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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2010, 04:22:25 AM » |
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Beautiful NAZM indeed!Surcharged with emotions.Deeply felt and well said.Congratulations!
- arun mishra.
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2010, 12:08:36 PM » |
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vb ji aap agar sirf rahi hi likh den to hamen jyada acha lagega
actualy 2001 jabardasti me jodna pada hai
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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2010, 09:39:40 AM » |
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maafi chahtay hain... saahab... dar-asl hamaray tajrubaat k mutaabiq net par name tu hotay nahi.. nick huva kartay hain.. or wo jaisay hon.. waisay he pukaaray jain tu behtar mehsoos hota hay hamen...
koi baat nahi aap ki khushi me hamari khushi shamil hai aap jaisa uchit samjhen |
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2010, 09:54:31 AM » |
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yaar bade din bad kisi ne itni mast gazal sunayi hai ..kya khoob kaha he janab...ama miyan dil khush kar ditta si..aao jhaappi palo jaldi se..
eine sone sone geet nu likhne waste jeeee dheeeer saari mili juli daad apki or pesh hain sweekar karo jiii...
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«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2010, 06:18:55 AM » |
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AbhiTamrakar Jee! buhat shukriya...
yaar mera nick or name dono same he u =can call me "Abhi"..hahaha |
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«Reply #8 on: October 27, 2010, 01:24:15 PM » |
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beautiful feelings VB ji.........maza aagaya padhke..aur dil me kai sare feelings as usual....
lijiye suniye hamari bhi baat.......
Tu hi bata ae deewane mere
Main kaise khush raha karun
Jab tu mere dard me duba hai
Main fir kis tarah hasa karun
Tere dard me tere gum me
Main bhi dubi hun subaho sham
Tu itna bol de zara mujhe
Main kaise fir gulab si mehka karun
Mujhe dekh dekh tu tadapta hai
Tujhe dekh dekh main roti hun
Hai kitni mahobbat tujhse mujhe
Tu bata main kaise bayaan karun
Kabhi mil gaye hum jo ru ba ru
Har raaz bayaan ho jayega
Meri nazrein dekh tujhe tadpengi
Ye mahobbat ka chehra khil jayega
Gar chahat teri mujhe mil jayegi
To rang mera nikhar jayega
Ye aankhon me chamak fir aajayegi
Aur labon pe gulab khil jayega
Lekin ye kabhi ho sakta nahin
Ye janti hun main sanam
Fir tu hi bata ae mere humnasheen
Main kaise khush raha karun
Teri yaad me tere pyaar me
Main zindagi ko guzaar dun
Lekin tere bina muskaun main
Kaise khudko itni saza diya karun
Tu hi bata ae deewane mere
Main kaise khush raha karun
Jab tu mere dard me duba hai
Main fir kis tarah hasa karun...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2010, 01:39:17 PM » |
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bhut badhiya reply diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2010, 02:05:48 PM » |
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VB ji...jo aapkipoems padhte hain puri aur feel karte hain wo jante hain k aapki poems kya hain kya nahin..so aap chinta na karen...
aapki ye lambi lambi poems aur geet humko bht pasand hain
abhi to kai hain jinke replies dene hain..har bar ye soch k chup reh gai k pata nahin aap kya sochenge..ab jab aap bole k koi prob nahin bindas reply karo to ab aap padhte jaiye ji....
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«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2010, 04:45:14 PM » |
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thnx vb ji aapne pasand kiya mera likha hua
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«Reply #13 on: October 28, 2010, 10:27:15 AM » |
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beautiful feelings VB ji.........maza aagaya padhke..aur dil me kai sare feelings as usual....
lijiye suniye hamari bhi baat.......
Tu hi bata ae deewane mere
Main kaise khush raha karun
Jab tu mere dard me duba hai
Main fir kis tarah hasa karun
Tere dard me tere gum me
Main bhi dubi hun subaho sham
Tu itna bol de zara mujhe
Main kaise fir gulab si mehka karun
Mujhe dekh dekh tu tadapta hai
Tujhe dekh dekh main roti hun
Hai kitni mahobbat tujhse mujhe
Tu bata main kaise bayaan karun
Kabhi mil gaye hum jo ru ba ru
Har raaz bayaan ho jayega
Meri nazrein dekh tujhe tadpengi
Ye mahobbat ka chehra khil jayega
Gar chahat teri mujhe mil jayegi
To rang mera nikhar jayega
Ye aankhon me chamak fir aajayegi
Aur labon pe gulab khil jayega
Lekin ye kabhi ho sakta nahin
Ye janti hun main sanam
Fir tu hi bata ae mere humnasheen
Main kaise khush raha karun
Teri yaad me tere pyaar me
Main zindagi ko guzaar dun
Lekin tere bina muskaun main
Kaise khudko itni saza diya karun
Tu hi bata ae deewane mere
Main kaise khush raha karun
Jab tu mere dard me duba hai
Main fir kis tarah hasa karun...!!!
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«Reply #14 on: October 28, 2010, 05:33:49 PM » |
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on eTI community..
