~Alag jahan~ by Rahim:Miscellaneous Shayri

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Hum main se saab shayad kahin na kahin aisi duniya ya jahan ki tamanna rakhte hai jo perfect ho..Jisme dukh na ho, atang na ho.. Aj ek session attend kiya maine jisme ek imaginative time diya gaya tha..Main aisi ek duniya ki imagination kar baitha jahan sirf khushian aur shanti ho..Pata nahin kyun, mujhe woh duniya pasand nahin ayi..Mera matlab wahan rehna pasand nahin aya..Mager yeh duniya se woh duniya tak kay safar ko lavzon main utara hai..
Jo dil ne mehsoos kiya hai, wohi likh raha hoon..

Hawa main ter kar; andhere se guzra hoon main,
Kuch aise ek nayi duniya main poncha hoon main…

Bhooke ko roti khiladi ho jaise kisi ne; yun laga mujhe,
Jab andheron se roshni main aya hoon main…

Ek shant nadi ne mujhe apna ehsaas mehsoos karate hue kaha,
“Teri tarha ‘Khamosh’ ek tanha talabgar si pyaasi jheel hoon main…”

Ek qatra khoon nahin beh raha tha; sirf jashn hi jashn tha,
Yeh dekh pehli baar rooh se muskuraya hoon main…

Ek ajeeb ehsaas hua mujhe ek aisa bhi jahan dekh kar ‘Khamosh’,
Adhure chubte ehsaason se bhari duniya main jo rehta hoon main…

Mushkilon ki itni aadat hogayi hai kay reh nahin paya wahan main,
Ek dukh kay saath; hawa main ter kar aj yahin laut aya hoon main…

~Rahim~


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2010, 04:11:56 PM »

bht hi khubsurat ehsaas hua aapki poem padhke...rahim ji...


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2010, 06:27:57 PM »

Shukriya Anamika di..!


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2010, 01:21:28 PM »


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2010, 02:30:18 PM »

nice poem Rahim-ji........kaisa laga ye aapka naya alag jahan...... Applause


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2010, 04:11:20 PM »

Shukriya Thinkhattk jee aur Koyal di..

Koyal di, acha tha mager yeh duniya main launte ko jee chah raha tha..!


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2010, 04:46:14 PM »

Wahin reh jaate tou hum sab aapko bahut miss karte......

Quote from: -Rahim- on August 03, 2010, 04:11:20 PM

Shukriya Thinkhattk jee aur Koyal di..

Koyal di, acha tha mager yeh duniya main launte ko jee chah raha tha..!


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2010, 04:47:56 PM »

very beautifully written rahim ji.. wah

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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: August 03, 2010, 04:49:41 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 03, 2010, 04:46:14 PM

Wahin reh jaate tou hum sab aapko bahut miss karte......

Chalo mujhe yeh tasali hogayi kay ager main kahin gaya toh koi miss karega...!


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: August 03, 2010, 04:50:15 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 03, 2010, 04:47:56 PM

very beautifully written rahim ji.. wah

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Shukriya Jasbir jee..!


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: August 03, 2010, 10:09:06 PM »

Bahut khoob Rahim bhai... bahut khoob...!!!


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2010, 06:45:50 AM »

"Mushkilo Ki Itni Aadat Ho Gayi He Ke Reh Naa Paya Waha Main"

Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Aapne Bahut Khoobsurti se Apni Soch Ko Apne Lafzon mein Utaara..Vaakai Yeh Padhkar Aisa Mehsoos Hota hai Ke Ab Hum Inn Sab ki Aadat Si Ho gayi hai..


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Re: ~Alag jahan~ by Rahim

«Reply #12 on: August 04, 2010, 01:54:21 PM »

Kapil dost aur Khwaish jee..bahaut bahaut shukriya ap dono ka...

Haan Khwaish jee, insaan jiss cheez ko pehle kosta hai, baad main ussi cheez ki aadat laga bait'ta hai...!


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