andaaz badal liye humne,,,jeet jainam saini

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zindagi zeene ke sare andaaz badal liye humne,
kab tab gam  sahte  jazbaat  badal liye humne,

dastaan e muhabbat  kisii  koh naa kahe kabhi,
jubaan par naa aajaye alfaaz badal liye humne,

thokarai,n naa mile fir uske shahar main hume,
doraahe par jaakar yuh raah  badal liye humne,

dil e figaar thaa fir bhee aah naa kar  paaye,
jisne pucha zakhmo,n ka raaz badal liye humne,

woh be vafaa thi kaise zamane koh kahtaa jeet,
khud sah kar uske kiye zabah badal liye humne,



figaar---ghayal
zabah---apraadh

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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2015, 10:41:28 AM »
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zindagi zeene ke sare andaaz badal liye humne,
kab tab gam  sahte  jazbaat  badal liye humne,

dastaan e muhabbat  kisii  koh naa kahe kabhi,
jubaan par naa aajaye alfaaz badal liye humne,

thokarai,n naa lage fir uski shahar main hume,
doraahe par jaakar kae raah  badal liye humne,

dil e figaar thaa fir bhee aah naa kar  paaye,
jisne pucha zakhmo,n ka raaz badal liye humne,

woh be vafaa thi kaise zamane koh kahtaa jeet,
khud sah kar uske kiye zabah badal liye humne,



figaar---ghayal
zabah---apraadh


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