera naam karan kar diya
Pyar se mujhe ‘madhur’ banaa diya

Parwaaz ji hausila afzahi ke liye shukriya.
Khuda ne chaha to aata eahoonga, likhta rahoonga