Afwaah ! !

by drpandey on March 30, 2010, 08:37:07 PM
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                       ! AFWAAH !
Apna koi sawaal tum bhi mere jaanib kar do !
Meri yahi hasrat ki mera naam mukhalif kar do !

Jab likh hi rahe ho tum nama-e-aamaal mera,
Pahle mera gunaah hi haazir-e-khaliq kar do !

Ye haamil-e-kirdaar meri itni si khawaahish,
Afsurdgi 'Adab' ki afwaah mein qaabiz kar do !

Dr HP Pandey
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2010, 10:05:23 PM »
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Wah kya khoob likha aapne Pandey ji.lovely work.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2010, 03:34:54 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 30, 2010, 10:05:23 PM
Wah kya khoob likha aapne Pandey ji.lovely work.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut Shukriya Madhu ji, aapki hausla afzai aur inayat ke liye...
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2010, 06:30:00 AM »
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"подробней пожалуйста"
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2010, 07:46:43 AM »
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Quote from: Анекдот on March 31, 2010, 06:30:00 AM
"подробней пожалуйста"
Dear guest, thanks for your comment...but I am sorry to say that I am not able to understand the language you have used..
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2010, 08:08:08 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 31, 2010, 07:51:51 AM
waah bahut hi khoob Pandey ji,bahut ache ashaar  Applause Applause Applause
Inayat aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya @kaash ji...aap bhi kuchh likhte to bahut achchha lagta...
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2010, 08:36:57 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 31, 2010, 08:26:47 AM
Pandey ji ur welcome and i am trying to write hope acha lage


jawaab sawaal nikal aayenge
sawaal jawaab nazar aayenge
har taraf sawaal paayenge
har taraf jawaab payenge
hum jaisa dekhna chahenge
hum vaisa jahan payenge
Bahut achchhe @kaash ji, sahi farmaya...

Sawaal tere jab aatey hain aas-pass ajab!
Jabaab mere satatey hain baar-baar ajab!
Main apne amal ka kis-kis ko dun hisaab 'Adab',
Tamam umr ke badley mile sawaal ajab...!
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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2010, 08:42:44 AM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Dr pandey ji.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2010, 08:48:12 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 31, 2010, 08:42:44 AM
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Dr pandey ji.. Bahoot Khoob!
Bahut bahut Shukriya Sophi ji, kuchh shayarana inayat aap ki bhi ho to aur achchha lagega...
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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2010, 05:03:51 PM »
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Achhi poem hai Pandey ji. Nai style ki sunder rachna hai. Keep writing.
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«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2010, 05:09:18 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on March 31, 2010, 05:03:51 PM
Achhi poem hai Pandey ji. Nai style ki sunder rachna hai. Keep writing.
Bahut bahut Inayat aapki Riyaz Sahab, duvayen dete rahiye..hausla afzai ka behad shukriya..
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«Reply #11 on: March 31, 2010, 07:15:56 PM »
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khoobsurat ashaar hain dr sahab .... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: March 31, 2010, 08:07:40 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on March 31, 2010, 07:15:56 PM
khoobsurat ashaar hain dr sahab .... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Inayat aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya khamosh_aawaaz ji...
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«Reply #13 on: April 03, 2010, 01:39:30 PM »
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 bahut khoob pandey ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: April 03, 2010, 04:15:02 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 03, 2010, 01:39:30 PM
bahut khoob pandey ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut bahut Shukriya Sheba ji, aapke hausla afzai aur inayat ke liye aapka behad shukrgujar hun...
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