Aha Zindagi!!! Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on January 04, 2011, 07:25:37 AM
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #15 on: January 04, 2011, 10:39:43 AM »
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bahut khoob koyal ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Mast kavita ABHI....KAM LIKHTE HO PAR ACHHA LIKHTE HO..... Applause Clapping Smiley

Aha zindagi kya kahu tujhse tu kya hai...
Kabhi hassati hai tou kabhi rulaati hai...

Kabhee khud mai samet leti hai tu mujhko
Kabhee mujh mai samaa jati hai tu khudko

Jeene ko tou hum bhee jee rahe hain tujhko
Par tu jaane kya-kya khel khilati he humko


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«Reply #16 on: January 04, 2011, 10:47:43 AM »
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bahut khoob Abhiji... bahut khoob likha hai.. bahut achchha.
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #17 on: January 04, 2011, 11:45:01 AM »
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Bahut Khub Abhi JI Sunder Kavita Hai Aapki Yuhi LIkhte Rahiye

apka bahut bahut shukriya rishi ji..

yunh sath rahiye~
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«Reply #18 on: January 04, 2011, 11:46:45 AM »
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बहुत अच्छी कविता लिखी है अभि जी । ज़िन्दगी कि जिसे समझना बहुत आसान है और बहुत मुश्किल भी, आपके विचार अच्छे लगे । दाद हाज़िर है ।

dhanyawad riyaz ji...

aap aaye saraha bada achha laga..

yunhi sath rahiye`
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«Reply #19 on: January 05, 2011, 06:55:51 AM »
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Mast kavita ABHI....KAM LIKHTE HO PAR ACHHA LIKHTE HO..... Applause Clapping Smiley

Aha zindagi kya kahu tujhse tu kya hai...
Kabhi hassati hai tou kabhi rulaati hai...

Kabhee khud mai samet leti hai tu mujhko
Kabhee mujh mai samaa jati hai tu khudko

Jeene ko tou hum bhee jee rahe hain tujhko
Par tu jaane kya-kya khel khilati he humko

shukriya koyaliya rani...

bada achhi achhi koshish he aapki...

eiseh likhte rehena~

abhi ji bahut maza aaya.padhkar achha laga.aise hi likhte rahiye.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



shukriya suresh ji..

yunhi sath rahiye~

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