Aha Zindagi!!! Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on January 04, 2011, 07:25:37 AM
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Dosto kai din pehle ek kavita prastut kithi maine "Ek kavita lik raha hun" aaj apni dusri kavita prastut kara raha hun ..ye pehle bhi publish ho chuki he par offline.. aaj pehli bar online kisi site par ise publish kar raha hun...ummeed hai ise bhi apka bharpoor pyar milega~


अहा जिंदगी तू क्या है ?
किसी कवि की सुंदर कविता है ,
है किसी कलाकार की अनूठी कला ,
निर्मल नि: छल सविता है ।।

अहा जिंदगी तू क्या है ?
धूप छांव का तानाबाना ,
जो तेरे साथ साथ चलता है ,
कभी दुख कभी सुख की मुस्कान लिए ,
हर शख्स तेरा रस पीता है ।।

अहा जिंदगी तू क्या है ?
कभी नदिया सी बहती जाती ,
कभी चट्टानों से टकराती ,
कलकल मधुर संगीत सुनाती ,
तुझमें कितनी विविधता है ।।

अहा जिंदगी तू क्या है ?
बचपन सी बढती है तू ,
यौवन सी खिलती है ,
मीठे अपनों की मिठास लिए ,
हर पल कितना कुछ देती है ।।

अहा जिंदगी तू क्या है ?
र्इश्वर की एक देन है तू ,
बडे महापुरुष ये कहते हैं ,
पल दो पल का प्यार है तू ,
पर कितना सुंदर उपहार है तू ,
हर पल “ अभि ” मुस्कुराकर कहता है ,
अहा जिंदगी हर पल एक कविता है ।।
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2011, 07:29:47 AM »
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wowwwww

abhi maja aa gaya......bahot bahot hi sundar racha he .....

thx for sharing it
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2011, 07:33:55 AM »
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sad5sad5sad5
mai nahi padh paya:(sad5 haye re kismattttt .
hindi support nahi karta mera mobile.
Abhi ji ka likha nahi padh paya mai.
aaj khana nai khana meko bas.
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2011, 07:48:14 AM »
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ahaa zindagi tu kya hai..Huh?

bht achchi poem abhi ji...lekin main naaraaz hun gussa hun isly nahin kahungi k achchi hai ......... no comments.....
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2011, 07:53:01 AM »
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Bahut sundar rachna hai Abhi!zindagee ka saar samete hue...bahut khoob!
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2011, 08:00:03 AM »
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acchi kavita hai abhi ji....
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2011, 08:21:36 AM »
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wowwwww

abhi maja aa gaya......bahot bahot hi sundar racha he .....

thx for sharing it
thnx bro~
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2011, 08:22:24 AM »
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sad5sad5sad5
mai nahi padh paya:(sad5 haye re kismattttt .
hindi support nahi karta mera mobile.
Abhi ji ka likha nahi padh paya mai.
aaj khana nai khana meko bas.
are to nirala ji pc par padh lijiyega..

bhai aap aaye wahi bahut hai..

dhnyawad apka~
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2011, 08:23:19 AM »
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ahaa zindagi tu kya hai..Huh?

bht achchi poem abhi ji...lekin main naaraaz hun gussa hun isly nahin kahungi k achchi hai ......... no comments.....

aap to jhuti wali gusaa ho anu jiii...
asli wala gusaa to me hu apse~
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2011, 08:56:23 AM »
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Bahut Khub Abhi JI Sunder Kavita Hai Aapki Yuhi LIkhte Rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2011, 10:02:03 AM »
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Bahut sundar rachna hai Abhi!zindagee ka saar samete hue...bahut khoob!
dhanyawad mamta di

yunhi sath rahiye~


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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2011, 10:02:53 AM »
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acchi kavita hai abhi ji....

shkriya priya ji...

aap jaise dosto ka sath yunhi raha to or bhi likhte rahege..

sath rahiye~
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2011, 10:15:33 AM »
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बहुत अच्छी कविता लिखी है अभि जी । ज़िन्दगी कि जिसे समझना बहुत आसान है और बहुत मुश्किल भी, आपके विचार अच्छे लगे । दाद हाज़िर है ।
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2011, 10:34:58 AM »
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Mast kavita ABHI....KAM LIKHTE HO PAR ACHHA LIKHTE HO..... Applause Clapping Smiley

Aha zindagi kya kahu tujhse tu kya hai...
Kabhi hassati hai tou kabhi rulaati hai...

Kabhee khud mai samet leti hai tu mujhko
Kabhee mujh mai samaa jati hai tu khudko

Jeene ko tou hum bhee jee rahe hain tujhko
Par tu jaane kya-kya khel khilati he humko

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«Reply #14 on: January 04, 2011, 10:38:23 AM »
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abhi ji bahut maza aaya.padhkar achha laga.aise hi likhte rahiye.
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