akhri khat

by Neharika on December 19, 2008, 01:57:56 PM
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Woh bhi shayad ro pade veeraan kagaz dekh kar

maine use aakhiri khat mein likha kuchh bhi nahin
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2008, 02:01:46 PM »
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Quote from: Neharika on December 19, 2008, 01:57:56 PM
Woh bhi shayad ro pade veeraan kagaz dekh kar

maine use aakhiri khat mein likha kuchh bhi nahin
 not mine

Jisne Bhi Likha hai ye,.
Bohat Hi Achcha Likha Hai,.

Thank U Neharika Ji For Sharing It,m.
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2008, 07:19:24 PM »
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Nice one Neha

Par yeh kaisi na insaafi hai
Aakhri khat hai par khali hai
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2008, 07:38:40 PM »
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good sharing neharika ji.

Is khat ko kaise keh du main veraan,
chulbuli thee woh,kabhi nahi bezubaan,
do aansu us khat pur aaj bhee jhalkate hein,
uskey deedar ko aaj bhee har ghari taraste hein.

majbooriyon ko bewafaai ka naam du,meri fitrat nahi
pehchaanta hu paak mohhabaat,beshuk meri kismat nahi
ungliyaan uthaane do zamaane ko,nahi gila iska karna
tere chahne waale ko behka de koi,aisi meri tabiyat nahi.
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2008, 07:45:25 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 07:38:40 PM
good sharing neharika ji.

Is khat ko kaise keh du main veraan,
chulbuli thee woh,kabhi nahi bezubaan,
do aansu us khat pur aaj bhee jhalkate hein,
uskey deedar ko aaj bhee har ghari taraste hein.

majbooriyon ko bewafaai ka naam du,meri fitrat nahi
pehchaanta hu paak mohhabaat,beshuk meri kismat nahi
ungliyaan uthaane do zamaane ko,nahi gila iska karna
tere chahne waale ko behka de koi,aisi meri tabiyat nahi.


 Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah, kaya baat hai, ek ek line vishwaas aor pyar ki majbooti ko jhalkaati hui.. bahoot khoob Prateek ji... hamesha ki tarah bahoot he achi rachna ko anjaam diya hai apne... Good work
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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2008, 07:47:25 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 07:38:40 PM
good sharing neharika ji.

Is khat ko kaise keh du main veraan,
chulbuli thee woh,kabhi nahi bezubaan,
do aansu us khat pur aaj bhee jhalkate hein,
uskey deedar ko aaj bhee har ghari taraste hein.

majbooriyon ko bewafaai ka naam du,meri fitrat nahi
pehchaanta hu paak mohhabaat,beshuk meri kismat nahi
ungliyaan uthaane do zamaane ko,nahi gila iska karna
tere chahne waale ko behka de koi,aisi meri tabiyat nahi.




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Nice one Prateek Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2008, 03:53:12 AM »
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zaroori nahi jazabaato ke zahir ke liye khat ka hi sahaara liya jaye
kabhi kabhi khamosiyan bi bahut kuch zahir kardeti hai.....
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2008, 05:54:21 AM »
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Sahi kaha Fairy Ji aap ne

Jo bolna nahi chhate woh khat ka sahara lete hain
Jo khamosh rehte hain woh ankhiyon se ishara karte hain
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2008, 08:38:49 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 19, 2008, 07:45:25 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah, kaya baat hai, ek ek line vishwaas aor pyar ki majbooti ko jhalkaati hui.. bahoot khoob Prateek ji... hamesha ki tarah bahoot he achi rachna ko anjaam diya hai apne... Good work

shukriyaa pooja ji,aapne pasand kiya.
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2008, 08:41:05 AM »
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saraahna ke liye,shukriya,rajesh ji.
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2008, 09:32:12 AM »
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Quote from: Neharika on December 19, 2008, 01:57:56 PM
Woh bhi shayad ro pade veeraan kagaz dekh kar

maine use aakhiri khat mein likha kuchh bhi nahin
 not mine

Beautiful Sharing Neharika Ji..  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2008, 09:35:29 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 07:38:40 PM
good sharing neharika ji.

Is khat ko kaise keh du main veraan,
chulbuli thee woh,kabhi nahi bezubaan,
do aansu us khat pur aaj bhee jhalkate hein,
uskey deedar ko aaj bhee har ghari taraste hein.

majbooriyon ko bewafaai ka naam du,meri fitrat nahi
pehchaanta hu paak mohhabaat,beshuk meri kismat nahi
ungliyaan uthaane do zamaane ko,nahi gila iska karna
tere chahne waale ko behka de koi,aisi meri tabiyat nahi.





 Applause  Applause  Applause
Just Superb.. Just Wonderful... Just Perfect..
Bahut bahut bahut pyaari rachna Prateek Ji..
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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2008, 09:37:18 AM »
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Quote from: fairy2633 on December 20, 2008, 03:53:12 AM
zaroori nahi jazabaato ke zahir ke liye khat ka hi sahaara liya jaye
kabhi kabhi khamosiyan bi bahut kuch zahir kardeti hai.....

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 20, 2008, 05:54:21 AM
Sahi kaha Fairy Ji aap ne

Jo bolna nahi chhate woh khat ka sahara lete hain
Jo khamosh rehte hain woh ankhiyon se ishara karte hain

Good One Fairy Ji.. and Nice Reply Rajesh Ji..
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«Reply #13 on: December 20, 2008, 09:50:39 AM »
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Quote from: Neharika on December 19, 2008, 01:57:56 PM
Woh bhi shayad ro pade veeraan kagaz dekh kar

maine use aakhiri khat mein likha kuchh bhi nahin
 not mine
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 19, 2008, 07:19:24 PM
Nice one Neha

Par yeh kaisi na insaafi hai
Aakhri khat hai par khali hai
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 07:38:40 PM
good sharing neharika ji.

Is khat ko kaise keh du main veraan,
chulbuli thee woh,kabhi nahi bezubaan,
do aansu us khat pur aaj bhee jhalkate hein,
uskey deedar ko aaj bhee har ghari taraste hein.

majbooriyon ko bewafaai ka naam du,meri fitrat nahi
pehchaanta hu paak mohhabaat,beshuk meri kismat nahi
ungliyaan uthaane do zamaane ko,nahi gila iska karna
tere chahne waale ko behka de koi,aisi meri tabiyat nahi.




Quote from: fairy2633 on December 20, 2008, 03:53:12 AM
zaroori nahi jazabaato ke zahir ke liye khat ka hi sahaara liya jaye
kabhi kabhi khamosiyan bi bahut kuch zahir kardeti hai.....
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 20, 2008, 05:54:21 AM
Sahi kaha Fairy Ji aap ne

Jo bolna nahi chhate woh khat ka sahara lete hain
Jo khamosh rehte hain woh ankhiyon se ishara karte hain


wah, sab neh kamaal likha hai. bahut hi badiya

jasbir singh
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«Reply #14 on: December 20, 2008, 06:16:29 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 20, 2008, 09:50:39 AM

wah, sab neh kamaal likha hai. bahut hi badiya

jasbir singh

Thanks Jas Ji
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