**Apna hi leta** by Rahim

by dead heart on September 16, 2009, 07:14:48 PM
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Do shaer kya likh liye logon ne toh tujhe shayar ka darja de dia Rahim,
Kash koi iss shayar ki tanhai mehsoos kar apna hi leta...
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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2009, 02:27:41 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Rahim ji doh lines mein bahut kuch kahe diya aapne.beautiful lines. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2009, 10:47:25 AM »
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Indeed its one of my fav 2-liners that I have written...Thank you for always supporting me here at yoindia Madhu di...
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2009, 12:17:27 PM »
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Nice one Rahim
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2009, 07:31:49 PM »
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Shukriya Talat di...
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2009, 08:43:49 PM »
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Wow ek aur bhai yo par. hello2 hello2 hello2 love4
God bless you pyare bhaiya.
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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2009, 04:13:18 AM »
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God bless you too di...
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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2009, 05:13:49 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on September 16, 2009, 07:14:48 PM
Do shaer kya likh liye logon ne toh tujhe shayar ka darja de dia Rahim,
Kash koi iss shayar ki tanhai mehsoos kar apna hi leta...
kya baat hai    rahim ji....

DO SHAER KYA LIKHE,LOGON NE TOH TUJHE SHAYAR KA DARJA DE DIA "RAHIM"
ASAL BAAT TOH YEH HAI,JISKE LIYE LIKHE,KYA USEY ASAR KAR GAYA.
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«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2009, 05:23:27 AM »
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wao rahim sahab nicE one....
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2009, 08:15:23 AM »
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Bahoot acche Rahim ji.....dil ko chu gayi aapki ye do lines
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2009, 08:55:58 AM »
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Rahimji k dohe padhte they hum school mai....ab shaer padhne ko mil rahe hain.. Winking

Shaer mai dum tha tere,shayer tujhe maan liya
Dard likha tha tune itna,Logo ka dil chhoo liya
Tanhai ka tanik bhi jikra n tha tere shaer mai
Warna tanha tou sabhi they,tujhe apna he leta koi

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 16, 2009, 07:14:48 PM
Do shaer kya likh liye logon ne toh tujhe shayar ka darja de dia Rahim,
Kash koi iss shayar ki tanhai mehsoos kar apna hi leta...
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2009, 04:41:11 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bro !
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2009, 07:01:23 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Cara ji n Koyal ji,beautiful lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2009, 07:05:50 PM »
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Quote from: cara on September 18, 2009, 05:13:49 AM
kya baat hai    rahim ji....

DO SHAER KYA LIKHE,LOGON NE TOH TUJHE SHAYAR KA DARJA DE DIA "RAHIM"
ASAL BAAT TOH YEH HAI,JISKE LIYE LIKHE,KYA USEY ASAR KAR GAYA.
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Cara jee...Aur bahaut sahi baat kahi ke kya uss pe asar kar gaya...Do shaer yaad agaye apki lines padkar...


Haseeno se haseen banke gunaah kiya,
Auron ko to tikh humko bhi tabah kiya,
Pesh kiya jab ghazlon main unki bewaffai ko,
Auron ne to tikh unhone bhi sirf wah wah hi kiya...


Woh kya samajta jazbaton ko tere shaeron main Rahim,
Jo lavz-e-mohobat janta hai bas mohobat karna nahin...

Quote from: fairykhan on September 18, 2009, 05:23:27 AM
wao rahim sahab nicE one....
Quote from: Nikhaar on September 18, 2009, 08:15:23 AM
Bahoot acche Rahim ji.....dil ko chu gayi aapki ye do lines
 Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: Sophi on September 19, 2009, 04:41:11 PM
Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bro !
Shukriya Divya di, Nikhaar jee aur Fairykhan jee..

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 18, 2009, 08:55:58 AM
Rahimji k dohe padhte they hum school mai....ab shaer padhne ko mil rahe hain.. Winking

Shaer mai dum tha tere,shayer tujhe maan liya
Dard likha tha tune itna,Logo ka dil chhoo liya
Tanhai ka tanik bhi jikra n tha tere shaer mai
Warna tanha tou sabhi they,tujhe apna he leta koi

Bas yunhi shaer padte rahiye aur nawazte rahiye...Apne bahaut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2009, 07:19:19 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim Bahi.Very Nice...
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