akhri telephone

by faiiz_76 on May 09, 2008, 09:02:19 AM
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MUJHAY IK BAAT KEHNI HAI
MUJHAY TUMSAY NAHIN MILNA ,
TUMHARAY ZABT CHEHRAY KO
BOHAT VEERAN ANKHON KO

AJAB SI AGGA MAIN UTRAY
TUMHARAY THANDAY LAFZON KO
PURANI BATON KI KHUSHBOO NAHAYE,
SARAY JAZBON KO

MAIN KUCH KHATIR NAHIN LAATI ,
MUJHAY ABB ZINDAGI KERNAY MAIN YEH SAB IK RUKAWAT HAI ..

MERI IK ZEEST HAI JANAN
JAHAN MERI ZAROORAT HAI
MERAY KUCH APNAY HAIN JANAN
JINHAIN MERI ZAROORAT HAI
UNHAIN ISS DHIYAN KI DUNIYA MAIN AKSER
BHOOL JATI HOON
TOU PHIR TAKLEEF HOTI HAI !!!

MUJHAY TASLEEM HAI JANAN !
TUMHARI YAAD KAY PHAA,HAY
MERAY SAB ZAKHM DHAKTAY HAIN
MUJHAY TUM ARCH DETAY HO ,
MUJHAY UJAAL DETAY HO
MAGAR TAQSEEM KA YEH DERD JANAN
BAS SAY BAHIR HAI
ISSAY ABB SEH NAHIN SAKTI
TOU YEH ANJAAM HAI JANAN
BASS ABB TUM SAY NAHIN MILNA ,
NAHIN MILNA
NAHIN MILNA !!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2008, 09:53:27 AM »
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Even though, My Urdu is quite weak... Still, I feel short of words to tell, how much I like this post...
In this short span of time, I read it at-least 10 times... but still wanting to read it again... icon_smile

This is really worth reading again and again.. Excellent work Faiiz.. Applause


Do Keep Writing..
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2008, 05:20:47 PM »
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Agree with Mahiya... jazbaato ki ek aise layer hai ek ke baad.. bahoot khoob... bahoot he dil ki gahario se likhi gai hai yah kavita.. Good work!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2008, 05:26:56 AM »
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very nice but title...?
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2008, 05:35:18 AM »
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dost aap bahut hi sandar likhate ho
"keep it up"
hum dekha kiye tanha khamosh nigaho se ye
khak khwawo ki udti jo fijao se
chand motio ke badle lute samandarbaithe hai kinare pe hum uljhe hisabo me
:-raj angel11 life is like an ice cream enjoy it before it melt
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2008, 06:52:15 PM »
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thanks my dear .........all .was away for some days nd with ur appreciation ll try to share more ...thanks a lot again
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«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2008, 08:15:52 PM »
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I missed it earlier...Beautiful work Faiiz Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: July 01, 2008, 08:19:16 PM »
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thanks celmira...
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