*Andaaz ban gaya*

by Rajesh Harish on January 19, 2009, 02:35:29 AM
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Mehfil mein hasna to hamara mijaaz ban gaya
Tanhai mein rona ek raaz ban gaya
Dil ke dard ko chehre se zahir na hone diya
Yahi zindagi ke jeene ka  andaaz ban gaya
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2009, 02:54:11 AM »
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Yeh bi accha hai.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2009, 02:57:07 AM »
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Thanks Roja JI
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2009, 11:03:42 AM »
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kya baat hai ...rajesh-hareshji....

mehfil mein mera majaak udaana,usko majaa ya gaya,
tanhai mein bahetkar rone ki,mae toh sazaa pa gaya.
dil mein dard tha,chehere se hastha raha,
uske pyaar ke khatir,kya kya saheta raha.





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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2009, 11:30:20 AM »
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Nice one harish ji
N cara Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2009, 03:50:35 PM »
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Mehfil mein hasna to hamara mijaaz ban gaya
Tanhai mein rona ek raaz ban gaya
Dil ke dard ko chehre se zahir na hone diya
Yahi zindagi ke jeene ka  andaaz ban gaya

Yeh tou aap ne mere moohn ki baat keh di,lovely poetry.asghr Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2009, 04:25:12 PM »
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Mehfil mein hasna to hamara mijaaz ban gaya
Tanhai mein rona ek raaz ban gaya
Dil ke dard ko chehre se zahir na hone diya
Yahi zindagi ke jeene ka  andaaz ban gaya


wah wah wah wah!!!sachi main mere dil ki bhi baat kehdi apne Rajesh jee...bahaut acha likha hai apne...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2009, 11:20:41 PM »
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kya baat hai ...rajesh-hareshji....

mehfil mein mera majaak udaana,usko majaa ya gaya,
tanhai mein bahetkar rone ki,mae toh sazaa pa gaya.
dil mein dard tha,chehere se hastha raha,
uske pyaar ke khatir,kya kya saheta raha.

Thanks Cara and nice lines
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2009, 11:22:02 PM »
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Thanks Salma Ji, Asghr Ji and Deadheart Ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2009, 11:28:48 PM »
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nice work Rajesh ji and Cara
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2009, 11:32:09 PM »
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Thanks for the compliments Pooja Ji
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