Aftaab Dhal Gaya ........................PWFS

by pankajwfs on March 28, 2012, 03:41:37 AM
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Aaftaab dhal gaya lo ab shaam hui
Saaki pilade mujhe tu ab jaam koi

Rakha kya hai Duniyai-jhameloN me
Chhod ke inhe aa karein ab kaam koi

PaimanoN se to peeya kiye hum abdan
Lagain lab se sheeshi,ho Anjaam koi

Azeem aur Shaikh kya peetey nahi  ?
Raazdaan Hun mai kyun loon Naam koi

Shayari-e-Maikashi bhi hai ik fun
Kaam ye khas hai samajh na aam koi

Pilaya kiye wo ankhon se kai daafa
Dast-e-saaki se pine ka ho intejaam koi

Dard dete rahe wo hum bhi sahte rahe,
Sine se lagaye rahe ke ho inaam koi

Nashe me hun na lago munh yun mere
Kahi kar na du gustakhi-e-ikraam koi

Mehfil-e-rind ki khu kuch aisi padi
SukuN milta hai ho jaisey Maqaam koi

Aaftaab dhal gaya lo ab shaam hui
Saaki pilade mujhe tu ab jaam koi

(PWFS 28/03/2012)
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2012, 03:48:18 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2012, 05:20:48 AM »
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nice pankaj ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2012, 07:18:27 AM »
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bahotttt khoob Pankaj sahab
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2012, 07:19:10 AM »
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bahotttt khoob Pankaj sahab
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«Reply #6 on: March 28, 2012, 07:37:06 AM »
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gud one pankaj ji....
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«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2012, 08:41:55 AM »
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Pnkaj Jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab... WaaH bahut khoob achchi
kalaam kahi hai aapne.... Usual Smile

Aapke khayaaloN ki gehraai behad achchi rahi... Usual Smile
Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: March 28, 2012, 09:37:16 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 28, 2012, 03:48:18 AM
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Thanks Sir
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«Reply #9 on: March 28, 2012, 09:37:42 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 28, 2012, 05:04:28 AM
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Thanks Hasan Sahab
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Quote from: saahill on March 28, 2012, 05:20:48 AM
nice pankaj ji
Sukriay Saahil ji
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«Reply #11 on: March 28, 2012, 11:12:56 AM »
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Vaah vaah pankaj ji

kya baat hai Applause Applause

peeta nahi..par ..nasha sa chaa gaya pahli line padhte hi..bahut khoob.

maja aa gaya..yun hi likhte rahiye. Applause
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«Reply #12 on: March 28, 2012, 12:21:59 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on March 28, 2012, 07:18:27 AM
bahotttt khoob Pankaj sahab

Bahut bahut sukriya Sarfira ji
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Quote from: dolly on March 28, 2012, 07:37:06 AM
gud one pankaj ji....
thanks dolly ji...
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«Reply #14 on: March 29, 2012, 02:15:01 AM »
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awesome.....................waaaaaaaaaah.....zaba rdast likha hai bhai dad kabool karen  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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