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by kameeney on September 28, 2010, 02:24:06 PM
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                     zindagi mein abb ghutan si hone lagi,
                     aarzu aahen bhar-bhar ke rone lagi,

                     iss dil-e- nadaan ko hum  samjhain kaise,
                     mohabbat abb yahan apna waqaar khone lagi,

                     hain khush haal sabhi tere shahar mein lakin,
                     gharibi khushion ka bojh dekho dhone lagi,

                     ujaala raahat ka dikhai deta nahin aaj,
                     makhmali shaam bhi gum-sum ho sone lagi,

                     kho diya thaa kameeney ne muddaton pahle tujhko,
                     tujhe paane ki phir se joostjoo hone lagi...!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: September 28, 2010, 04:45:29 PM »
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wowwww k ji...mastam likha hai aapne ...aate hi dusri post aapki...superbbbb.....sply last stanza bht hi mast hai ji....

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mujhe pane ki khatir na ajne kya kya kiya tune
fir paakar kyun mujhe yunhijane diya tune

main mil gai thi shayad tujhe badi hi aasani se
isily mujhe sambhal k na rakha tune...
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2011, 10:34:54 AM »
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                     zindagi mein abb ghutan si hone lagi,
                     aarzu aahen bhar-bhar ke rone lagi,

                     iss dil-e- nadaan ko hum  samjhain kaise,
                     mohabbat abb yahan apna waqaar khone lagi,

                     hain khush haal sabhi tere shahar mein lakin,
                     gharibi khushion ka bojh dekho dhone lagi,

                     ujaala raahat ka dikhai deta nahin aaj,
                     makhmali shaam bhi gum-sum ho sone lagi,

                     kho diya thaa kameeney ne muddaton pahle tujhko,
                     tujhe paane ki phir se joostjoo hone lagi...!!!!

waah janaab kya khoob likha hai
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2011, 08:38:57 AM »
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                     zindagi mein abb ghutan si hone lagi,
                     aarzu aahen bhar-bhar ke rone lagi,

                     iss dil-e- nadaan ko hum  samjhain kaise,
                     mohabbat abb yahan apna waqaar khone lagi,

                     hain khush haal sabhi tere shahar mein lakin,
                     gharibi khushion ka bojh dekho dhone lagi,

                     ujaala raahat ka dikhai deta nahin aaj,
                     makhmali shaam bhi gum-sum ho sone lagi,

                     kho diya thaa kameeney ne muddaton pahle tujhko,
                     tujhe paane ki phir se joostjoo hone lagi...!!!!


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