Adhuri Khueshien ( Qadeertoopchi )

by musaafirhon on September 16, 2009, 02:10:47 PM
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Wo nazar aaj bhi mujhe dhonti hogi !!
Wo hont aaj bhi khuch kahene ko betab honge !!
Wo raaste aaj bhi mera intezaar karte honge !!
Wo galiyan wo nukkad mujhe yaad karte honge !!

Mai badnaseeb unhe chod aya !!
Maazi  se har rishta tood aya !!
Ye kyun howa , kab howa , kaise howa ,
Meri hasraton ka qoon kaise howa !!
Kaun hai iska gunha gaar ,
Mai hon ? ya waqath ? ya meri gurbath !!
Yehi sawal mai khud se aksar kiya karta hon !!
Jawab ka muntazir hon shayd isiliye jiya karta hon !!

Magar afsos ke aj tak koi jawab nahi mila !!
In ankhon ko fir wo haseen qaub nahi mila !!
Ab kissi se shikwa-shikayath kya karen !!
Haqeeqath yahi to haqeeqath se gila kya karen !!

Chalo jo howa acha howa !!
Maazi ki qurbani se mustaqbil to acha howa !!

Ab wo saari yaden , wo manzar !!
Dil ke pitare me qaid hain !!
Mai hon , meri tanha-e- hai !!
Aur mustaqbil-o-maazi ke khuch dhondle –dhondle se qaub bikhre pade hain,
Shayad inhe simetne me hi zindagi ki shaam ho jaye , aur in bechain ankhon ko kabhi na jaagne wali need me mubtila kar den !!

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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2009, 09:01:09 PM »
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qadeer ji ek ek alfaz bahut bahut acha hai...bahut khoob likha hai..aur shukriya apne urdu k bhari alfaz zayada istemal nhi kiye..bahut bahu sunder aur bahut hi sulhi hui kavita hai... Applause  Applause  Applause  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2009, 10:19:51 PM »
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qadeer ji ek ek alfaz bahut bahut acha hai...bahut khoob likha hai..aur shukriya apne urdu k bhari alfaz zayada istemal nhi kiye..bahut bahu sunder aur bahut hi sulhi hui kavita hai... Applause  Applause  Applause  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

nawazish karam ,, jo apne waqath diya aur himmat afza-e-ki ,, mashkoor hon janab .. allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2009, 10:22:37 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Qadeer ji,really touching n beautiful creation,excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2009, 02:21:01 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Qadeer ji,really touching n beautiful creation,excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya madhu ji !!

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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2009, 04:07:56 PM »
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BOhat khoob Mashallah,
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2010, 10:18:52 PM »
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BOhat khoob Mashallah,

karam nawazi ke liye mumno hun !!

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