~ Akela nahin hoon main ~ by Rahym

by dead heart on April 19, 2013, 04:40:03 AM
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Samander kay kinare baith apni zindagi kay kuch jazbaaton ko shabd de raha hoon..Yeh koi nazm nahin hai, bas kuch khayal hai dil kay..Umeed karta hoon dil se parrenge ap sab!

Bheed main basa bahaut hi tanha sa shaher hoon main,
Kareeb aa kar log dhoor hogaye jis’se, woh sunsan manzil hoon main..
Samjhauta karke jee loun zindagi ya phir nakam khwabon kay sang ro loun,
Aise hi sawalon ki uljhanon main qaid ek chalta raahi hoon main..
Choti choti cheezon main khushian talaash kar jee toh leta hoon,
Dusron ki beshumar cheezon ko dekh karta na shukrani hoon main..
Fiza yeh jo samander ki hai mujhe choo kar Khuda ka ehsaas karati hai,
Issi ka saath paa kar khushi talashta, tanha ek musafir hoon main..
Ghazlon man pata hoon apni zindagi ki dastaan yun main kay,
Ehsaas hota hai kay iss bhool bulaiya se guzarta akela nahin hoon main..
Kabhi kabhi dil haske puchta hai, kab tak mera tootna sehen karoge ‘Khamosh’,
Badi asani se main keh deta hoon, jab tak saans rahegi, mohobat karta rahunga main,
Mohobat karta rahunga main, bas mohobat karta rahunga main..

~..Rahym..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2013, 09:26:15 AM »
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nice..1
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2013, 02:18:41 PM »
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Ghazlon man pata hoon apni zindagi ki dastaan yun main kay,
Ehsaas hota hai kay iss bhool bulaiya se guzarta akela nahin hoon main..
very very touchy lines.
Bahut badhiya rahim bhai
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2013, 07:21:26 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut khoob. dheron daad.
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2013, 07:55:58 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2013, 10:45:13 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on April 19, 2013, 04:40:03 AM
Samander kay kinare baith apni zindagi kay kuch jazbaaton ko shabd de raha hoon..Yeh koi nazm nahin hai, bas kuch khayal hai dil kay..Umeed karta hoon dil se parrenge ap sab!

Bheed main basa bahaut hi tanha sa shaher hoon main,
Kareeb aa kar log dhoor hogaye jis’se, woh sunsan manzil hoon main..
Samjhauta karke jee loun zindagi ya phir nakam khwabon kay sang ro loun,
Aise hi sawalon ki uljhanon main qaid ek chalta raahi hoon main..
Choti choti cheezon main khushian talaash kar jee toh leta hoon,
Dusron ki beshumar cheezon ko dekh karta na shukrani hoon main..
Fiza yeh jo samander ki hai mujhe choo kar Khuda ka ehsaas karati hai,
Issi ka saath paa kar khushi talashta, tanha ek musafir hoon main..
Ghazlon man pata hoon apni zindagi ki dastaan yun main kay,
Ehsaas hota hai kay iss bhool bulaiya se guzarta akela nahin hoon main..
Kabhi kabhi dil haske puchta hai, kab tak mera tootna sehen karoge ‘Khamosh’,
Badi asani se main keh deta hoon, jab tak saans rahegi, mohobat karta rahunga main,
Mohobat karta rahunga main, bas mohobat karta rahunga main..

~..Rahym..~..A Silent Heart..~
khubsoorat ihsaasat gehre jazbaat ,nasri andaz
bohat c daad,.........
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2013, 02:53:41 AM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab..!


Janab arsa beet jaata hai aik kalaam se dusri kalaam post karne meiN.. Huh?
KahaaN hai aajkal aap dikhayi nahi dete.. ?


Khair Allaah khair farmaaye.. Bade hi umdaa ahsaas ko lafz diye haiN janab aur behad khoob lafz diye haiN... Usual Smile
Samandar ki gehrai meiN jhaaNkna toH bahut aasaaN hota hai par gehraai meiN utar jana bahut mushkil aap gehraai meiN utarne waaloN meiN se haiN.. Usual Smile

humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye janab..
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2013, 05:58:34 PM »
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Quote from: Miru;;;; on April 19, 2013, 09:26:15 AM
nice..1
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Miru jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2013, 05:59:03 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on April 19, 2013, 02:18:41 PM
Ghazlon man pata hoon apni zindagi ki dastaan yun main kay,
Ehsaas hota hai kay iss bhool bulaiya se guzarta akela nahin hoon main..
very very touchy lines.
Bahut badhiya rahim bhai



Bahaut bahaut shukriya jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2013, 05:59:41 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on April 19, 2013, 07:21:26 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut khoob. dheron daad.
Bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2013, 06:06:02 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 19, 2013, 07:55:58 PM
bahut khoob
Shukriya shukriya Saini jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: April 22, 2013, 06:09:19 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on April 19, 2013, 10:45:13 PM
khubsoorat ihsaasat gehre jazbaat ,nasri andaz
bohat c daad,.........


Laiba jee, Bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2013, 03:51:38 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 20, 2013, 02:53:41 AM
Rahim Sahaab Aadaab..!


Janab arsa beet jaata hai aik kalaam se dusri kalaam post karne meiN.. Huh?
KahaaN hai aajkal aap dikhayi nahi dete.. ?


Khair Allaah khair farmaaye.. Bade hi umdaa ahsaas ko lafz diye haiN janab aur behad khoob lafz diye haiN... Usual Smile
Samandar ki gehrai meiN jhaaNkna toH bahut aasaaN hota hai par gehraai meiN utar jana bahut mushkil aap gehraai meiN utarne waaloN meiN se haiN.. Usual Smile

humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye janab..
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Parwaaz Sahab,
Apka comment pad kar hamesha hi dil bahaut khush hojata hai..
Aur Allah kare kay main zada likhoun aur..
Apne bahaut bada compliment diya hai..Means a lot..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: April 27, 2013, 02:15:48 AM »
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RAHIM  JEE ,  AAPNE  YE  RACHANA  BAHUT  KHOOBSURAT  AUR  ZINDA   EHSAASON   KO  PIRO  KAR  LIKHI  HAI , DHERON  DAAD  APKO .....   
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