~*~ Adhura safa zindagi ka ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on April 26, 2011, 03:38:14 PM
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"Yeh shehar uss bewaffa ka lagta hai"..Yeh line kahin suni thi jo istamal kar raha hoon iss nazm main..

Dhoor le chalo kahin mujhe yahan se,
Yeh shehar mujhe uss bewaffa ka lagta hai..

Arson tak bhool kar mujhe kehti hai kay,
Bhooli nahin bas baat karne se darr lagta tha,
Yeh bahana mujhe ab har dafa ka lagta hai..

Sirf Khuda se umeed aur ishq karo; insaanon se nahin,
Yeh sauda bhi mujhe nafa ka lagta hai..

Uski rehmat par koi shak nahin mujhe mager main,
Gunehgaar hoon aisa kay Khuda bhi mujhe khafa khafa sa lagta hai..

Usne jo kiya uske baad dil root gaya hai us’se,
Jo pehle kabhi meri zindagi hua karta tha,
Woh aj meri kitab main guzra ek adhura safa sa lagta hai..

‘Khamosh’ kehta hai safed libas tujh par jhajta nahin hai Zalim,
Tu bhi aise libas main insaan wafa ka lagta hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2011, 04:20:33 PM »
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mashaallah kya khoob kalaam se rubaru karwaya apne…
wah dost wah…
kya kahen bhai no words for cmnt…

aakhiri waqt hai aakhir
jaaye to jaayen kahan

bata koi aisa jahan
ruuh e farist bhi na ho jahan………

dost hazaaron daad aur bht saari duayen aapko
khus rahiye
sukriye
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2011, 05:21:08 PM »
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bahut khoob rahim bhai
     
     ALLAH PAK HAMSE KHAFA H Y SIRF SOCH H HAMARI
          keep writting
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2011, 05:26:06 PM »
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wah...behtarin rahim ji....bechain alfaaz hai....tutte khwaab hai....lekin bhag kar jaaye bhi to kha jaaye....khuch aise hi jajbaat nazar aa rahe hai iss nazm mein....bahut khoob....bahut accha lga....
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2011, 07:55:49 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on April 26, 2011, 04:20:33 PM
mashaallah kya khoob kalaam se rubaru karwaya apne…
wah dost wah…
kya kahen bhai no words for cmnt…

aakhiri waqt hai aakhir
jaaye to jaayen kahan

bata koi aisa jahan
ruuh e farist bhi na ho jahan………

dost hazaaron daad aur bht saari duayen aapko
khus rahiye
sukriye
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya KillBill dost..
hamesha saath dete rahiyega..
Aur nice lines.. Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2011, 07:58:07 PM »
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Quote from: yasmeen khan on April 26, 2011, 05:21:08 PM
bahut khoob rahim bhai
     
     ALLAH PAK HAMSE KHAFA H Y SIRF SOCH H HAMARI
          keep writting
Shukriya Yasmeen jee..
Aur apne sahi kaha bilkul..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2011, 08:02:12 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on April 26, 2011, 05:26:06 PM
wah...behtarin rahim ji....bechain alfaaz hai....tutte khwaab hai....lekin bhag kar jaaye bhi to kha jaaye....khuch aise hi jajbaat nazar aa rahe hai iss nazm mein....bahut khoob....bahut accha lga....
Jee di apne toh bilkul ehsaason ko parr liya..
Bahaut khushi hui mujhe yeh jankar..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2011, 11:54:56 PM »
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NICE
DIL KI BAAT MERE DOST JARA MUJSE BHI  KAHNE DO
THODI DER BUS US BEWAFA KE SHAHER MEI RAHNE DO


Quote from: -Rahim- on April 26, 2011, 03:38:14 PM
"Yeh shehar uss bewaffa ka lagta hai"..Yeh line kahin suni thi jo istamal kar raha hoon iss nazm main..

Dhoor le chalo kahin mujhe yahan se,
Yeh shehar mujhe uss bewaffa ka lagta hai..

Arson tak bhool kar mujhe kehti hai kay,
Bhooli nahin bas baat karne se darr lagta tha,
Yeh bahana mujhe ab har dafa ka lagta hai..

Sirf Khuda se umeed aur ishq karo; insaanon se nahin,
Yeh sauda bhi mujhe nafa ka lagta hai..

Uski rehmat par koi shak nahin mujhe mager main,
Gunehgaar hoon aisa kay Khuda bhi mujhe khafa khafa sa lagta hai..

Usne jo kiya uske baad dil root gaya hai us’se,
Jo pehle kabhi meri zindagi hua karta tha,
Woh aj meri kitab main guzra ek adhura safa sa lagta hai..

‘Khamosh’ kehta hai safed libas tujh par jhajta nahin hai Zalim,
Tu bhi aise libas main insaan wafa ka lagta hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2011, 06:57:12 AM »
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wah wah wah rahimji... kya kaha hai aapne.. bhut khub...
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2011, 09:34:50 AM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on April 26, 2011, 11:54:56 PM
NICE
DIL KI BAAT MERE DOST JARA MUJSE BHI  KAHNE DO
THODI DER BUS US BEWAFA KE SHAHER MEI RAHNE DO


Bahaut bahaut shukriya Manoj jee..
Kya kehne.. Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2011, 09:40:32 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on April 27, 2011, 06:57:12 AM
wah wah wah rahimji... kya kaha hai aapne.. bhut khub...


Shukriya Anu jee..
Yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2011, 11:13:26 AM »
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hum aur ek bar sath dene aa gaye dost…

kalaam hi esa hai
kya kare khiche chle aaye

bht khub dost
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2011, 12:05:13 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

har Sher Lajawaab!!! Bahut Ache..

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«Reply #13 on: April 27, 2011, 12:52:41 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on April 27, 2011, 11:13:26 AM
hum aur ek bar sath dene aa gaye dost…

kalaam hi esa hai
kya kare khiche chle aaye

bht khub dost
Bahaut bahaut shukriya dost apki mohobaton ka..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: khwaish on April 27, 2011, 12:05:13 PM
Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

har Sher Lajawaab!!! Bahut Ache..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
Apki inn mohobaton ka jo mujhe zinda rakhti hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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