agar tum haqeekat mein hota....

Qudrath ke karishmon mein agar raat na hoti
Qwaabon mein bhi phir unsse mulaqaat na hoti

kuch lamhe hi sahi par karaar aati hai
un lamhon mein hume apne par guroor aati hai

un haathon ka sparsh reh rehkar yaad aati hai
aankh kulti hai phir sone ko jee chahtha hai

e-kaash ye zindagi mere bus mein hota
tho qwaabon mein hi nahi tum sach main mere hote

har lamha tumhe dekhti
phir sone ki nahi jaagne ki tammanna karthi

par haqeekat mein ye sirf ek aas ho
sach mein nahi bus tum mere sapno mere saath ho

par sukoon hai mujhe ki saath hai tu mere
is dil ke paas hai tu-shaam-savere!!![/color][/color]

shukriya waheed ji

before i got registered to this site, i have read some of the shayari's.
and fortunately ur shayari was the first one...i have read the one that was posted in the forum of shayari-ye-dard

i have read such a nice poetic pieces from everyone here that i have immediately registered myself
it is been really nice experience since i have joined here
hope this goes on well like this forever.

qudha se hum yehi duaa karte hain ki hum apne taraf se jo bhi ho sake likhte rahain,
aur aap sab logoan ki saath hamesha hamare saath rahain

bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sab logoan ka jo mujhe itna prothsaahan (encouragement) de rahain hai likhne mein

thanks a lot
and i hope i will continue like this

bahut shukriya harsh ji

aapka shaayari hum ne pada hai aur aap bahut koob likthe hain

humein pata nahi tha, pehchaan hogi aap sab se
jo karte hain meeti-meeti baatein humse
likthe hain shaayari kamaal se
achha lagne laga ye maahol kasam se
ho gayee  dosti humein aap sabse

thanks alot once again to all of yoindia members

anitha ji, mujhe itani samajh to nahi hai phir bhi kahana chahunga ki, shuruat ka pahla sher to bahut hi choo lene wala tha lekin bad me aapaki pakad kuch dili ho gai. . . .

Harsh ji,
aapki taarif me kya likhun, sachmuch har sher me gahrai hai aur sidha jigar ko cheerata hua andar tak jata hai, bahut achcha lagata hai aapako padana.

jindagi kabhi yun muskara bhi deti hai,
dil todati hai, dijalon ko mila bhi deti hai.

Wahid sahab
aapke liye mai yahi kahunga

hosalaafzai ye ladkiyon ki jyada karate hain,
bisat pe pyade ko wazir aur wazir ko pyada karte hain,
monitor hai janab koi mamuli shkas nahi,
isliye bekarar ko bekaar padate hain

dard ko lafzon se kaise bayaan keroon.....kutchh is taraah koshish ki...

kab tak koi maikhane main daroo piya kare,
is zindagi ko yuin hi koi kyuin jiya kare.

shama agar de gair ke gharon main roshani,
toh zindagi main kyuin koi, wafa kiya kare.

itna bada hai dard ab, ki ban gaya dawa,
toh zindagi main kyuin koi dawa kiya kare.

Gam-o-khushi ke lamho me hai gam naseeb me,
toh zindagi se kyuin koi gila kiya kare.

Napaak sa lage hai ab, her taraf maahoul,
toh zindagi me 'harsh' kyuin aansoo piya kare.


Harash Mahajan 'harsh'©

wah wah wah bahoot khoob anitha and harashmahajan!! Good one Bekarar ji!!!

wah bahoot hi khoobsoorat likha hai apne....

jhoothhi shaan-o-shaukat mein ab duniya yuin mashgool hui,
keemti cheezon ke chakker mein bhool gaye galeeche log.

harash ji bahut khoob


hum aur kya kahein, kehne keliye labj nahi milrahein
aapki shaayari ki taarif hum kaise karein
kya khoob likthe hain aap, iske aage aur kya kahein