"" ALFAAZ ""

by nirala on February 24, 2011, 08:12:24 AM
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na hote Alfaaz to kya hota
nazron se hi kitna byan hota

khamoshi se nazren milaate
koi afsaana kahan hota

nazron se hoti shuruat hai
Alfaazon se ho jaati mulakaat hai

khaamosh jhuki nazron ke fasaane hazaar
bin Alfaazon ke yara he sb bekaar

khushya or gmo me dubi Safar E Zindagi
bin Alfaaz nahi aasan ye zindagi

sambhal kar kholte juban yha kuch log yaara
behisaab sholey bhi barsaate hain Alfaaz

nazron se ghayal ho gar koi
dard fir jubaan se batlate hain alfaaz
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2011, 03:15:29 PM »
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kya kahne nirala ji....
bada accha likha hi aapne...
bas last me thodi si rhythm bigad gayi....
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2011, 03:25:20 PM »
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kuch na hota jo alfaaz na hota
har sawal ka jabwa raaj hi hota

waah nirala ji.....mast mast post he ji.........

sabse mast baat apki theme he dear.........ek dum track se hatkar.......u know aap aur anamika ji dono ese member ho jo track se hatkar theme late he aur wo hi dil chura le jati he.....

bahot koob dear wonderful post......
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2011, 03:51:14 PM »
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behad sukriya Manzil sahiba--
rahi baat rythm ki to ya wo kharaab he coz it was nt my last line--
Matrix yaara--aap bhi kamaal karte hain--Poetic Petrol Kasak ji ke saath Nir ko compare krte hain--kahan wo lajawaab or kahan me tootela footela likhnewala--
aapka bhot thaku hai ji.
aapdono ka behad se b jada thanku
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sahiba ne jhukai thi nazren kuch yun
    band jubaan se bas budbudate hi rah gaye Alfaaz !!
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thanx dears be happy alvez kabhi na khana Nonvez Usual Smile
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